YuvReen TS I Miss You Last Part PG5 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was a very emotional story.
Too good.Loved the way you wrote it.Absolute tearjerker.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

Tears rolled down from me eyes after I read the last part...So beautifully potrayed the story didu...I really cried...I wish she wasn't in her last stage...I wish they would have patched up...suvreen sacrificed so much...it was really emotional...but death cant separate yuvreen...they'll always be there in each others' hearts inscripted forever and ever!


Thanks Sahas🤗
Glad you enjoyed it
thats right
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

This was a very emotional story.

Too good.Loved the way you wrote it.Absolute tearjerker.


Thanks Di🤗
Glad you enjoyed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey anam 🤗 I realized I read this last part and even told you on FB my thoughts and how it was sad but well written, eternal love story. But I hadn't made my comment here lol. The whole tale was really tragic, but it was equally beautiful. Great job. Do write more short stories when u can: )
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was very sad yaar , ganga jamuna bahgayi , yuvreen shud be together forever and i believe they will be in hearts
, adhura adhura laga yeh part , pura justice nahi hua , nice attempt i was hoping yuvreen will atleast get sm time with eachother , very sad ending , awesome written
want more short storys like this from u <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .S.i.m.r.a.n.

Hey anam 🤗 I realized I read this last part and even told you on FB my thoughts and how it was sad but well written, eternal love story. But I hadn't made my comment here lol. The whole tale was really tragic, but it was equally beautiful. Great job. Do write more short stories when u can: )


Thanks Simu🤗
Glad you enjoyed it
Yeah its ok no worries
Yes it was very tragic
I will do when I have more ideas😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: indradhanushs

it was very sad yaar , ganga jamuna bahgayi , yuvreen shud be together forever and i believe they will be in hearts
, adhura adhura laga yeh part , pura justice nahi hua , nice attempt i was hoping yuvreen will atleast get sm time with eachother , very sad ending , awesome written
want more short storys like this from u <3


Thanks Spruha🤗
Glad you enjoyed it
It was the ending part I purposely write it this way... I will keep ur comments in mind next time will write even better give more Yuvreen scenes
Yeah will write if I have any more ideas😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The following 11 member(s) liked the above post:

indradhanushs, LASmirti, SSimra, shweta6767, mizzle22, sujairohit, krupaa, Shivinian, JustMySelf, ShivinkiJas, .S.i.m.r.a.n.,
Thanks Everyone🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome di..
very emotional part and very beautifully written..
do write more di.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: minu_G

Awesome di..
very emotional part and very beautifully written..
do write more di.


Thanks Minu😃
Glad you liked it
I will do if I have more ideas

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