'Loota Khazana' Poetry

KSians,

Below, I've penned some lines that came to me from nowhere... But I think they reflect upon my Ladoo's current state of distress... and perhap's Bani's as well...

Loota Khazana... (A Lost Treasure)

Chale tehe dariyaa paar, lehron ke sahaare…

Ubharte paani mein lipte huey, kahin dikhey na kinaare…

Musquraye hum… khushi ki kalpana karte…

Mit gaya makhauta… judaai ke gham mein marte…

Tah paas jeene ka tumse bahana…

Mohabbat bhaare is dil ka… waqt ke panno ne loota khazana…

Translation

Set ahead to cross the sea, with help of the waves…

In vicious waters, the shores were nowhere to the eyes…

Smile, I did… in anticipation of a reason to…

Slide away the faade… as I died in the sorrows of separation…

I had a reason to my existence… in you…

A heart filled in love... hath lost it's greatest treasure in time's inevitable grasp....

How much more to suffer?

Cheers,

dc

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Wow, just came across this, you have an amazing talent!!
Beautiful poem!

dc
luv this poem andthe lines u left on the other thread...
u r amazing...girl.. 👏

Fabulous dear....really good 👏

Aww dc sweety - those words are so beautiful!😳

I feel they would go wonderfully with the JB situation - maybe even AD if his past is as depressing as the recent storylines!😕

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

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Wow, just came across this, you have an amazing talent!!
Beautiful poem!

Thanks Sheena! Talent walent kuch nahin re... just some random ramblings😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: aperture

dc
luv this poem andthe lines u left on the other thread...
u r amazing...girl.. 👏

Lol... thanks Bhavi... you're too kind to me.😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Je_aime

Fabulous dear....really good 👏

Tu aimes?... Merci pour les commentos😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: nibbles

Aww dc sweety - those words are so beautiful!😳

I feel they would go wonderfully with the JB situation - maybe even AD if his past is as depressing as the recent storylines!😕

Nibbu!! You're so sweet lil girl! Thanks a bunch... Waise I started my ff... again😆 As for what context this fits, I suppose you're right?

Cheers,

dc

Wow! Beautiful poem hun!
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Keep it up!

V.