NEW!!!!!PART- 4 page 3 Love finds its way

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Hi Everyone, as you can probably see that I am a newbie on IF right now, I have been reading a lot of fan-fics in this section and I liked them so I decided to write a fan fic of my own, I hope you all like it and support me in writing this fan-fic. Feel free to offer any suggestions or criticism, they will only help me write better. Thank you and hope you enjoy it.

This story is called Love finds its way and it will consist of a lot of our favorite characters from our favorite serial KYPH. The character list is as follows.

Kripa Sharma- A medical student in America who goes to Delhi, India for her four year residency (for those who don't know, once you complete you studies for medical you have to do a residency for a couple years) she moved to America when she was in around middle school before which she was in Delhi...yes she will be back home.

Harshini Kapoor- one of the friends in Kripa's group of friends when she was in Delhi.

Aliya Mehta – another one of Kripa's friends in the same group

Prithvi Gupta- in the same group

Josh Chopra – in the same group as well.

Introduction

Ok so this was Kripa's group of friends in India and to Kripa's luck she will get to meet them again after so many years, in the past couple years kripa has lost some touch with her friends because of obvious reasons so her friends don't know that she is coming to delhi and kripa has no idea that she will be able to see her friends again too. Though kripa still remembers her friends and cherishes the moments that they spent together. Her friends also miss the life of their group Kripa.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1
Kripa is in her house in New Jersey, just about to leave for the airport, and Gayatri and Suryaben are with her in her drive way.

Gayatri- Kripa why won't you let me come to the airport with you.
Kripa –Mom, you know why, before leaving for India I just want to happy smiling faces, I won't be able to go if you come to the airport with me.
Suryaben- Gayatri, Kripa is right. Let her go, she is a big girl now and she can take care of her self. (now addressing Kripa) Kripa beta, best of luck, give us a call once you reach there ok.
Suryaben- there will be a private taxi driver outside the airport with a sign with your name on it, he will be your driver until you get your own car and driver's licence. First he will take you to the national bank so you can get your money and then he will take you to your apartment.
Kripa- Thanks dad, you are the best, Bye mom, Bye dad, I love you both.

(Whoosh Kripa is in Delhi now)
Kripa arrives in the Delhi airport and stretches her arm out to take in all the fresh air of her hometown within her. She is wearing short denim shorts and a light blue tank top, as she knew it was going to be really hot in Delhi. As soon as she steps in the parking lot she spots a huge sign with KRIPA SHARMA written on it. She knew where to go from there.
The first thing Kripa does is go to the bank. She is standing in the line and there are two really hot guys in the line right beside her. The two guys are Prithvi and Josh.
Both Prithvi and Josh notice Kripa and Prithvi being a total flirt starts checking Kripa out.
Josh-he is more on the decent side tells Prithvi, there is no use to hit on her as she is an NRI and she will never fall for him.
Prithvi- NRI or not, no girl says no to Prithvi Gupta.
Kripa who had been listening to this conversation was rather amused until she heard him say Prithvi Gupta.
Kripa walks up to them and questioningly says Prithvi Gupta???
Prithvi- do you know me?
Kripa- Prithvi did you not recognize me? I am Kripa. Remember Kripa Sharma, we went to school together.
Josh- Kripa you, I am Josh Chopra, and the three of them break into hugs and recollecting old memories. After almost two hours of non-stop chatting Kripa says that she needs to go to her apartment.
Prithvi- what, there is no way you will be living alone in your apartment now, you are coming home with me and you will live with us.
Josh, Prithvi and Kripa go to Prithvi's house where they meet Aaliya and Harshini. Btw Prithvi, Aaliya, Josh and Harshini all live in the same block. Now that all five friends are together again they decide to re-live their old days by going to the amusement park. They go on every single ride and have a lot of fun. It has been a couple of weeks and the group has become really close now. Kripa also finds out that Prithvi and Aaliya are in love and so are Josh and Harshini. She is happy for all of them but feels a little sad about the fact that there is no one is her life yet. But she believes in love and she believes that she will meet her tall, dark and handsome, her Prince Charming very soon.

Hi guys, I know that there is no Angad in the story yet, but I will try to introduce Angad in the next few parts and then AK love story will begin. Please leave comments and tell me if I should continue it.
Edited by bolly_babe - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey...i am the first one to comment...but i think its a really nice begining to the story...cant wait for more part...GL...and continue soon..

P.S. i am a newbie too and i started a new Fanfic too..if you want to check it out...here is the link..

