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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Drama, I likeee 😆

It was quite emotional too 😭
I loved the possessive Rey 😳
Aditya 😡
The precap 😲
Update soon dear 😳
Much love: Ale ❤️


Thanks Ale sweetie...Thank u so much.. I am glad u liked it.. Will update soon!! 😳😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

I m amazed at rey's behaviour
but as u say i m going wid d flow
their kisses r truly rlectrifying
n one thing i love abt rey is that he is way too protective for taani
he makes sure nobody else sets their dirty eyes on his girl
interesting updt


Thanks Kriti...Thank u so much.. I am glad u liked it.. Thanks a lot..
@Bold: 😳😳😳 Lol..🤪 Anyway.. Will update soon..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

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Interesting taarey so close to each other luv tht I so knew it tht media was thr n rey did all tht for media nice rey holding taani waist wow n kissing her check 😳 kya baat hai luv tht taani shock I knew it taarey getting engage in 2 days nice swayam shout on rey luv tht he was questioning rey n telling him to stop but wait swaron think tht taani was with her bro thr think taani is also like raj n kriya thts shocking taani is scared rey avoid thm n went to his room rey can't sleep in room he still miss her 😔 taani was sleeping in living room on sofa rey was staring at her n was angry tht she is sleeping peacefully whn rey is dying to get some sleep well he disturb her taani is hell tried she badly need rest rey was going to pick her up in arms but stop I luv tht aww rey hlp taani to go to bedroom luvly rey sleep in guest room ohh la la engagement thing hav started luv tht thing r running ohh thr is party before engagement rey was checking out taani n he is being protective per-cape is interesting n luvly thanks for PM n update n I won't say update soon coz I know it's useless



Thanks Riddhi...Thank u so much for such a wonderful comment.. Thanks a lot.. I am glad u liked it and I am really amazed or you can say, amused that you didn't missed a single point from the chap.. Thank u so much sweetie.. Thanks a lot.. Well, If it's useless to say, I think, you just don't say it.. That would be much better. 😉😆

Will update soon.. Thanks again.. :D
Edited by Ish_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ishu!!!
Update bhi karde...
Im desperately waiting for it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshluvsD3nHHL

Ishu's stories have intensity, passion and meaning! Toh kya hua agar confession late hua toh?? D3 mein confession ke liye almost ek saal laga tha! A story takes time to develop so have some patience! If you don't wanna appreciate then don't.Do you have any idea how much it would hurt Ishu to hear that her story is a torture?? Inspite of having a tight schedule she takes put time to update just for all of you..because u guys want it! Fine u have the right to criticize par not the right to call it a torture and things like that.Be patient! This is a dark intense story and love will take its time to develop.Pls aise comments poat karke Ishu ko hurt mat karo.Woh writer hai usey pata hai kab confession hoga!!


Well, Thanks Laksh.. It really means me a lot.. Just let be.. Ppl will anyway continue.. So.. Anyway!! Thanks a lot..* Love you Lakch, My excited electron..😆 🤗*
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Posted: 11 years ago
The chapter is dedicated to : amrit2000, divzcool, attraction.



Chapter 16:

A soft breeze of summer air entered through the window, making curtains jump upwards to welcome them. Taani stirred as hot breeze caressed her skin, playing with her hairs as she sat in front of a long mirror with a thick soft yellow towel wrapped around her. The girl- Naina, one of from the crew and for today, Naina is Taani's magician as Naina is going use her magic to transform Taani into a real beauty. Naina helped Taani to sit in tub, filled with warm water which had amazing aura of roses. Rose petals were everywhere in the water, softly swimming on slow rhythm of water layers. Taani ran a wet hand on her face. She looked at the two rose petals which were away from each other. Again, a warm breeze came from window, making Taani shiver. She watched as tiny waves formed in water, decreasing the distance between the rose petals. And in time, those two delicate petals collided with each other, forming many waves.

Taani blinked as she felt hand on her shoulder, she looked up and found Naina smiling down at her. Taani returned the smile.

" It's time to get ready.." Naina grinned and helped Taani to come out and gave a rob to her. She left Taani to wear the rob.

