Dostana With Double Dhamaal!!!--a ts by me and aastha!(last part/pg16)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Before anything..assalaam alaikum!!😃
now after my sharafat..😳..thodi besharmi ho jaaye!!
so...mike testing 123...
Hi all!! Me and aastha(craziness05) decided to write an ff...on d couples of BI!!! Not ZaYa!!😉
v discussed dis together..she gave me d storyline...n i edited...a lott..sry aastha!😛n i made so many changes..don kill me..part two is very differnt!!
so she doesnt know d story after edition...dis is a surprise for u aastha!!😳 Hope u like it!!
AND DIS HAS 4-5..
here it is!-
AN ff--Dostana Wid Double Dhamaal!!🤣
Rizwan went out for three four days becoz of work and zain was very sad..
He was missing him like hell.Aliya tried to cheer up zain but she was not successful.
Aliya: what happen zain why are u so sad??
Zain: u will not understand my feelings..
Aliya: are zain par bolo to sahi...
aliya was cutted by nafisa
Nafisa: Zain look rizwan came back. zain had a big smile on his face.
Zain was thinking-Rizwan!! he is back!! My hunk,jaanu,dream man..me aa raha hu!!
Zain was running in slow motion..
(BG-saajan ji ghar aaye..saajan ji ghar aaye
zain kyu bhage..zain kyu bhage!!)
He was about to hug him but ayat came..n hugged Rizwan...
Rizan became very happy. But zain made a puppy face and was about to cry...
Bg music-kya hua tera wada wo kasam wo irada..
Zain became very angry and went away from there...in slow motio
(BG-jo bheji thi dua..vo jaaake bawdi ..se u takraa gayi ki aa gay hai laut k sadaa!!)
aliya: are zain ko kya hua??
Rizwan: ummm.. bhabhi wait let me see what happened...
rizwan went to zain's room.
Zain sitting on couch..wid a photo of RizAin..
(BG-tujhe yaad na meri aayi..kisise ab kya kehna!!)
Rizwan: what happened zain are u not happy to see me??
Zain: I am but u were only busy hugging that ayat again and again...
Rizwan: are zain but I love her.
Zain: achaa u love her aur humare pyaar ka kya hua?? humari promises?? humari pyaar ki nishani??
rizwan is shocked..:konsi pyaar ki nishani??
Zain: dekha tum ye bhi bhul gaye..Cheatercock rizwan!
Zain was crying...
Zain: dekha tum ye bhi bhul gaye humare pyaar ki nishani. and showed him a photograph where rizwan and zain were kissing one doll...
Doll ka naam barkat!!
Zain: tum bhul gaye na it was the gift u gave me on our first date and it was our pyaar ki nishaani..
Tum hamaare pyaar ki barkat ko bhool gaye??
humari first date ki nishaani...hamaare beintehaa mohabbat ka signature saboot!!
Zain: But no problem nothing happens.. agar mera pyaar does not remembers anything...there is no use to leave I am going to die in bawadi..agar bachana hoga toh aa jaana... aur apne sweet se accent me bolna "i luv u zain"..phir mujhe hug karna..i vil forgive u n not suicide...
lekin agar aaj mujhe kuch hua to uske zimmedaar sirf tum hoge rizwan..sirf tum
N den zain runs away to bawdi in slow motion..
Zain waiting in d bawdi..
zain was thinking why this rizwan is not coming to save me lagta hai now I have to surely jump in this bawadi!!
and there Rizwan was thinking and he got flashbacks of their first kiss first I love first pyaar ki nishani...
Rizwan was thinking abt how zain used to make him eat jamal gota wid his hands..n Rizwan realised his mistake!!
Rizwan was running in slow motion and bg music hum tere bina ab reh nhi sakte...!!
Rizwan: no zain u can't die...zain k bina rizwan ka iss duniya me koi wujood nahi!!!
Zain-u dont love me anymore.u love ayat!!.To ab is rishte ka kya faayda rizwan??
n gets ready to jump!!

So how was it???..Boring??
Bakwaas??..or good?😃
Shud i continue...cuz next one has surprises!!!
@aastha--a big surprise for u too!!😉
anyways..let me know ur opinion...😃😃
n d 50%credit to aastha also plz!!😃

-Shiza😛


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-Sajdey- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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love the element of masti you guys have added. it's fantastic!👏 update soon. brilliant job lovlies
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sajdey-

love the element of masti you guys have added. it's fantastic!👏 update soon. brilliant job lovlies

sacchi?? thnk u!!😃🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

sacchi?? thnk u!!😃🤗

haha yes😉 you deserve it guys! im sure rest would love it too. Waiting for the update now. Do PM me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sajdey-

haha yes😉 you deserve it guys! im sure rest would love it too. Waiting for the update now. Do PM me😊

den u vil love part 2!!🤣🤣
n yes..i vil pm you!!thnk u again..vil update tonight or tomorrow morning..!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear this is the most unique ff I have ever read! 😆 😆
Really nice. Loved it!
Do continue soon and congratz on your new ff.
Really love the concept. 😆 Do continue soon.
And if u send PM's... PM ME PLZZZ!!!!!
Continue soon and awesome start! 👏
Take care.

Lots of love,
-Tanya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣 🤣 damn funny dear... do continue.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Dear this is the most unique ff I have ever read! 😆 😆
Really nice. Loved it!
Do continue soon and congratz on your new ff.
Really love the concept. 😆 Do continue soon.
And if u send PM's... PM ME PLZZZ!!!!!
Continue soon and awesome start! 👏
Take care.

Lots of love,
-Tanya.

hayy!! thnk u!! yes i vil pm u!!😃😃😃
n d second part has many surprises!!..plus it is bigger dan part 1!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet0910

🤣 🤣 damn funny dear... do continue.. 👍🏼

okey dokey!! n thnk u!!!😳😳
vil continue soon!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dayan this was nice aur 2nd part ki story jarur batana mujhe I was wating for ur update since morning but u updated it so late😆 aur sabko hamari dp dekh ke hi pata chal jayega that we love our RiZain so much🤣
Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago

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