Do Pal...AK - Part 1 Page 1

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Do Pal Characters

Kripa Sharma - 19 yr old, studies in Brunel University, wants to be a lawyer...has a horrible past which you will find out...

Angad Khanna - 19 yr old, also studies in Brunel University, trying to move on with life...

Sanya - Kripa's best friend

Mishti - Angad's ex girlfriend, alwayz hated Kripa,

Other characters are introduced earlier....

Warning - May contain a lot of suprises......Also, the whole story will be in flashback,,!

Need 10 posts to post part 1 otherwise there no point of writing it !

Edited by mizz_sabah - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds intriguing... continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue lookin forword 2 ur FF 😛
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Part 1

Its early morning with the birds tweeting and the sun rising, and then we see a big house…'Coming Mum' She added final touches to her make up and hair and walked out of her room. She sees her bracelet on the floor – she looks at it and picks it up…she wants to forget everything to do with this bracelet…the man…the pain. She throws it back on the floor… We see someone coming down the stairs – its Kripa. She walks down the stairs humming the title song Kaise Ye Pyar Hai. Kripas mum is in the kitchen.

K – Mom! Im off!
M – Have some Breakfast At least..Beta
K – Dnt worry, Mom! Im not hungry
M – Ok…Bye…
K – Byee Mum

Kripa started her car and went to her university…Brunel University in Uxbridge in United Kingdom. She had lived here her whole life…and now as soon as she has turned 19 – she has started to go to university…after all she always wanted to be a lawyer.

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Kripa reached her university – she tried to find a space for her car and then noticed his car…she hid her tears in her eyes…and then found a space for her car…she parked her car making sure its far away from his car. She took her bag and headed towards the entrance to the school – she looked around looking for her friends when her eyes locked on him…the one who gave her so much pain…it was unbelievable…she smirked…thinking its all over…no point of thinking about it now…

'Kripa'

Kripa heard her name…she looked around to see her friend named Sanya. Sanya was her best friend and they have known each other since childhood – they shared everything together. She smiled at Sanya…

'Sanya! Lets go Class' Kripa said
'Ok, Chalo'

Today, she had to learn about divorces and try to win custody of children – she moved uncomfortably in her seat taking in the pain…because of that person…All students were coming into the hall…

'The lecture is about to start! Please be seated' said the professor

Everyone sat in their seats…..He walked in…everything felt different…Kripa glanced at him from the corner of her eyes and saw him laughing…how can he laugh…after all what happened….he's enjoying life while she is slowly sinking into depression…
Kripa sat in the lecture in her own world – not listening to anything… but always thinking. After the lecture…she heard laughing and turned around to see It was him…him and his friends…he caught her eye…and he could sense all the pain to his eyes…

'Kripa…He called…She closed her eyes deep in pain and turned around

' I was wondering if you want a lift'

'Its…Ok…I got my own car' Kripa answered…trying hard to keep her tears inside her and the pain…

'Ok…' He walked off….Kripa closed her eyes and two tears came out of the corner of her eyes….

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Enjoy

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Posted: 18 years ago
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really good start plz continue?? Was has happened to her?? plz reply navi 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!! tht was sad, but AWESUM!!! 👏
👏 intriguing... CANNOT wait to find out
more... continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a good start
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cool! wonder wot happpened btw. them
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start!! Very interesting, I am guessing the guy is Angad... wondering about the past... Continue Soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start 👏
continue soon

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