Taani did as she told.

Reena helper of Naina clapped her hand and slide down the rubber which were holding Taani's hair loosely.

***


Sharon waited on the doorstep of Gayatri's room. Sharon watched as Rey's mom, murmured softly into the phone. With a final sigh, Gayatri cut the phone and turned. She stopped and looked at Sharon surprised, she nervously glanced at the phone in her hand and smiled at Sharon.

"Sharon.. When did you came? Did I make you wait long?" Gayatri asked a she gestured Sharon to come in.

"No.. Just few minutes." Sharon answered as she watched Gaytari putting phone and table and turned to her. Gayatri's eyes were sad and face was pale. Sharon looked at the phone and then at Gayatri.

"Were you talking with Mr.Singhania?" Sharon asked, carefully with soft voice. Gayatri exhaled slowly and nodded, answering Sharon's question silently.

"I informed him and he said, he is busy, he can't come from London. I told him that.. Reeyansh is getting... Engaged." Gayatri said with a pause.

" But, he said, he can't and cut the call." Gayatri shook her head and sat on bed, tiredly.

Sharon was about say something, when her eye caught a person standing in doorstep. She quickly shut her mouth and looked at Gayatri who wasn't yet aware that another person was participating silently in their conversation.

"Why did you bother him to call, Ma?" Rey asked, as his eyes looked into distance from window. He stepped in room and turned towards Gayatri who was looking at him with shock on her face.

"He is your father, Reeyansh. He know you are getting engaged and I.."

"Really? Well, good to know that he know that he has son. Well, I suppose he is not coming because of some stupid meeting he is attending somewhere out of the India. Right?" Rey asked, as he waited patiently.

Gayatri was about to say, but Rey raised his hand and told her by his action that he was no mood to listen so-whatvere-explanation.

" I knew from very starting, he will not come. I was actually here to tell you, that there is no need to invite him. But, anyway.. I guess, you got your answer. " Rey said.

He looked down at his watch and then pulled out his mobile from his pocket.

"I need to do some calls." Rey muttered and turned on his heels, leaving Sharon and Gayatri.

***


The afternoon ran past like a flicker of light. Taani sighted and pushed the plate aside which had some snacks for her. She hadn't eaten all of the day, her stomach was growling but, her mind and brain was not ready to start working yet. She wanted to be just blank. Her heart was on fast pace than it's usual. She gulped and her eyes flickered on the clock.


4:45pm.


The engagement was going to take place on exact 7pm. Guests were starting to come, she could hear their gathering. In 15 or more minutes, all the wild girls with weird hairstyle and clothes will barge in and start helping her to get ready for the amazing happy time- 'Getting engaged'.

Rey ran a frustrating hand from his hair, messing them completely. He looked at Swayam who was looking at him with disapproval. But, he decided to ignore it. He looked up as two figures entered through entrance, making his blood boil. In one glance, Swayam was at his side.

Kia and Raj entered the living room. Rey glanced down at their intertwined hand, he could actually feel his skin on heat. Raj stood in front of him.

"I want to see my sister." Raj announced.

Rey narrowed his eyes on him. "Really? Do you really think you can order me in my house?" Rey barked at Raj.

Raj shook his head and ignored Rey. Swayam tried to calm him down.

"Rey, Taani is his sister-"

Rey's head snapped towards Swayam, his eyes were hard and distant.

"Really? -"

Swayam shook his head and gripped Rey's shoulder.

"Rey. Calm down, let them meet. Just calm down." Swayam nodded at Raj and a servant came forward, leading them the way.

Rey removed Swayam's grip and glared at his best friend.

***


Taani looked up as she heard the knob turned. Her face immediately fell as she found Kia standing there with her Bhai. Taani stood up as they both made their way towards her.

Taani glared at Kia who was smirking at her. The cause of all this drama which is destroying everyone's lives.

"Taani.." Raj whispered as he eyed Taani, making sure she is okay. But, as soon as he met her eyes, he cringed back. Her eyes were cold, distant. They used to be always smiling, gleaming with carefree attitude. Raj observed her, slightly swollen eyes. They only happened when she cried a lot.

