os- a journey from couch to bed

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hello friends ...my name is komal ...i thought of writing a story on ishra, this is my first attempt, apologies in advance if i make mistakes..let me start the story..here it goes
Just after the tiring day at clinic ishita comes back home and is waiting for raman , and suddenly she gets a call from ramn n he tells her he will be late today, so she thinks of cooking some punjabi food for him and waits for him to come home. Now its almost 12;00 am n raman enters n sees ishu sitting on sofa..here starts the conversation between them
I ;-aap aa gaye?
R; - tum soi nai abhi tak?
I ;ha , wo mein aapka wait kar rahi thi, aap fresh ho jaie, me khana garam kar deti hu..
R; waise baat kya h? aajkal hamesha tum mera wait karti ho😉(he tries to tease her)
I ; nahi aisi koi baat nai h, wo muje neend nai aa rahi thi bas isliye
now ishita arranges the food on the dinner table and ramn after freshing up comes thr and is surprised to see the food. ishita has made panneer tikka masala, dal fry, jeera rice all the punjabi food. ishita serves him and he starts eating it.
R ; ye sab tumne banaya h?
I ;haan , kyon acha nai bana hai kya? wo actually maine pehli baar banaya hai, aapko pasand na ho to main kuch aur bana du?
R ;kitne sawaal puchti ho? bina meri puri baat sune rajdhani express par chad jati ho, khana bohot tasty hai, muje acha laga n he gives a smile
ishita blushes and says thank u
R ; waise tumne kyon nahi khaya abhi tak? kaunse mohurat ka intezar kar rhai thi?
I ; wo main bhi aaj clinic se late aayi hu , emergency thi ...isliye
After finishing the dinner , they both go to their bedroom..ramn goes to the bathroom and ishita is preparing to sleep on the couch...suddenly raman hears ishita shouting
R: ab kya ho gaya isko?
he immediiately comes out of the bathroom n ishita runs towards him n hugs him tightly😉
I ; raman , waha chuha hai couch pe
R ;tumhe ek chote se chuhe se dar lagta hai , waise to badi jhansi ki rani bani firti ho,apni talwar ke saaath, to aaj use karona apni talwar chuhe ko kaatne ke liye..sirf muje kaatne ke liye istemal karti ho 😆
I ; aap is waqt apne one liners bandh kijie aur plz kuch kijiena muje bohot dar lagta hai chuho se
R ; aree muje chodogi to me kuch karunga na😆
thy are having this conversation while hugging each other, now thy break the hug n raman tries to find the chuha😆
R: areee chuhe mama, tum kaha ho , tum roj kyun nahi aate is kamre mein
I ; ye aap kya kar rahe h, muje usse dar lagta h aur aap use roj hamare kamre me aane ke liye invitation de rahe hai
Raman wants ishita to hug him everyday so he is telling the rat to come to thr room everyday😆
R ; aree me to tumhare liye keh raha tha, tum bor nai hoti ho kya roj couch pe soke?
here raman is indirectly inviting her to sleep with him on bed but our dhakkan ishu kuch nai samji😆now ishita suddenly sees the rat behind the couch n shouts n tries to run but instead she trips n falls near the couch n she got a sprain in her leg
R : ishita sambhalke, kitni badi fattu ho tum, lagi kya chot?
I ; raman muje sprain hua h leg me , i cant move
now raman lifts her in his arms and they share and intense eye lock and raman gently puts her on bed😳 n when he tries to go but ishita s chain gets stuck in his button and raman tries to remove while doing so his button falls off from his shirt n goes inside ishitas kurti inside the v neck kurti😆now guys hv ur imagination where it actually falls😆raman turns his head n tells her tum nikal lo😆ishu removes it n keep the button on the table.
R ; tum yaha bed par so sakti ho mere saath, its okay with me
and trying to reduce the embarassment he says
R ; aur ha plz raatko muje kick mat marna😆
I ; kick aur main, aap marte honge main nahi
now they both sleep on the bed at the end of the bed one on right .the other on left...now they both r facing their back while lying on the bed..ishita turns n triess to see ramn but instead she sees his back facing her then she turns back and now vice versa raman turns n sees ishita back facing him and he turns back and ...now both together turn n see each other..intense eye lock😉 and ishita tries to give an expression of that she just turned to take a pillow n takes the pillow n turns back where raman too turns back..both are smiling thinking about each other and ishita closes her eyes n smiles whereeas rkb runs his finger on his hair feeling shy😆they both go to sleep..during midnight ishita turns and in her sleep she puts her hand on raman s chest n her head is close to ramans cheek and ramn in sleep as already turned n he takes his hand towards ishitas right shoulder and keeps on it...thy are looking just like the most blessed couple on earth ...in the morning raman wakes up first and is in shock to see the position thy r in and he tries to move but looking at his angelic wife sleeping so close to him he smiles and admires her
Ishita in her sleep tells(she thinks its ruhi)
I : uth gaya mera baby? chalo bathroom mein jao me aati hu
R ; baby? am i her baby?(talking to himself)
raman is hell shocked listening all this n tells
R : hello uthiye babyji😆
Ishita wakes up n is shocked to see her position and immediately moves herself away
I ; aap? muje laga ruhi h
R ; acha? ruhi ke naam par attack karna chahti ho mujpe? bathroom mein kyun chalna tha mere saath tumhe😆
I; oh plz , aapka ke saath muje kahin bhi jane ka koi interest nahi hai, waise b konsi capability h aaapme kuch karne ki😉
R : capability dekhni h tumhe meri,tumhari nani yaad dila dunga tumhe
I : dekhenge dekhenge
now both suddenly stop the fight n realized what thy just said n ishita is hell embarassed tht she started such kind of talk and without wasting a second she gets out of the bed n goes to the bathroom but the raman kumar bhalla has given voice to his inner thoughts aakhir capability pe shak kia h ishu ne to😆 now he goes to the bathroom door was not closed n ishita gets scared thinking how to face him now..raman comes close towards her
R : capability dekhni h tumhe meri
I : haan , nahi...wo to main mazak kar rahi thi, y r u taking it serious
R : tum kabse aise mazak karne lagi haan?
I : aapki sangat ka asar😉 sorry aise hi nikal gaya mere muh se i dint think it b4 telling
now ramn comes more closer to her n tells her
R ; aaj me tumse kuch kehna chahta hu, aaj tak main jo b karta tha sirf ruhi ke liye karta aaya hu par ab me wo sari chize sirf tumhare liye karna chahta hu , i want to give all the love which u truly deserve!
now raman cups her cheeks and kisses on her forehead and ishita closes her eyes and ramn kisses on her eyelids n now ishita tries to say something where raman puts his finger on her lips n says shhsh i know tum kya kehna chahti ho n then kisses them..but their lips does not meet completely bcoz of his finger placed on her lips and says
R : maine jo b kaha wo sach tha, mazak nai kar raha hu..aur haa ye meri capability ka sirf trailer tha😉 n he winks n tells magar film ki shuruwat tum karogi...i mean jab tumhari permission hogi tab hi main apni capability tumhe dikhaunga😉 par haa agar kalse tum bed par nai soi aur us sade hue couch par jaake soi to me couch se uthake tum bed par le jaaunga, uske liye muje tumhare permission ki bhi jarurat nahi hai
ishita is shocked, confused,happy ,shy and is in a state where she is not able to utter a word😆
now rkb holds her hands and kisses on her fingers n tells her tum ready ho jao me bahar jaata hu n he comes out of the bathroom n while leaving he turns n his heart melts when he sees smiling blushing ishita..he got his answer😉 but ishita was unknown tht her ravan kumar saw her smiling.
okay people here i end my story i hope u all enjoyed it..sorry if u got bored..this was my first os ..usually i write shayaris but this is the first time i hv wrote a story...n thank u shivu for encouraging me to write.i dedicate ths os to u 🤗.i was confused to write or not ...but at last i gv a try..if u pppl liked it plz hit the like button n do comment guys...thank you!😊