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=637862&TPN=5
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi everyone
I would like to thank everyone who read the story and a special thank you to those who left comments. I will try to continue today but if i am not able to do it today then i promise that i will have an update by tomorrow.
Edited by bolly_babe - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aqmazing part
sounds really intresting
cant wait till angad comes
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi everyone , thanks for all the encouraging comments, the next part will be up in between 30 to 60 minutues from now...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi everyone , here is the next part- before i continue, i would like to make a correction, which is that Prithvi's last name is actually Khanna, Prithvi Khanna as he is Angad's younger brother

Part Two

Aaliya and Harshini went on a trip to Australia and New Zealand for the summer as a part of a summer program in their school, and since everybody has summer vacations going on, Kripa, Prithvi and Josh hang out together and have gotten really close.

While Aaliya and Harshini are gone the two guys decide to flirt with other girls just to have a little fun but as long as Kripa is there, how can this happen.

Josh being the more decent of the two is still loyal to Harshini and doesnt not go as far as asking the girl out, while prithvi has met up with 4 different girls and also given out his phone numbers.

Now Josh and Kripa decide to gang up on Prithvi, so they hide Prithvi's phone and when the girls call him Josh answers the phone and tells all 4 of the girls to meet him at a particular restruant at 7:00 p.m. for dinner.

And Kripa calls Prithvi, as 1 of the 4 girls and tells Prithvi where to meet.

At the restraunt and 7 p.m. All four of them show up at the same time giving Prithvi the shock of his life, The four girls see each other and get hysterical and a major cat fight takes place between them.

Then someone from the back, (Kripa to be specific) yells, "you should be beating up Prithvi instead of each other."

Since all four of them like the idea they start to attack Prithvi.

Girl 1- "you cheat, you liar," gives him a tight slap on the cheek

Girl 2- "you are the biggest loser in the world" and slaps him on the other cheek.

Girl 3- "I though you were breaking up with Aaliya for me, but here you are, now I will tell Aaliya myself what you are doing behind her back" and punches him in the stomach

Girl 4- now this girl is more masculine than the others and also she is the only one wearing pants, so she kicks him right where it hurts.

and all four girls march out in line.

It all went so fast that it took him at least 5 minutes for everything to sink in, but one thing Prithvi didnt understand was How Did This Happen??? that is until he saw Kripa and Josh laughing there heads off in the table near by, then Kripa and Josh come up and try to show sympathy for there dear, sweet, innocent friend, Prithvi.

Prithvi- Its ok guys I dont want want you to rub salt on my wounds now

at this both Kripa and Josh start laughing again, which makes Prithvi madder than ever.

Kripa- haha Prithvi haha you know you will look back at this and lauh with us in the future haha

Josh- haha you might as well haha laugh with us now

Prithvi- I dont about the future but at this moment...this is still very funny hahaha... and they all enjoy their dinner.

Next morning their is a lot of hustle bustle in Prithvi's house as the oldest son of the house, the one and only Angad is coming back for summer breaks. Angad used to go to acting/music school in Mumbai.

Everyone including Prithvi was really excited, and for some weird reason even Kripa was really excited. Kripa felt a really different sense of excitement, one that she had never felt before. And as the time for Angad's arrival came closer Kripa's heart started beating faster.

Then Kripa saw Prithvi sitting in a corner looking pretty upset.

Kripa-whats the matter prithvi, why are you so sad

Prithvi- nothing Kripa, nothing at all.

Kripa- come on Prithvi you can tell me

Prtihvi- Actually its Angad, Kripa he is my older brother but we have always treated each other as best friends and I am really worried about him.

Kripa- but why, tell me, maybe i can help.

Prithvi-actually the thing is that two years ago the love of angad's life, Mishty, died after which angad totally changed his outlook at life, he doesnt worry about his personal life at all, now all he cares about is being the best singer/actor in the world, girls are crazy over him but he doesnt even look at a girl, for the rest of us angad got over it but actually angad is not happy. He needs someone that would love him, take care of him, and be his better half, but mom and dad do not want to wait now, they want to fix angad's marriage as soon as they can, now they have given me 2 months time to either make him agree for an arranged marriage or make him find a girl he would want to marry.

Kripa- I understand how worried you must be Prithvi and dont worry, I promise you that Angad will find a suitable girl for him in these two months, I promise I will help you.