"Taani.. why don't you just run? We will help you." Raj asked.

Taani blinked at him and then chuckled dryly.

"Really? Bhai? Do you think, I am gonna look up at you, taking you as inspiration and will run away like a coward you are. Really?" Taani asked.

Raj winced at her words. He never imagined her baby sister will talk to him like that.

"Look Taani.. Raj dragged me here to help you. See, As I escaped you can als-"

Taani burst out laughing. Kia glared at Taani. Taani shook her head and pressed her lips together to stop herself from laughing.

"Oh my godd..." Taani panted and looked at Kia. " Well, I will not escape like you. You know.. I am not any s***like you. So, now both you, can go." Taani hissed.

But, Kia had other plans. She stalked towards Taani and in no time she grabbed her wrist and turned her.

"Ahhh.." Taani shirked in pain. Raj gasped.

"Kia... Leave her." He shouted at Kia. But, Kia ignored him. Kia twisted Taani's wrist, making her wince in pain.

"She called me s***. How dared she!" Kia screetched, Taani winced as she had to deal with Kia with her shrill voice. Raj wanted to help, but he backed off. Taani looked at him with disbelief.

"What... Bhai...Aaa.." Taani winced and painfully closed her eyes as Kia twisted her wrist really hard. Tears sprang in Taani's eyes. She didn't know whether to laugh or cry.

She couldn't believe, Raj wasn't doing anything. His little sister was practically getting abused by his fiance and he is watching the show.

"LEAVE HER."

Kia's head whipped towards entrance of the room. Rey was standing there, glaring with cold stare. Kia blinked as she found herself leaving Taani's wrist. Taani whimpered as she straightened her hand. There was big ugly red bruise around her wrist. She rubbed her wrist and blinked back the tears, but they anyway rolled down. Swayam blinked as he watched what was happening in front of his eyes. He couldn't believe what he saw. He granted permission to Raj, just because Taani is his sister. But, This was really... Unbelievable.

Rey stalked towards Taani and pulled her from arm, near him. His grip was tight on her arm. Taani quickly looked down.

"Security." Rey barked, making everyone wince ,in the room. Taani shivered as she heard his high pitched order tone. The two familiar bodyguard made their way towards Taani's room, stopped behind Swayam as Swayam told them.

"Don't you dare. And, she called me, something very inappropriate. She needed to get a lesson." Kia hissed at Rey.

Rey narrowed his eyes into slits. "I don't want to hear your voice. GET OUT MY HOUSE, NOW." Rey said, emphasizing every word.

Kia was literally shaking with anger, her palms were balled into tight fists. She turned and stomped her way, out of the room. Swayam backed away, as Kia passed him fuming. Raj looked at Taani, hesitatively he took step forward only to come to know that, she took one step back. Her head hung low. Taani closed her eyes as Raj passed from her.

It's painful.

It was very painful to know that your brother can't stand up for you. Your own brother chose someone else over you, who is not worth. Taani felt like, she doesn't belong to the feeling called 'HAPINESS'. The feeling is not for her, for her so-much-messed-up life. Her parents left her. The only one she had as her mom, her dad , her best friend, her support, walked away in front of her, leaving her all alone, pushing her in aloof corner of life.

Swayam escorted bodyguards out, leaving Taani and Rey alone. Rey turned to Taani. Her hair was hiding her face, hiding her pain. There was a sudden knock on the door, his head snapped in that direction. All girls were waiting, carrying various boxes, make-up kits. He nodded at them and they all barged in, silently putting everything. He glanced at Taani for last time and turned on his heels.

Rey came out of her room and made towards his. He wanted to do so many things in that moment when she was looking down, hiding her face by taking advantage of her hair. But, he couldn't. His mind, body were frozen.

He entered his room and slammed the door behind him.

***


The back porch of Singhania Mansion was all crowded. The soft music was playing. The back porch of Singhania was surrounded by trees which were now glowing with yellow Christmas bright lights. Gayatri was alone attending guests. Rey walked down the stairs in black sherwani. He quickly joined his mother.

