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HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW



PART 28

With a hope of finding him at home, Geet quickly ran towards her car determined to stop him. There was no way she was going to let go him away from her life taking so much of pain with himself for giving her a happiness which meant nothing without him, he had suffered enough; they had suffered enough. The tears constantly blurred her vision as she tried pulling out the traffic but she was hardly able to hold herself together, it hurt too much. The only thing keeping her from losing to her pain was his smiling face as he slept peacefully in her arms the other day. She wasn't going to let him burn in guilt and pain all along now when he deserved some peace in his life..

Panic washed over her when she looked at the road in front of her as there seemed to be no way she could get through on time with the busy traffic covering the streets of London and she couldn't afford to lose time. After diverting her route, as she touched the highway she stomped on the gas pedal speeding away through the highway. She wanted to see him at any cost, even if it meant speeding which she despised the most. She hated driving on her own but today there was nothing which could stop her. All the while she was speeding through the traffic all she for praying for was to be able to find him. The tears were still streaming down her eyes until a deafening sound pierced through her ears and then it was all blank. She didn't have any clue as to what happened or where she was, the only thing she was the pain that shot through her. There was darkness all around, she couldn't even open her eyes to anything around her and the only thing that she could feel at that point was the pain that was consuming her.

Adi, don't argue with me over this.. It's my final decision. You stay here taking care of the project until it's done, I am going back to India today. Maan spoke furiously on the phone throwing in his things into his bag. He couldn't stay in the house a minute longer to hurt her. Her vulnerable state had broken him to no limits, he would rather go away from her than hurt her once more. Tears pricked the corner of his eyes at the thought of going away from her once more, he had barely enjoyed her presence in his life once again after what felt like an eternity of pain and yet again his fate managed to play with him. It was time to let go of all the hopes.! Maan quickly wiped away his tears as Adi's voice interrupted his chain of thoughts once again.!

Sir, how can you.? The board members will be furious, they wanted you here for the project.. Adi spoke frantically on the phone. Maan's words were a nasty shock.

It's my company, I will convince them. That you don't need to worry about, I'll work on this from India itself rest you can handle over here. Make sure Geet doesn't struggle over the project. Also keep an eye on Rathode, make sure he doesn't enter KC again.This discussion is over Adi. Maan snapped at him over the phone..

But sir.. Adi spoke into the dead phone. Maan walked out of the house signalling the driver to stay put and drove towards the airport. There was no looking back to his decision, if his absence from her life is what kept her at peace then that's what she would have. His phone vibrated in it's dock catching his attention. It was Adi again. Maan cursed him in anger, there was nothing that could stop him from going back. He cared less about a bunch of board of directors when it was for her happiness he was doing this. How could be so ignorant to her feelings and read the thing he wanted to read in her eyes. Without even considering her state of mind, he had assumed that she was happy with his return whereas the actual truth was, she was yet again suffocated..It always his love driving him beyond the points where he could see her pain. Why didn't she just say it.? He had taken those cruel words once, he had been ready to hear them once again. But the only thought that bothered him was, why did she stay with him the entire night if his presence suffocated her so much. How could she have suffered in pain to just watch him at peace.? How could he be so wrong to understand her when he claimed to love her.? His thoughts were broken when once again his phone vibrated irritating him. Maan kept his eyes on the road trying his best to get away from the place as soon as possible. His phone rang once again irritating him to no limits. Parking his car on the side of the road Maan attended Adi's call ready to blast him off.

What the hell is it Adi.? If I am not attending your call, it means I dont want to talk right now. How hard is that to understand.? He snapped angrily into the phone.

Maan Sir.. Please.. Don't go.. Sir.. Adi stammered making Maan angrier.

Adi, I think I have made myself clear. Will you stop calling me again and again to say the same thing.? I said I care less about the board, it's my company and I know to deal with it. He barked at him through gritted teeth.. Adi gulped hard listening to his deadly voice. He realized Maan was in a terrible mood and had to be told the truth before he would shoot him through the phone.

No sir, it's not about the board. It's about... He stammered unsure of how to tell him the news. He knew how Maan could react hearing his words but he knew it had to be told.

What is it.?? Is everything okay at home... Maan asked frantically somewhat realizing what Adi could be referring to.

Yes sir, it's all okay at home but it's about Geet Ma'am.. Maan heard Adi speak in a low, scared voice. His senses froze as soon as Adi took her name. His thoughts went back to her broken state. Panic shook him as he thought of every worst thing that was possible.

What about her.?? What happened to her.? Answer me Adi, what is it.? Maan almost screamed into the phone. His body went numb as he heard Adi's words from the other side.

Go there now, I am coming.!!! He spoke coldly into the phone closing his eyes trying to control his anger which was on a new level by now. He instantly disconnected the call knowing if he stayed on it any longer, he would loose it. Furiously stomping on to the accelerator he sped towards the hospital. It was where she was, his anger knew no bounds as he thought of the words spoken by Adi. She was hurt, the one thing he didn't want to even think of was now happening. Why.? Why did she have to hurt herself when he was ready to leave her and go.! His hand came down harshly on the steering as he punched it furiously. Controlling his raging anger, he madly drove towards the place where his entire world seemed to be crashing down into pieces..


