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ZedZee

@ZedZee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Kudos to you 👏 Very well written ... Difficult to believe that it's your first attempt ! You seem like a natural at this 😳 Keep it going ... 👏

Edited by ZedZee92 - 11 years ago

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komal

@komsy7856

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ZedZee92
Kudos to you 👏 Very well written ... Difficult to believe that it's your first attempt ! You seem like a natural at this 😳 Keep it going ... 👏

aww thanks a lot dear🤗...it was my first try dear.. i was really confusedwhether should i update it or not bcoz it ws my first try so was little scared but reading ur comment i m feeling epic happy😃

Edited by komsy7856 - 11 years ago

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Fab writing..so much like the real raman n ishita

pls write more

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

adorable, amazing os with great dialogues!

loved it!

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yhmfever

@yhmfever

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Super duper cute !!
Continue soon please !

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Please write a second part and demonstrate RAMAN'S CAPABILITY 😆 Would love that!😳 and well this part was hilarious. Ishu scared of chooha and hugs Raman. shoo sweet 😳