Gayatri couldn't help but admire the way Rey look utterly handsome and dashing in the sherwani. She smiled sadly as she remembered about the situation. In what situation, her son was getting engaged to the girl who is not actually at the fault but she has to face her son's rage and hate. But, Gayatri really can't help in it.

Rey's Dress:

Gayatri smiled as Rey touched her feet. As soon as, he stood up, She pulled him into hug. Sharon and Swayam smiled at the scene. At least something was getting good.

A slim, curvaceous, famous model- Anjali Nadia walked towards Rey and purposely, took hold of his arm. Gayatri didn't like the gesture at all. But, she didn't comment on it.

"Rey, where is the lucky girl, you are getting engaged?" Anjali asked.

Swayam and Sharon joined the conversation. Before Rey could say anything, Sharon announce.

"There she is." Sharon said, but her eyes fixed straight away. All followed her gaze and When Rey looked in the direction.

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Rey couldn't move his eyelid to blink. His heart just stopped, literally stopped pumping.

Taani nervously tucked a strand behind her ear, bitting her bottom lip. She was standing in the centre of the crowd, all eyes were on her. All men were just stunned to even move and some women were admiring or glaring at her.

Gayatri walked towards uncomfortable Taani. She came beside Taani and smiled at her and started leading Taani way.

Rey watched as Taani made her way towards him. His heart was literally thumping against his ribcage.

[For Taani's dress, riddhi (Raddhi) Helped me a lot, Thanks sweetie. :D]

Taani's Dress:

There she was in all her beautiful glory. The lenhega she wore shimmered under the black sky. Her bossom was covered by tiny golden blouse, showing her shoulder blades. Dupatta was on one side. The net duppta was draped over her shoulder, then the material was successful to hide some little skin of her exposed flat, toned stomach. The embroidery of lehenga was three layered. Her small waist with perfect curves were somehow visible. Her long legs were hiding due to the long lehenga. Rey's eyes trained on her from toe to head. Her hair were curled, his fingers practically etched to feel the softness of those curls. Her neck was on the show as she had taken her hair on one shoulder. Rey couldn't help but admire her beauty. The way her skin glowed under the lights and the stars which were now showing up as if they were also attending their engagement.

Rey snapped out of his trance, when he felt something in his hand. He looked down and saw, Taani's hand. His eyebrows were knotted. He looked up and again, his heart forgot how to work. His eyes were practically roaming on every inche of her. Her soft, kissable lips were painted with lipstick which was doing something to him.

Anjali was gone from his side and his mother from Taani's side. He could only see the girl he is getting engaged. Swayam watched as Rey just stared at Taani. Like, he wasn't just present there.

Taani blinked as his thumb caressed the back of her hand. She looked up slightly, aware of all the focus on her. She gulped as she took his profile. The black sherwani just suited his body built perfectly. His broad shoulders were very noticeable. The buttons were till his throat. But, no one could ignore his broad chest.

"It's time for exchange of rings."

Gayatri said, enough for everyone to hear.

Taani looked confused as two maids came forward with the plate in their hand, the plate was covered with red velvet material and on top of that, a solid, silver box was waiting to be opened.

Rey finally removed his eyes from Taani and turned towards the maid to take the ring. He opened the lid and took out the most stunning ring which was clustered with diamonds which were shining in the moonlight. The design was so much delicate and the gold ring supporting it , just stunning.

Taani inserted the ring which she had taken up from the box. Rey's ring was also stunning. The gold ring had a unique design engraved on it.

It was Rey's turn to slide the ring. He took her palm in his and very slowly slide the ring into her slender fingers. The loud applause surrounded them. Few flashes were flickering on them. People came and gathered around them, congratulating them.

Rey put his hand around her waist. He slide his finger on the skin of her small waist and then, his finger skimmed curve of her waist and his fingers finally stopped on her stomach, near her belly button. Taani shivered. The sensation of his fingers was something that couldn't be described. People surrounded them like magnet attracts the metal particle. Every male in the crowd, didn't forget to look at Taani who was in Rey's arms.