" She is unconcious and isnt responding to the treatment, nothing can be said right now " The doctors words rang in his ears breaking him bit by bit. He closed his eyes and held his head between his hands trying to hold back his tears. She was only a few steps away from him, battling for her life and here he sat helpless unable to reach her. It had been 4 horus since he had been waiting outside the operation theater waiting for a word about her but all that was there was the scary silence. Wasn't it enough that he lived in pain all these years without her that now he was to face his worst fears of loosing her forever. All the years he spent without her atleast his heart was at peace because he knew she existed but it all semeed to be giving away now. His restlessness was rising to new heights as he sat in front of the theatre with all dreadful thoughts filling his mind.

Sir, should I inform Daadimaa about this.? She must be expecting your call, you haven't called her after coming here.. Adi quietly asked Maan knowing this may not be the best time to trouble him. He genuinely wanted to console Maan, but knowing him very well, he knew Maan wasn't easy to be handled and only Daadimaa could handle him.

No, she shouldn't come to know of this. She already has a lot to deal with. Do anything but she shouldnt come to know of this at any cost. I want to be alone Adi, you go to the office and handle everything. Call me if there is anything important.. Am I clear Adi.. Maan said in a cold voice. Adi simply nodded and left the place following his orders and leaving him alone. Maan once again looked at the theatre and the tears slid down his eyes as he imagined her struggling for her life.

Not you too Geet, please dont go.! I wont be able to live anymore.. Come back.. He silently prayed and paced along the corridor waiting for those doors to open and he could just get to see her. The tears refused to dry his eyes, he had given up on his fate with the confidence that it couldnt get any worse after her leaving him but here it was testing him once again. It was a test he wasnt able to sustain, it was slowly killing him. With every minute that was passing by, his heart seemed to be sinking more as his painful memories from his past which were slowly drowning him. It felt like he would never resurface again..

Mr.Khurana.? A voice called out to him and he looked up to find the doctor standing infront of him. Maan's heartbeat quickened as he saw the worry written on the doctors face. Fear gripped his heart as he got to his feet and approached the doctor.

How is she doctor.? He asked carefully in an urgent voice keeping it from breaking. The only thing that could break him was her.! He looked towards the room to see if he can get a glimpse of her but he couldn't see anything..

Mr. Khurana, the operation was successful but we will only know her exact status once she gains consciousness.. Till then I can't say anything.. The doc said making Maan furious.

What do you mean by you can't say anything.? You are the doctor here, if not you who else will.? Maan said in a raised voice totally enraged by his words. He started walking towards the OT but the doctor held him back. He wanted a glimpse of her. The entire time he sat there praying for her and when she was just a glimpse away from her, he couldn't hold himself back.

Mr. Khurana Please, this is a hospital. I understand you are worried for the patient but this is not the way. Please listen to what I have to say.. The doctor said in a firm voice. Maan looked at him angrily and nodded trying to calm himself down.

Has she been very stressed lately or was there something bothering her.? The doctor asked shocking Maan. Every word he was asked hit him hard like a wave pushing him deeper into his ocean of guilt ! Everything about his presence was bothering her.! The reason for her miserable condition was standing right there and he was helpless about everything that was happening around him. He looked down trying to form his words when the doctor read through his silence.

Mr. Khurana, I think I know your answer. I guessed that when I saw the way she was brought in and I was told about the accident. Mr. Khurana, she was definitely mentally stressed when she went in and plunged herself into the accident. Normal people try all means to avoid the accident but what she did was not a sign of normal behaviour. Either she was oblivious to what was happening around her or her actions were on purpose. She was fortunate that she wasn't injured fatally but her injuries are deep enough to cause a worry. She has around 60 stitches on her leg and a few more injuries over her body. The most worrying injury she has is on her head. Though the operation was successful but that is the reason I said we have to wait for her to conscious to know her exact position, till then we can't say anything. Please be patient, we are trying everything we can. The doctor said and Maan stood there rooted by his words. Every word the doctor spoke slashed through his heart like a dagger ripping it apart. His body was numb with shock, did she try to kill herself.?? The thought itself killed him inside and all he wanted to do was to scream out. The pain was consuming his heart and the tears made their way down his eyes. How could she even do such a thing, he was ready to go away from her life but still she hurt herself in such a way that had not killed her but had killed him. Looking at him so lost, the doctor patted his shoulder and left him alone, leaving him to drown in his miseries. More than angry, he was broken with her actions. He couldn't find his own voice to even cry in pain, it were his silent tears that did the work yet the pain didn't seem to lessen, it only consumed him more.


