I LOVE HIM TILL I DIE....

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys this poem is 1 of my best poem as I consider. It was dedicated to my 1st love who never became mine. Maybe it was an infatuation but I really liked him. I wrote this poem when he left 4 Delhi and I lost all kinds of contact with him. Class 7 of mine was full of his memories only.. Dn't know how 4 years passed but I still remember him. May be he is my 1st love and every1 knows 1st love no1 can forget. The tears that shed out 4 him was the base of this magical poem I wrote the night I came to know he left..
This poem I want 2 dedicate 4 Kalpu's love 4 Rags.. The purity and eternity exist in their love and Kalpi's love well its now fully proved..Hope u guys will njoy this poem...
I LOVE HIM TILL I DIE...
There is a boy sweet and kind,
Was never face so pleased my mind.
I did but see him passing by,
And yet I love him till I die.
His gesture,mo-tin and his smiles,
His wit, his voice my heart beguiles.
Beguiles my heart I know no why,
And yet I love him till I die.
Cupid his winged and doth range,
His country so my love doth change,
But change the earth, or the sky,
And yet I love him till I die...

If its childish am sry.. When I wrote this I was just a girl of 13.. Hope u guys liked it..
Give me feed backs..if u dn't like also😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh darling this is sweet loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful poem mimi... 👏👏👏👏👏... really sad dat u went thru dis.😭😭.. awsum poem😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is wonderful dear ...1st love is very precious and people who get that are very lucky ...
Always remember one thing my love had told me this ...

Set your love free and if it comes back to you it was always yours and if not then was never yours ...

I have married some one who loves me very much but was a friend for me .I am his world and I really now understand the meaning of the above line that he had said in college to me .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarushc

this is wonderful dear ...1st love is very precious and people who get that are very lucky ...

Always remember one thing my love had told me this ...

Set your love free and if it comes back to you it was always yours and if not then was never yours ...

I have married some one who loves me very much but was a friend for me .I am his world and I really now understand the meaning of the above line that he had said in college to me .


Oh!..😊 Nice ur Hubby got his love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA6702


beautiful poem mimi... 👏... really sad dat u went thru dis.😭😭.. awsum poem😳


Hey Jass Chill.. I am now focusing in my career as I am a very ambitious girl..and at my writing work.. Now I look at those memories with pleasure not with a sad face.. This is life..Ans always remember time is superior than anything.. And change is life..Time and change when they combine 1 knows the real meaning of life.. I am not like who says look at those memories which gives u pleasure but I am of that kind look all ur memories at 1 time u will find the profit part of ur bitter memories also.. Since a coin always has two faces😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimiunisha


Hey Jass Chill.. I am now focusing in my career as I am a very ambitious girl..and at my writing work.. Now I look at those memories with pleasure not with a sad face.. This is life..Ans always remember time is superior than anything.. And change is life..Time and change when they combine 1 knows the real meaning of life.. I am not like who says look at those memories which gives u pleasure but I am of that kind look all ur memories at 1 time u will find the profit part of ur bitter memories also.. Since a coin always has two faces😉



well said mimi... tu whi mimi hai na... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA6702



well said mimi... tu whi mimi hai na... 😆


Haa yehi asli Mimi hai..
Jiski soch gehri hai ..
Par baate.. U know naa..
After all am good with my philosophy though being a student of science😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mimi its amazing dear I truly loved it
U deserve this for this beautiful poem👍🏼👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: YashAranShaNak

Mimi its amazing dear I truly loved it

U deserve this for this beautiful poem👍🏼👏


Naina this poem is related with my memories of my 1st love so no appreciation 4 words.
These words were the mere emotions which was poured out on the white spotless paper...😊
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