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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tinni55
Nyc one

thank u 😊

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: princessaaliya
adorable, amazing os with great dialogues!
loved it!

aww thanks a lot dear 4 liking the dialogues, i wanted it to look like real raman, so tried it😆

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: yhmfever
Super duper cute !!
Continue soon please !

thanks a lot dear😊

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@ shalu @abby@ishra thanks a lot dear..ur views means a lot to me as it was my first try ...i hv specifically wrote ths os so tht if cvs r surfing forum, thy should think now about shifting ishu from couch to bed...that is d only reason i thought of writing it...n i m feeling epic epic happy seeing such good responses,dilse thank u all🤗..will try to continue😊

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Dakshayini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Komal, this OS was fantastic.⭐️

It felt very real, as if it was an episode. 😃

I think it has complete capability to be a future episode. 👏

It was as if those one liners were being said by Raman, definitely something he would say. 😆😆

Chuhe mama! I love you. 🤣

Their talk kept me laughing throughout the OS. 😉

Keep writing more and more.👍🏼

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

@dhaakshu..aww thanks a lot dear for liking my story🤗...i really want something to happen like this ..i m glad tht i was able to make u laugh throughout the os..thnx a lot😊..def would try to write more😊

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Isma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Updated on page 4! Finally! 😃

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Isma_A
Sorry, yaar! Res. Will read and reply this weekend.
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SO ADORABLE, Komal!!!! OMG!!! 😳 It was SO descriptive, as if I can picture every scene happening right before me! Loved it!! The dialogues were also on point!!! Very in-character! Also, this is just my own weird preference 😆, but I LOVE how you kept this in Hindi!!! Not that I would have any problems or issues if it were to be in English, but having the dialogues in Hindi makes it even sweeter and easier to imagine (for me); endearing on a different level. So THANK YOU for keeping the Hindi!! :p 😃

I have to stress again your excellent dialogues. Kya tum dialogue writer toh nai ho? 😆😉

Loved it, Komal!!

awww isma is there a love button for ur comment😆..this is the best comment i hv got from nyone thank u so much🤗..sabr ka fal mitha hota hai...isliye u replied late😉..ya i love to write a bit funny dialogues,specially i wanted to focuss on rkbs dialogues, wanted it to go with the character😃 wanted it to b just like him...this was the bestest compliment i ever got for my os 🤗yes i wanna bcm one (dialogue writer) unless balaji hires me😉..thank u sweety😳