Rey couldn't help but tightened his hold on her, pulling her closer to him. Of course, how can he forget about all the other male population. His eyes nearly scanned the crowd. Whovewer looked at Taani, Rey would just glared at him. He didn't even let them shake-hand with her. Not that he was rude. But, before they could introduced themselves he would introduce and then turned to next guests.

Taani sighted as finally, crowd lessened, air passed and she finally breathed. She looked up at Rey and found him staring down at her. She blinked and quickly averted her eyes from him. Rey gave a slight push to her, getting her attention back. Then, he started walking as he had wrapped one arm around Taani, she had to follow him, if she didn't want to loose her balance or fall on her face, something like that.

They walked towards the small stage which was decorated with lights and flowers. Rey helped Taani to climb up and then they both took sit on the chairs, which were very different and decorated. Again, they were surrounded by guests and had to deal with them.

***


After nearly two hours, Taani felt like she should use washroom. She wanted some silence as surrounding was too much noisy. She looked at Rey who was busy with associating with some of the group of directors and left her to associate with some female models and other guests. She excused herself and walked in mansion and entered the washroom. She pushed the door and let it bump on the wall.

She leaned on the counter and sighted. Some minutes passed and she finally looked up. She straighten up and adjusted her dupptta, ran fingers through some curls. She looked down and adjusted the plates of her duptta which was on her stomach. She looked up and froze. Rey was standing there, staring at her through mirror. She blinked as he took steps towards her. When he was near more, than enough to feel his breath on her shoulder, she turned and face him. But, there was a mere inches between them. She gulped and quickly took one step back. In return, Rey stepped forward.

Taani breathed heavily, feeling their proximity. She bite her lips. Rey watched her every moment. From blinking her eyelids to bitting her lips. Taani again stepped back and gasped as her exposed back contacted with the cold tiled wall. Rey placed both of the palms on walls, on the either side of her head, trapping her.

Taani was about to turn her body and escape. But, Rey pushed his lower body forward on her, pinning her against wall.

"Don't" He whispered as he looked at her lips which were trembling slightly. Minutes passed by, but Rey just stared down at her, studying her every feature like he wasn't getting satisfied by only one look. Taani felt very nervous under his gaze. She nervously raised her hand and pushed the strands behind her ear. Rey watched the ring on her finger. It looked magnificent on her slender finger. The bangles around her wirst, collided on each other, making a small sweet sound. His eyebrows furrowed as his eyes caught something wrong.

Through the gap between the bangles, he could see a black patch. He frowned as Taani lowered her hand. He removed his one palm from the wall and grabbed her palm, making her look at him with her wide eyes. He slide the bangles down by his fingers and then a bruises of fingers around her wrist caught his attention. He moved her wrist little but Taani winced. He exhaled slowly, Taani could feel him getting tense. He put her hand on his shoulder and leaned. His eyes flickered from bangles to her.

Rey studied her eyes, watching the most amazing chocolaty orbs, staring back at him. He leaned and his breath fanned her chin.

Rey's hand slide on her stomach then through curve, he put his arm around her waist and pulled her closer. Her chest collided with his, bursting her heart like a bomb. Rey removed his other palm from wall and cupped her chin, making her shiver as his palm got cold due to the cold tiles. Rey watched as her eyelids flickered closed as he leaned more. His knuckles caressed her soft skin of her cheek.

Taani couldn't help but close her eyes. His intoxicating scent surrounded her all sense, disabling the ability to think.

And, then.. Rey closed the distance between them. Taani's fingers fisted the material of his shervwani. His lips met hers, caressing every inch of her soft lips. Rey could taste the delicious strawberry lipgloss which was coated on her lips. Rey's fingers skimmed from her cheek to her neck, he cupped her neck and pulled her more in their passionate moment.

His tounge darted over her lips, making her whimper. She was out of breath. Her chest was moving up and down against his. He could feel the restriction of material between their bodies. His eyes snapped open and his lips stopped their magical nipping with hers. He slowly broke the contact between their lips. Their breaths were mingled. His minty and her sweet strawberry.

And, then it hit them.

They kissed.

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They kissed. Not for the show, not for the reputation, not for photos they want to have in newspapers.