Preview- Kripa talks to Angad

Hi everyone I know that this part was a little long and probably not much happened but A-K love story is about to start soon, I hope you all bear with me...please leave comments, they are very encouraging, and feel free to make predictions...

Edited by bolly_babe - 18 years ago
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Hi everyone, looks like no one has read part 2 yet, not a single comment, never mind, I can wait until you guys have time, for now since I have time for a short update I will do it.

Part 3

Today is the day of Angad's arrival and everyone is really happy to see him. Angad also greets everyone politely and meets with Prithvi and Kripa. Prithvi introduces AK an then Angad remembers Kripa as a little girl when they used to go to school. Angad says, Kripa tum...remember when you use to go to school with two pony tails...

Kripa-yeh i remember and I also remember how you used to make fun of me

Angad-well you used to be like that then i couldnt resist making fun of you, and everytime i would say somthing to you would start crying and run to your room.

Kripa- yeh i guess I was like that then but dont worry now I have changed and now if you make fun of me, I will make even more fun of you

Angad-whoa is that a threat

Kripa- no, its a promise

Angad- waise Kripa you have changed, you used to be so fat then and now you have lost so much weight.

Kripa- thanks Angad

Angad-wait when did I say it was a compliment

and Kripa whines and starts running after him to hit him.

Prithvi is just standing there ad watching feeling left out, then he yells behind AK to make then stop.

Prithvi-Ok guys I have something very important to discuss, Angad you dont know what all happened when you were not here, mom and dad have started looking for suitable girls for you

Angad- so what let them look for girls, I dont mind

Kripa-no Angad, its not that easy, all girls will run after your looks and money, we have to find the right girl for you

Prithvi-Kripa is right, so you will have to help us in this now, you will meet these girls mom has picked out ad we will see if any of them is the right girl or not.

Angad-whatever

Ok so now operation angad starts. Prithvi and kripa decide to send Angad on dinner dates with the "suitabe girls"

Day 1

Angad meets this girl and they go to a restraunt, as a gentleman Angad pulls out the chair for the girl but he pulled it out after the girl is about to sit so she falls on the floor instead. She snarls at Angad and leaves

Day 2

Angad meets the girl and they are talking, aparently Angad knows her

Angad-you go to college in Mumbai right

Girl-Yeh you remember me

Angad-of course, remember how many times you tried to grab my attention by wearing skimpy outfits and creating a scene infront of me

Girl-WHAT

Angad-if you couldn't impress me then, how do you expect to impress me now

The Girl just leaves

And one by one all these dates are unsucessful

Kripa-what Angad you cant do a thing, I mean how hard it is for you to give a shot, every time something has to go wrong

Prithvi- I think Kripa, Angad should practice first, maybe he is just nervous,

Kripa- Prithvi you and your silly ideas

Josh-no Kripa I think he is right this time

Prithvi- yeh dude

Kripa- ok fine but we will need a girl

Prithvi and Josh together- you mean we have a girl

Kripa- If you mean me then forget it I am not doing it.

Prithvi-come on Kripa just one fake date

Kripa- ok fine whatever

So Kripa gets ready, to make it real Kripa dresses up she wears a green dress which highlight her curves making her look prettier than ever and exposing her back

Angad is wearing a black suit with a green shirt and he is looking smokin hot...

When kripa comes down the stairs Angad just looks at her and doesnt even realize when his jaw drops open...Kripa notices this and a deep shade of red forms on her cheeks,

Angad- You are looking really beautiful Kripa

now this date goes perfect, to begin with they match even though it wasnt planned, both of them try to deny it but they are attracted towards each other and they hit it off really well, they are both really comfortable in each others company.

Kripa- so Angad how come you did not mess up even once tonight

Angad- Kripa everything feels just right doesnt it, i mean the time is right, the place is right and most important of all the girl is right

Angad goes down on his knees and says Kripa till today i refused to believe in love but you made me realize what love is, it is not somethig one can describe but can only be felt and my heart beats only for you Kripa, I Love You Kripa, i really do

Kripa has tears in her eyes, she doesnt know what to say

Ok guys this was the next part, will Kripa say yes or no, will AK be together forever or no, will Love find its Way, keep reading to find out

Edited by bolly_babe - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I guess since no one is reading or commenting so there is no poit for me to continue, so sorry that no one liked it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey u can't end like tht
ur fanfic it's fantastic!

i am a silent reader tht's y i never send comments but plzz don't end like thiss!!!

if u continue there will be a llot of people who gonna read! they just need time!

continue soon

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