SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

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Aww kina acha tha .. thanks plz update soon

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Awesome update Saffi,..

Loved it...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Okay, Team Kri,

I sound like some professional... Team Kri. Team Saffi! whew! *puts on cool sunglasses and tries to act just as cool as Param with his*

I'll reply part by part too.

Awww! Thanks! 😳😳 I feeel uber special!

Part One:

It's great you commented on this chapter quickly because that means you'll get the next chapter soon.
Parrrtttyyy! PARTY TIME! Next chapter quickly too! I love that you love Sandhir and reading, because it gives me more incentive to write more Sandhir, because that means there's always one guaranteed reader! That's for sure! I will always keep an eye on what you write! Yeeeup, I wait for your reviews which is why I said it was a good thing that you reviewed this chapter fast! Maybe a bad thing for me though, because I have to write it... oh no... haha just kidding. I was itching to write the next chapter, but last night it got too late. 😳 AWWWH! That just makes my day yaaarrr!

HAHA omg, Randhir would have the memories of sleeping with Sanyu when all he wants to do is forget her?! That would be intense. Well... he'll be able to turn to those memories soon, if he gets hurt again. Maybe it would be good for Sanyu's memories. 😆 Daaang! You naughty girl! Hahahaha! He doesn't want to forget her deep down. He loves her... *makes innocent child face* hehehe! which is another reason he didn't move on. God. I would have been super super upset if he had wife and kids... so glad you said no on that other comment! hehe! I don't know. I just felt like if he really missed her, he could rely on those memories. Hehehee! Sanyu... she's crazy!

I'm glad you liked that part from like... 3 chapters ago, and I'm glad you keep reading this fic! You're just the sweetest, most adorable, best reviewer in the world! 🤗 Areee! Don't flatter me too much! Mein udh jaogi... *cues music... I'm on top of the world by Imagine Dragons and dances****😆 Hugs you right back! ummah!

Alright Team Kri, replying to Part Two now.

Part Two:

Oh I needed to dodge your bullet so I didn't let her get married. 🤣 No but seriously, I didn't want this fic to get overly complicated with her marrying Sameer, it wasn't necessary. 😆 Yup yup yup... And if she did. He'd be really really broken anyways. it would have been like your drabble... by the way, you got to update that too! 😉

Yeah, I know right, I think it's a very realistic scenario, where people listen to their parents about who they should marry, but Sanyu regretted her decision really quickly and tried to contact him. Right now, Randhir doesn't want to be associated with "coward Sanyukta" anymore, so let's see what changes that. 😆

Yeah, honestly... I know some people that have done that. And I am so glad she regretted it quickly. But 4 years yaarrr... whew!

You flatter me SO MUCH! You're the perfect reviewer. I LOVE YOU! Chapter 10 is coming soon Team Kri! 🤗
I LOVE YOU TOO! 🤗Awww... I love that. "You're the perfect reviewer..." Man, that just makes me smile so wide... I don't think you can imagine how much it makes my day!!!!
CHAPPPTTTER 10!!!! WOOO! WHOOP WHOOP! Tooo excited!

Seee ya later yaar!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Craziness123
Awesome update Saffi,..

Loved it...

Continue soon...

Love
Ayesha...

Thank you! Glad you loved it!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: kri1

Seee ya later yaar!

I love you so much! You are the best, and I've said this so many times! I'll update the drabble soon, but before that, lemme post the next chapter of this fic (which is written) once I reply to this amazingly amazing review reply. Just keep being the way you are because you're awesome and nothing can ever change that. You're brilliant, amazing, the best, great - I don't care if you fly away, because then we can fly away together (your reviews make me feel like flying)! <3

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter Ten

Sanyukta couldn't take it - she wasn't one to just leave the matter. She needed to confront Randhir, she needed to know how he felt. She wanted to know how his life went and whether he thought about her at all in the last four years. Sanyukta needed to know.

She walked up the stairs, and looked in each room before finding Randhir in one. He was on his laptop, sitting on a chair in front of a desk. "Sorry for not knocking," she apologized before walking in.

Randhir stood up immediately giving her a confused look. "What are you doing here? This isn't your room."

"I know Randhir," Sanyukta admitted, grabbing his arms. "Randhir, I needed to see you. I need you to tell me what you think of me. I can do anything to prove that I still love you Randhir... or to at least to gain your forgiveness."

"You want to know what I think about you Sanyukta?" he asked her, his voice steady, but Sanyukta could still detect the fury in his eyes. He started to walk forward, backing Sanyukta up to the wall.

She gulped, looking into his eyes, nodding. "Yes."

He reached down for her hands, looping his fingers through hers. This small gesture made Sanyukta shiver with excitement - it had been way too long since she felt his touch. She wanted to kiss him right now, she wanted to be in his arms. Right now, at this moment, she had no other concern in the world -- all she wanted was Randhir.

Randhir leaned forward, his lips grazing her ear gently, causing her whole body to tremble. "You can do anything for me?" he whispered roughly.

He pinned her hands up on either side of her head as his lips started to trace her jawline, making her whole body burn with desire.