No one was present her. Nor media, nor public. Both had their sense perfectly. Not a single drop of alcohol in their system and...

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.

They kissed. They kissed with the all the passion they had, making each other breathless.

They kissed, with all their sense on.

Taani gasped and Rey exhaled slowly...

To be continued...


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Hola People...
What's up? So, how was the update?
Now, anyone has the gut to tell me that, 'Hey That was Very stressful'?
Well, mainly it contained what Taani thought about her Bhai and all. So, I guess that wasn't stressful.But, Anyway I would like to know from you.
Ha!!!! Twist...Twist...Twist.
They kissed.
Not under any pressure.
Is this going to change?? O.o
What do you think?
Now, tell me.. Who has still voice to hurt me by saying that this is torturous. 😡
*Deep breaths..Isha..Deep Breaths..*
Pheww!
Okay, don't be offended. The people to whom , I kind of talked, well those will get to know. But, Hey I am joking. Chill..😃
We are good.
Okay, enough of my time pass.
And STOP.
Precap , No PROMO.
I know.,,,😆😆
Ha! Call me bitch, evil everything you want.
But, Come on itna bada update,Have some mercy on me.
Pljjj??
*Looking up at you, blinking with watery Nick wali eyes..*😆
Now, Go and Comment, and Like. 😳

Thank You,
Everyone,
Love you, All.


-Ish.<3

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Edited by Ish_taarey - 11 years ago
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Okay so Ishu *Kaan Pakadke* Bada wala Sorry *Puppy Face*
I know i am late Okay I am very late.
Bt jab I read the chapter I couldnt comment coz of some network problem then after ur scrap I was damn sure I will unres but then got stuck with some stuffs and blah blah blah
okay okay
now I come to my comment

OMG!
U update after such a longgg time
Ghadhi jaldi update nahi kar sakti thi
I was waiting for this for so much.
Bt Its okay atleast tune update kia *Happy dance*

Okay now
*Strictly concentrating with updates* 😆
Superb girl :D
I just loved it
Kia and Raj 😡
Kia literally was torturing taani bt that brother of hers wasnt even helping 🤬
Oyye Hooyyeee Bt why to fear when our Rey hero is there
Rey saved taani 😳
Engagement 😃
Rey's staring business
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
*Jumps High*
They Kissed ☺️
OMG Ishu Love u for this 🤗

Okay ab kya update soon bolu?
The new update is already ready!
chalo koi nahii nxt comment ke liye bachake rakhti un ye baat 😆

