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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys

This is just my imagination as to what happens once Raman and Ishita get into the lift. It's not been proof read or anything so sorry if any mistakes. Also its very short- as usual 😳

As she steps into the lift behind him, she is chuckling to herself as she recalls his words from just a few moments ago.

It is just the two of them in the lift, she turns to face him and he is looking at her intently. What is so funny' he probes her. Nothing' she says and she is about to look away when he takes a step towards her. She instinctively steps back which prompts him to take two strides towards her.

She is now stood against the mirrored wall of the lift. He is on his phone and every so often he looks up and is smirking at her. He is stood so close, its not that this is something new, but she feels like this is the first time he has come close to her. The scent of his after shave is so intoxicating she feels heady. She is doing her utmost to stay calm and collected, but his words have unleashed a thousand butterflies within her. She cant quite believe that he had the audacity to ask her if she was in love with him. She is thankful that she somehow managed to give him a semblance of an answer. Or did she? was she convincing enough? and who needed the convincing him or her.

He suddenly winches in pain, holding onto his right arm. She immediately places her hand on his. Raman kya hua, is everything ok?, let me look at your arm' he obliges and slouches over her, his left arm sloped across her shoulder and against the wall.

He cant help but smile when he sees the obvious concern on her face, her eyes seemingly communicating everything he wants to hear. But he is not satisfied. He wants to disarm her some more, he wants to bring her to the brink and reel her back in. The way she has does to him. How little she knows, or maybe she isn't really oblivious to it. Either way he needs some reassurance and right now this is the easiest way to achieve that.

She places her other hand on his forehead, and wipes away the few beads of sweat that betray his beating heart. Her touch sets off a rush of adrenalin through his body.

She lifts her hand again but he takes hold of it before she can touch his face, and thereby thwarting her plans.
" you are being awfully touchy feely today? Do you have something to tell me ?"He smirkingly says as he continues to hold her hand.

" Aap bhi na, I think the tension of the needle has done something to your brain" she retorts back.

" Oh acha, it's all in my head
Is it" he is laughingly saying this but she feels his grip on her hand tighten and she senses something else in his eyes.

"Raman, mujhe kuch samaj nahi araaha, what are you saying? She is doing her utmost to keep her tone even and neutral but he has her completely flustered.

He lets go of her hand and leans into the wall, his lips near her face, hovering by her right ear. She panics and closes her eyes. He moves in closer and she holds on for dear life when the lift abruptly comes to a stop.

"Ishita this is our floor, time to go "he whispers to her seductively. Before she has even fully opened her eyes he is stood outside the lift smiling at her innocently. She takes a deep breathe and begins to walk towards him, pondering his words once more.



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Nikki_Titli thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg finally an os from u..LOVED it UZ...u evoked SAME reactions in me as Ishita's..!! 😆

nw i DEMAND part 2 of this n make Raman MORE MORE FLIRTY...😆😉
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Uz ..this is awesome as always
and you ended at a wrong time 😡 I demand a part 2 and this time no breaking things in the middle 😛
Edited by sai14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uz.. This was beautiful,lovely... Kaash aisa kuch hame dekhne ko mile...n I want Part 2 ...it was so romantic... I wish cvs read ur os n use it anytime soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uzma, you are such a tease, yaar. 😡 I don't even mean length, I mean content!! I disapprove of leaving things midway, especially right when they're about to get good!! 😡 😈

You're a really good writer. I don't even mind your pieces being short, but just don't tease! If you do, then you HAVE to make them longer!

Really enjoyed this, Uzma!! I can see this happening, too, and me getting equally frustrated and annoyed at the show teasing. So in that regard, you did a bang on job at keeping it real. 😆 😉
Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! This was awesome stuff!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uz... You n mirrors 😆

BTW, this was TEASER of what to expect when Raman actually gets into that mode. I can see KP and DT enacting this scene sooo well... God save all of us when things like this really start happening on the show

well written hun. and good prediction of what could be going on in his mind. This was mid-way between the 2 Uz personalities i have read. and it was perfect too !!!👏

and i am not going to bother about commenting on the length of the post any more😡 if you promise to follow this one up with another update 😆
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely scene...a perfect continuation which the CVs ignored but we couldnt sleep without knowing what happened further inside the lift! ☺️😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Uz this was such a wonderful OS but I have one complaint this was way too short! Like come on write more girl I know you can do that... btw I noticed something we do have one thing in common - we are suckers for making Raman whisper things to Ishita not to mention the fact he loves to do a chance pe dance anytime, anyplace 😆😆 damn why cant the makers have one scene like that and damn I cant wait for their romance to began in an obvious way... it would be something alright.

So sorry for being late to edit this though, was caught up in making siggs last night and today with my own os 😳
Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...lovely OS!! Would love to read more!!😳

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