"Yes Randhir," she gasped. "Anything."

His lips trailed down her neck, to her collarbone, her hands still pinned up against the wall. He brought his lips dangerously close to hers and her heart started to beat much faster than it had previously been beating.

She wanted him. She wanted him so badly. She closed her eyes, her whole body aching for that one kiss.

But that kiss didn't come.

Randhir let go of her hands and turned away from her. "I think you're a fool. You're someone I won't waste my time on. I learned to hate you Sanyukta. And now I hate you more than ever. No matter what you do, you won't be able to get my love back. You couldn't fight with your family for our love that time, and I won't fight myself or force myself to love you now."

Sanyukta started to tremble more than ever now, not because of the desire she had just felt, but because she was hurt. Randhir hated her. He must have thought that she wanted to force him to love her.

"You don't love me anymore?" she whispered, tears falling from her eyes.

He started to walk away from her, but she stepped forward and grabbed his arm, forcefully turning him around. "I don't believe you," she whispered weakly. "I don't believe you!"

She bit on her lip to hold back the cry she was about to let out. She was heartbroken.

"Randhir, you don't feel anything around me anymore?" she stepped towards him, holding on to his arms and standing on her tiptoes. "You don't even want to kiss me? You used to love kissing me."

Randhir pushed her off him. "You're crossing your limits now Sanyukta."

"Oh please Randhir!" she yelled through her tears, grabbing his shirt again. "As if you didn't just cross your limits just now on the wall. Why would you do that if you don't feel anything towards me?"

She pushed him until he hit the wall hard now, pressing her body as far as she could against his. Her hands still clutching his shirt, she placed her head on his chest, inhaling his scent after four long years.

"Sanyukta, get off me!" he snapped, trying to push her back, but she was adamant about keeping him there.

"Not until you tell me the truth. Not until you tell me what you went through! Let me feel your pain Randhir. I'll gladly take any pain you give me. What do you want to do? Kiss me? Sleep with me? I know you want to, I can feel your desire on my body right now. Yell at me, hit me, murder me, sleep with me, do anything you want, but please... please don't hate me," she begged, her tears wetting his shirt.

She could feel Randhir's arms wrapping around her body, and she felt her hopes start to go up again.

"Why don't you want me to hate you?" he asked, his lips gently brushing over her hair.

"I can't take it Randhir. I can take any pain in the world, but I can't take the pain of you hating me. I was wrong, I was very wrong, but I'm repenting - I have been repenting for the last four years. Don't make me go through more of this Randhir, please."

Randhir didn't know why he wanted to comfort her, why he wanted to wipe away her tears, he didn't know why he wanted to allow her back into his life again. Everything was happening so fast. The girl, the only girl, he had ever loved was in his arms, begging him to not hate her. He wanted to listen to her, he wanted to stop her pleas, he wanted to shelter her from the same pain he had gone through, but perhaps he wasn't strong enough to do that.

He couldn't have his heart broken anymore. And he didn't trust Sanyukta to keep it fixed anymore. He wanted to listen to her, but he knew he couldn't. Building up his hatred towards her for the last few years could not go to waste, it could not go down the drain that easily. Even in front of her tear streaked, innocent, and beautiful - oh so beautiful - face.

So he pushed her off him gently, while she still tried to cling on to his shirt.

"We'll order in dinner," he told her, looking away. "The maid has a day off today. Until then, we will discuss your role in the company. You'll be at the same level as me, I'm just here to get you started... and we'll keep our personal lives aside while we discuss this."

Sanyukta looked down, her energy drained. She did come here to work anyways.

"Fine."

The next few hours passed by with Randhir explaining how the company worked, what her role was, what she would be doing and who she would be working with. He said they would leave every morning together, with the driver and come back together with him as well.

"You'll start work tomorrow morning, make sure to fill out this paperwork beforehand. I'm going to sleep."

He handed her the papers and walked away from her, glancing back momentarily and catching her eye. Sanyukta could sense his longing, his desire, his need to have her back, but he didn't say a word and walked off instead.

Sanyukta looked down, her heart sinking. "I came here for work," she told herself, trying to be headstrong, her eyes filling up with tears, "I will not get distracted. If he doesn't want me anymore, it's okay. My life doesn't depend on him."

Then she proceeded to fill out her paperwork.

Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

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Loved it Saffi...

PEHLE tih it's Sanyuktas fault and upar se shez the one whose kinda throwing attitude...🤣

Anyways I loved it like all the updates...

Update ASAP...

Love
Ayesha...

Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago

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Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Superbbb...
The thirst of their desires to be together was growing on n on...i loved the pain u portrayed...
this chapter indeed was awesome saffiii⭐️

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Craziness123
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Loved it Saffi...

PEHLE tih it's Sanyuktas fault and upar se shez the one whose kinda throwing attitude...🤣

Anyways I loved it like all the updates...

Update ASAP...

Love
Ayesha...

LOL I don't understand SanDhir! They're so comfortable with each other that they can show the other attitude when they're the wrong ones. 😆 Thanks! 😆