He sat on the couch looking at her lying lifelessly on the bed. He had by now cursed himself a thousand times.! Every time he saw her injuries, he could only curse himself for breaking her to such an extent. Her life had changed the moment he entered it and now she was battling her own life because of him again. Why didn't she just push him away again instead of doing this to herself. It had been 2 days she was lying lifelessly on the bed, with only the beep of the monitor making sure she was still fighting. He wanted her to fight, he wanted her to wake up so he could ask for her forgiveness and leave her life once and for all. Yes he was angry with her, he was hurt too but he kept mum all the while she lay there unconscious knowing he would break down the moment he would try to say something. His heart begged her to keep fighting but he only sealed the pain within himself not letting it out for even a moment. His thoughts were broken when the nurse called out him informing him about the doctor wanting to see him. He glanced in her direction and left the room unknowingly that she had already sensed his presence.!

Doctor, why isn't she conscious yet.? It's been more than 48 hours.. Maan said I a low voice as the doctor sat in front of him discussing her latest reports. According to the doctor, she was getting better but nothing about her seemed better to his eyes, she as still pale and lifeless.

Mr. Khurana, it's not easy. Her body needs time to recover from the shock and injuries. Her injuries will take time to heal, so you will have to patient. The doctor assured him and was just about to talk when the nurse hurried into the room panicking. Hearing her words the doctor ran out of the room leaving behind a stunned Maan. Following the doctor Maan ran towards her room and barged into it and the sight stunned him.

Let me go, I have to go.. She screamed trying to get out of the grips that held her trying to stop her from running away from the bed. Maan stood near the door relieved to see her back to her senses. His heart had finally found it's beat after 2 long days of agony. Her scream snapped him out of his thoughts and he stood there stunned at the way she was thrashing in their grip. He wanted to go to her and crush her in his arms and never let her go, but he knew he couldn't do it ! It didn't matter if she didn't want him anymore or the fact that he was ready to leave her for her happiness; the only thing that mattered was that she was okay.

Please let me go, I have to go to Maan.. He will go away...Please.. She sobbed screaming at the people who tried holding her down. The moment he heard her words, he looked at her pain stricken face in shock and his heart swelled in happiness. She wanted him.? The way she was pleading for them to let her go was heart wrenching, it reflected her agony. The desperate cries were enough for him to forget his pain and take her into his arms.! He was watching her with tears in his eyes and before he could take another step towards her, she pushed away the people harshly and got off the bed. Maan eyes widened in horror as her agonized scream pierced through the room once again and she lost her balance with the pain from the stitches shooting up her spine. Before she could fall his strong arms held her straight and crushed her into his embrace. The moment she sensed his arms around her, all her pain seemed to vanish. Her biggest pain and fear was to loose him and he was still there with her, she didn't need anything else. Her hands went around his neck pulling him tighter into the embrace while she sobbed into his shoulder with happiness that was over powering her. Maan's happiness knew no bounds.! He was expecting her to push him away but here she was, clinging to him . He was still trying to gather his thoughts when her plea reached his ears.

Please don't go Maan, stay with me please. I'm sorry.. I can't loose you.. She sobbed holding him stunning Maan with her words. He cared less about anything else at the moment, all he knew was he had to lessen her pain. She was there, in his arms; the thing he wanted all along was happening. It was time he let it go..There was no way he could push her away.!! He wrapped her arms around her tightly when he heard her wince. Panic washed over him and he tried to pull her out of the hug but she wasn't ready to let go.

No. She said tightening her arms around him.

Geet, you are hurt. I am not going anywhere, I'm right here with you. You need to let go. He said trying once again to pull her out of the hug but she was being adamant.

No, please no.! I won't let you go.. She said but her to utter shock she heard nothing. Not even her own voice.! Her lips did move but no sound reached her...Numbness took over her senses as she loosened her grip on him and looked at his face. That's when she noticed, there was pin drop silence in the room. It was just not possible.!! Her eyes caught his lips moving but there was no sound.!! That's when it dawned upon her; the silence wasn't in the room, it was her head.! Her hands reached upto her ears but there was no sound at all. Maan watched her in confusion as she let him go abruptly and stared around the room with her hands covering her ears. He called out to her but she wasn't responding to his call when she stood a few inches from him. His hands cupped her face trying to pry her hands off her ears but she was just not in her senses.

Maan, why can't I hear anything.? She whispered. She knew the words had left her lips but no sound came back to her, not even her own words. In her agony to reach him and her happiness on seeing him she was oblivious to the silence around her. It came down upon her now like a thunder, jolting her out of her senses. There was no sound that reached her ears. He was watching her in confusion until her words hit him. He started at her face, her eyes were wide with shock and they had questions in them. He could see she was still trying to listen to a few sounds and the way she was trying broke his heart. It wasn't easy for him to digest the truth that had just dawned upon him but he knew it would break her.! Tears pricked the corner of his eyes and he wordlessly pulled her into his embrace crushing her tightly against this chest. How cruel could fate be to them, how much more would they have to suffer in it's game.?

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hw accident happened?
i think geet was oblivious 2 her surrounding
its not entirely maan's fault tht he thought she is vulnerable becz of him
becz in past it was like this
well the accident was a shocker
ii didnt expect this
so finally this cleared 2 maan tht she wants him
but wht abt her hearing power
double shocker

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