Arjun Subhadra ff.....Chapter 6 on Page 9

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Hello Guys,
My FF on Parth-Subhadra..
Its the prequel of Nivu's Ardi ff...it basically showcases their relation as best friends...how Subhadra copes up with visions & knowing the fact that she would have to leave Paarth...so hope u people like it...




Prolouge Page 1

Siblings meet Page 2

Soul mystery unveilied Page 3

They meet Page 5

Confessions & Rememberance Page 6

It comes back one by one Page 7

The dreams, the nightmares Page 9

PS :: Guys- can you please send me a buddy request if you want me to pm you the updates.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paarth-Subhadra:: A Tale of Friendship, Love & Sacrifices

By: Sayee

Last revised: 09-06-14

Summary: Prolouge

Disclaimer: Only the story idea is mine.

Ship: Paarth/Subhadra

"The greatest love stories are not those in which love is only spoken, but those in which it is acted upon." --Steve Maraboli, Unapologetically You: Reflections on Life and the Human Experience--

"True love is finding your soulmate in your best friend"
--Faye Hall, My Gift to You--

"A bond between souls is ancient - older than the planet."
--Dianna Hardy, The Witching Pen--

Prolouge

Draupadi fell

Sahadev fell

Nakul fell

& now its me Arjun thought...& there he too fell. In that one fleeting moment his whole life played in front of his eyes, his sins came into his mind, he shared Draupadi, he was mum when she was disrobed, he couldn't save Abhimanyu from those wolves...& at last Subhadra, she suffered for his deeds, she stayed away from him for 13 long years yearning & pinning for him, but she never complained, she raised their son to fight for injustice, to fight for Draupadi, A son who made him proud by dying & what did he give her...disappointment she had trusted him with Abhimanyu & he had failed, her only son died at 16...he will make up to her...not in this birth but some other for sure...with this promise to himself he closed his eyes.

No they can't die she thought No it's not possible. The Pandavas who were never defeated...Draupadi the fiery princess who never stood to injustice...died falling through a cliff...No...Subhadra's life played in front of her...her moments with her aarya...the forlorn look on aarya's face whenever he looked at jiji...everything played in front of her eyes...she fell into a swoon...her thoughts resting on her aarya...she breathed her last promising herself that she will make her aarya & jiji stay together in their next life.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Sayee...
This is a beautiful FF. Love the way you have written the prologue! ❤️
Please do continue soon and thanks for the PM. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sayee - plz want the next part na😭
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Very Very Thoughtful Concept ! Do Continue Soon !!
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Sayee.. its beautifully written.. loved it.. waiting for more! But, I am a fan of both ArDi and ArSu. I love Arjun with Subhadra too..and i like their romance too. Can we have some nice scenes too? Not only sadness that Subhadra has to leave Arjuna and all... Subhadra too was his wife right? Umm.. this is Kalyug so maybe there will be changes. But Sayee I enjoy your ArSu stories also. I love them. But it seems like they will always be separate
Anyways.. do continue.. words and the style is really nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sayee it was wonderfull..pls update d next part soon..egearly waiting fr d next part..:)))
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Sayee.. its beautifully written.. loved it.. waiting for more! But, I am a fan of both ArDi and ArSu. I love Arjun with Subhadra too..and i like their romance too. 😭 Can we have some nice scenes too? Not only sadness that Subhadra has to leave Arjuna and all... Subhadra too was his wife right? Umm.. this is Kalyug so maybe there will be changes. But Sayee I enjoy your ArSu stories also. I love them. But it seems like they will always be separate 😭
Anyways.. do continue.. words and the style is really nice.



thanks...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do continue sayee i loved it😛
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Beautiful start. Both want to take a new birth to give happiness to each other .. pure love...

Do continue. Would love to read more..
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