YuvReen TS I Miss You Last Part PG5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mizzle22

I did not see this coming..😭

Suvreen has cancer..that's why she left him..😲
Wonder what will happen now..
Continue soon..😊


I surprised u all what did u thought will happen? do share ur view
Next part tmrw😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JustMySelf

fabulous 👏

its a shame u dnt consider urself as a serious writer 😭


Thanks Jimu🤗
Glad you enjoyed it
Jimu its a hobby i write whenever i get chance
I applied for a creative writing internship havent had a reply yet from them
it will be a nice expereince
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JustMySelf

arrey yeh bimari kya sab ki favourite hain?

ekta kapoor to kdi to behna nw didu u also..all r writing on cancer 🤢😭
i dnt like cancer story 😭😭😭

n its tuf to imagine veer ji as puppa ji 😕

ok umm i guess it wd b an emotional ride right?bring it on 😆 🤗


Jimu I nevee wrote one ever on illnesses before so this is somethign different...i dont either buts it a concept wanted to write somethign emotional on Yuvreen... so agreed its tough to imagine but Yuvreen are older in here 25-26

thats right last part tmrw😆🤗 do give ur feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pushpa , i hate tears re , and you made me cry bar bar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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live your life till the end , aise jinese kya faida suvreen jab pal pal marna pade , agar tune yuvraj ko sach bata diya hota , to aaj tum donoke 5 saal aise barbad na hote , kash tune bata diya hota topper , kash
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and u knw what the best part was the yuvraj ruhi moments , i never imagined yuvraj as daddy but when i read this i was like aww , awesome yaar amazing , it shows the little kid brings some soothing happiness to his cold heart , ruhi makes him happy and lively , atleast there is smthing to live for , aww they r too cute , sho cute , i loved yuvraj as daddy and yeah m gonna make a story on yuvraj-suvreen and their married life with children
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome story di👏
loved both parts..
poor yuvreen😭
Yuvi's daughter😲, ok its a bit difficult to imagine yuvi as papa😆 but loved his bonding with Ruhanika its cute.😳
really amazing story di very well written.
cont soon..


Edited by minu_G - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amyyy diii 😭 😭 😔 😭
awesome update miss YUVREEN 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update ani! twist was really good. cant wait to read the next part. great job :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indradhanushs

live your life till the end , aise jinese kya faida suvreen jab pal pal marna pade , agar tune yuvraj ko sach bata diya hota , to aaj tum donoke 5 saal aise barbad na hote , kash tune bata diya hota topper , kash


You have point Spruha

But if she had told Yuvraj he would forget about his life and be with Suvreen he would be sad and upset when Suvi would eventually not be there it would be difficult for Yuvraj to live... so if he hates her he will move on in life easily


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