FF - SARFAROSH-WARRIORS OF THE NATION [PART 9 / PG. 90]

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Hi Guys I am starting a new FF on a different topic life of these solders it will have all the ETF characters well I just had a thought & my partner in crime is RIMI thanks a lot dear 🤗 for your wonderful suggestion hope I do justice to this 🤪 well I dedicate this to all those who guard our country 😊😊😊 I will post the parts soon guys so please give ur feedback on CS n prologue.Hope u all will support us & will like the concept 😊




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SARFAROSH - WARRIORS OF THE NATION

PROLOGUE: Strength of the Nation lies in the security of the people. The defense has special powers to control any kind of disaster in the nation they need to be on duty 24 by 7 to protect the nation from any kind of attacks weather they are internal or external. Their presence give a kind of confidence to the people that they are secure & nothing will happen to them till the time they are with them. Defense people wow to serve nation until their last breath with all their might they at times had to sacrifice many things for serving their nation in the true sense at times family, personal happiness, & much more at times their life too. Their duty does not end at particular point but still they serve their nation happily with all the pride & honor. This story is a salute to all the people who do this kind of service for their country so that we all can feel protected & secured every time so let's peep into the life of these dedicated officers through this story & have look at their internal emotions, life style, aspirations not as a soldier but as a normal human being who wants to live his or her life fully. Hope you all will like it

Watan ki ifazat ka dil main leke josh,

paida hote hai is mitti se Sarfarosh

Shaeedo ne kiya khud ko jispar nisaar,

us watan ki aabroo ko kiya kuch ne daagdaar

Un gaddaro ko ab karne zameen dooz ,

paida hote hai is mitti se sarfarosh

Gar watan mushkil main ho to ,jaan ki parwaah nahin

Thaam le inke kadan kissi main ye hausla nahin

Saamne ho shamsheer ya fir maut ka aagosh,

paida hote hai is miiti se sarfarosh

CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore: A tough cop full fill all his duties towards his nation & family loves his job a sweet natured person by heart loves his Duty always comes first for him drill commander of Mahabaleshwar Police Academy


ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte : A hot headed cop never believes going by law Loves his ETF family a lot an emotional & sensitive person. He is chief of ETF. Loves his wife Riya a lot


Shreekant sen : Gadget freak of ETF and an intelligent Technical expert a fun loving guy.


Chandrakant Patil : Commando of ETF huge size body but a beautiful and caring heart person .


Riya Arjun Rawte: A fun loving girl loves to explore things on her own creative & intelligent & a very strong girl she does not tolerate any new sense but is sensitive person wife of arjun


Liza D cruz: She is forensic expert of ETF a fun loving girl with a bubbly nature. She makes everyone happy around & feels happy with them.


Aisha Kapoor : A beauty with brains a lady with a strong mental strength. She loves her father & she is admired by all for her mental strength & straight attitude. Ammunition expert of Mahabelashwar Police Academy


Brigadier Amar Kapoor: Father of Aisha a retired Brigadier from Indian Army & lost his wife early but loves his daughter & is very bright personality


Pratap Dhamsingh Rathore & Dhara dhamsingh Rathore: Father & mother of Sameer Pratap is dean of Mahabelashwar Police Academy & Dhara is a house wife


Abhimanyu Adhikari & saakshi adhikai: friends of sameer both work as faculty members of Mahabelashwar Police Academy saakshi is a doctor & abhimanyu teaches strategy & communication.


Simran Bhargav: physical instructor of Mahabelashwar Police Academy a complete pleasing personality.


I will add more characters if required as the story progresses. 😊


So how was it hope u all like it wait for story to unfold 😊



Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1
PART 1----PAGE 7
PART 2----PAGE 19
PART 3----PAGE 29
PART 4----PAGE 39
PART 5----PAGE 50
PART 6----PAGE 60
PART 7----PAGE 71
PART 8----PAGE 82
PART 9----PAGE 90





Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE : Guys I will update this FF twice or thrice in a week depending upon my work & ur response too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If u guys liked it I will surely update by end of this week 😊 aur iska sarfarosh movie se koi lena dena nahin ha 😆😆😆




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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice cs dr
plz cnt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY DEAR CONT THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...
awesome cs and prologue..
very unique concept...
lovely...
continue sooonish..
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept and awesome prologue dear..continue soon..😊
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Awesome concept
Its Quite unique
Loved it
waiting for it eagerly
Continue soon

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