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happenstance thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Komsy this is so sweet! Seriously I was grinning reading it .

You write shayari too? Please do share some! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww such an adorable os komsy..liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awww such an adorable os komsy..liked it...

thank u nikki 😆...it was my first try lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear😊
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thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are such a fantastic writer! Where have you been hiding this talent for soo long!
I literally smiled throughout the whole os.
The whole 'waise to badi jhansi ki
rani bani firti ho,apni talwar ke
saaath, ' was sooo funny.
kya baat hai! Loved it!
You better write more os's because you are a superb writer!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hummypummy

You are such a fantastic writer! Where have you been hiding this talent for soo long!
I literally smiled throughout the whole os.
The whole 'waise to badi jhansi ki
rani bani firti ho,apni talwar ke
saaath, ' was sooo funny.
kya baat hai! Loved it!
You better write more os's because you are a superb writer!

aww i m glad u smiled throughout the os🤗...thanks a lot for liking it...haha ya tht talwar wali line is my fav one...it just came to my mind while watching the show😆so i used it in ths os...once again dise 😃🤗thank u 4 reading ths lamba chauda os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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not at all boring dear!!!! i was too engrosssed into the story.. i was like " ab kya hoga whn raman was close to ishita!! lol ;) :P
awesumm updatee.. keepp continuingg. .eager to read moree... plsss PM mee whn u update the next part.. thnkuu
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Originally posted by: happenstance

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Komsy this is so sweet! Seriously I was grinning reading it .

You write shayari too? Please do share some! 😳

aww thank u uz for liking it 🤗. .ya I do write shayaris..thinking of writing something on ishra... If u want to read my old stuff, I hv written few romantic shayaris I'll pm u 😊. .n ya I hv read ur os ..naughty ishita 😉 waiting 4 part 4 ..awesome u hv written, u r an amazing writer!

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