-Surabhi-

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Freak 😲 [:O] heartattack yaar u updating so soon tht too
my fav stry ish I need doctor now wow u know I luv tht type
of bath it's do relaxing with ros n water siting in bathtub I luv
it n thn fresh air coming ohhh feeling cold I luv this kind of bath
😊 hmm Sharon n rey mom convo ohh rey dad don't like rey n
thr is some problem bwt rey n his dad hmmm so he busy man
(just like you ish :p) hmm rey is somewhr hurt taani did not eat
anything hmm ohh guest start coming ohh raj n kriya came luv tht
swayam was with rey ohh raj want to meet taani n swayam let thm
meet I luv taani answer to raj good one baby ohh thr want her to run
but she won't luv it kriya is bitch n raj is dog he is not man he is loser
he is kriya dog shame on him kriya was hurting taani n raj he is kriya
dog 😡 thank god rey came on time n luv tht swayam saw it hope he com
to know truth rey walk to taani hold her luv tht finally kriya n out I luv whn taani
step back whn raj com forward taani feeling alone i hate 😔 tht swayam left taarey
alone but no use girls came I luv tht rey wanted to do many thing 😳 haaye main Gaye
rey is looking so sexy tht I just want to kiss him on lip 😳 I luv his dress n aww his mom little
emotional luv tht she care for taani but can't do anything aww rey touch his mom feet now I want to really hug him n kiss him hard 😳 hmm Anjali she don't look gud I luv tht rey was lost in taani n here taani was not comfortable luvly tht rey mom take her to rey (stop thanking me u idiot) haaye rey checking out taani wah I luv it I luv how u describe taani dress luvly n rey is so lost in her tht he can't see other taani hold rey hand wah n rey looking at her lip 😳 luv tht swayam notice rey wow wah rey rubbing his hand on taani back hand luv tht taani admiring rey wah kya baat hai 😊 taarey lost but rey mom bring thm back I luv thr ring (show thm soon) rey put slowly ring 😊 haaye rey put his hand on taani waist luv tht I luv the way rey hand was moving on taani waist n stop near belly button 😳 rey is so caring holding taani tight after looking at man aww 😊 finally ppl start going n rey was looking at taani wow rey took taani to stage hmm taani want some air so she went to washroom hmm rey was behind her 😃 I luv tht movement 😳 my heart actually stop at tht movement I luv how rey was getting close to taani n taani going back finally taani back hit wall n rey trapped her n said don't luv tht rey was looking at taani for min 😊 Rey saw taani hand wch kriya hold n he got tensed luv tht rey kiss taani n taani too 😳 thr actually kiss for thm self to feel each other ahaaa kiss was superb I luv it n I luv this prt so much I luv thr kiss it was breathtaking 😳 one my breath yaar thr first real kiss I am so happy with tht but soon but com to know tht thr actually kiss each other 😳 wht will happen nxt I know my rey will give taani a killer smile n move out 😉 anyways why the hell no per-cape or promo n ish don't make wait for nxt prt for long plzz yaar plggg anyways thanks for this shocking surprise update I luv it to cute n keep updating like this soon I luv it thanks for PM baby n ish luv u lots of Hughes to u \^_^/ n kisses :* n yeah do update soon actually sooner
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Okay! I know, I am very very late. Like really late. I agree. You can punish me. But, sabse pehle comment. Than, you can hang me to death. Coool?

OMG! OMG! OMG! This update was dedicated to me? Me? Like really ME?
Shocked will be an understatement. I really dont have words. This was a HUGE surprise for me.
Never in my wildest dream had I thought I will get am update dedicated to me, and that too, from you. This is something too good. A writer like you dedicated an update to me. I love you so very much for this. Ab, galat way mai nah lenaa. ;)

Update was just so amazing. Starting from her makeover, till the end of the night. It kept me engaged in it. Awesome? Nah! Mind blowing? Nope! Flawless? Umm, something better? PERFECT. The word itself is perfect. This was such an adorable chapter. I loved it while they were dressing Taani. Then, sharon and Gayatri scene. Too good! Sooo much loving it. But, why is Rey's dad too tough on him?urgh! Hates. Anyway, Rey should not have listened.

Hero is all dressed. I loved his dress. Such a hunk. Anyway, what the hell are those two doing here? Cut it! Who allowed them in? Swayam should not have did that. How dare he *Raj* say all this shit? And, that Kia? Raj did not even stopped her. What brother he is? Such a coward! HE DONT EFFING CARE FOR HIS OWN BLOOD! I hate him so much. Ahh! Finally Rey came. Poor Taani.

Time for enagement. Yayy! Itna zyada pretty? Rey toh hogaya tun! Bwahahaha. He is such a possessive person. Glaring? Introduction? Oh my god! I love his possessiveness. Poor Taani, again.

KISS! OH MY GOD! THE WASHROOM SCENE WAS MY FAVOURITE! I loved every single word you used in it. I could actually imagine it in front of me. So pure! So amazing. I loved it like too much. And his dilogue "Dont" eeeppp! I am going all flat. This is just too good. They kissed. Without faking it to anyone. Oh my gawdd! This is getting much better then I thought.

Too much of goodness. I damn love it!
Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ish_taarey


Sneha...Thank u so much.. I am glad u liked it.. Thank u so much. Well, if I leave the bold part of the comment... Thanks a lot for such a wonderful comment.. really..😳😳

But, the bold part.. well, It kinda hurt me. Anyway., Thanks. 😊


I am really sorry Ishu...Main tjhe hurt ni krna chahti thi...Sorry swtheart
From nw I'll keep dis in mind
Sorry once again
Update soon
PM me too

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