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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
sayee!! Loved it!! Love how u wrote about the connection between Paarth n Madhav!! They are 1 soul 2 bodies so if one feels the pain the other will be hurt too!!
Continue plz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So Very Sweet !! Loved The Kanha-Dau Part !!!! And Oh, The Last Part Almost Brought Tears To My Eyes !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sayee loved it..the update was amazing specialy d last part was so touching loved it continue soon..!!..:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Loved it!!👏👏 Pls update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww such an adorable update yaar... update d next part soon 😊 parav !!!! finally !1 i totally love dose two <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Sayee - absolutely loving every bit of it. So sry I am late in reading it, but every bit of it is so beautiful, I am having this very sweet feeling on the inside.

I can feel how Subhi mustt be so scared, and how lucky she is too have these brothers. The three of them make such great siblings, despite her pain, their is enough love, care and cuteness in her life.

Then Madhav and Paarth meet -------- tears here😳😳😳😳😳😳

👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shlvrv_Niva

wow Sayee - absolutely loving every bit of it. So sry I am late in reading it, but every bit of it is so beautiful, I am having this very sweet feeling on the inside.

I can feel how Subhi mustt be so scared, and how lucky she is too have these brothers. The three of them make such great siblings, despite her pain, their is enough love, care and cuteness in her life.

Then Madhav and Paarth meet -------- tears here😳

👏👏👏



Thank u...😃..Nivu...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice prequel to niva's story...!!!! 👏👏
Loving it...!!!😉
Loved d way u showed d bond between madhav n subhi..!!! 😳
Plz update soon sayee..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paarth-Subhadra:: A Tale of Friendship, Love & Sacrifices

By: Sayee

Last revised: 15-07-14

Summary: confessions & meetings & remembrance...everything comes together.

Disclaimer: Only the story idea is mine.

Ship: Paarth/Subhadra

"I recognized you instantly. All of our lives flashed through my mind in a split second. I felt a pull so strongly towards you that I almost couldn't stop it."
J. Sterling, In Dreams

"He would reach for me in the middle of the night, nearly every single night, wrapping one of those solid arms around my waist and pulling me in close. So. Close."
Chelsie Shakespeare, The Pull

"To feel your arms around me...to feel your breath on my neck...is pleasure in itself. It is home."
Faye Hall

"Wrap your mind around my thoughts as I wrap my soul around your heart."
Munia Khan

Pandava's Residence

Parth held Krishna tight & cried in his arms, it was first time in the whole life he had felt at peace, he felt at home. Krishna detangled himself from Parth's strong hold & made him sit on the window sill. " Come on now don't cry " he said to him tracing the tears on his cheeks. " I couldn't save him Madhav, he was my dad " Parth said crying.

" Hey, look here " Krishna said tilting Parth's head holding his chin " It wasn't your fault, it was just your destiny, moreover u have Yudhishthir as your big brother, he is a shadow of your father, love him like u loved your father " Krishna explained him.

Parth looked into his eyes, it was like an ocean, an ocean in which he wanted to submerge himself in it. At last he has found his companion, his best friend.

That's when Krishna's phone started ringing, it was Satya (Satyaki) " Hello " he picked up the phone.

"where the hell r u?"

" At bua's, what happened?" Krishna asked tensed

"Subhadra, she is shouting for u for past 20 mins, I can't handle her anymore"

Krishna's heart broke in the excitement of finally meeting Paarth he had totally forgotten about Subhadra, How could he, he mentally cursed himself for forgetting about Maya.

"I will be there in 10 mins, just look after her" he said & disconnected the call.

"Paarth, I have to go now, but I promise I will be back ok" Krishna said to Paarth. Paarth held Krishna's hand tightly not letting him go. "Please, don't go" he muttered. Krishna caressed his cheeks & said " I promise u I will come back" Paarth let go of his hand halfheartedly.

Vasudeva Residence

There were 8 people amidst a circle, one in the middle & the other 7 circling him they were pouncing on him like bats, the boy was drenched in blood. One of the men hit the boy hard on his head.

" AAHHH " Subhadra shouted in her sleep. She crunched herself up again she couldn't bear the pain, it felt as if someone was deliberately pushing glass shards in her heart. " KANHA " she shouted as in habit she moved her hands trying to find Kanha but only air came " KANHA " she called out again.

She cried hard, " KANHA " she kept on calling.

A car screeched out of their house. Krishna practically burst into his room. "Maya" he called out pulling Subhadra into his arms. Subhadra held on to him tight. "They killed him, they killed that boy Kanha" she murmmured.

Krishna hugged her tight she was having dreams about Abhimanyu. He wiped the tears that came out of his eyes.

" look hear, open your eyes, look at me " he commanded Subhadra. Subhadra slowly opened her eyes, her eyes met his, she felt a soothing effect pass on her whole body, the pain she had felt few minutes ago had completely vanished.

" I am sorry, I left u alone " he said, wiping her tears with one hand & pulled her closer with other. " I am sorry " he whispered kissing her forehead.

Subhadra smiled at him, "u don't have to say sorry" she said garlanding her hands in his neck. " don't say sorry " she said hugging him tight.

" Where did u go? " she asked in her childish voice which he loved the most.

" went to bua's house " he replied.

" bua? " she asked with a confused face.

And then Krishna sat & told her the story of Pritha.

A week has passed since Pritha's family shifted. Krishna spends most of his time in their house helping them, especially Paarth. It was night 10'o clock when he came back home tired, he entered his room hoping to find Subhadra waiting for him, but she was not there. Strange he thought Subhadra had made it her habit to sleep with him. where is she? he thought.

" Maya " he called out searching for her, he entered her room, to find her sleeping in her bed, covering herself with one of his shirts. She was curled up as if she was afraid of something.

" Maya " he slowly whispered in her ears. Subhadra woke up with a start & looked straight in his face. She was angry with him.

She got up from her bed & asked him " So back from Paarth's house?" anger flaring up.

"what happened to u?" Krishna asked concerned.

"What happened to me?" Subhadra flared up " I wait for u for a month & then when u come back, u r busy with some other guy, handling his life, what about ur sister? u forgot about me the moment he came into your life" Subhadra said every thing in one go.

"It's nothing like that, Maya" Krishna slowly moved forward, pulling her towards him. "then what is it explain it to me?" Subhadra demanded.

"he is my friend Subhi, isn't my responsibility to help him" Krishna said softly.

"I am your sister, I need u too" Subhadra stated.

" I am sorry, look I will do whatever u tell me, but please don't be angry with me, Please " he whispered in her ears.

" I want to meet him " she stated.

Pandava's residence

Krishna & Subhadra stood in front of large mansion. " Are u sure, u want to meet hm?" Krishna asked her umpteenth time.

"100% Sure" came the reply.

They started walking, when they reached the threshold a sudden fear gripped Subhadra's heart, she held Krishna's hand tightly.

Krishna rang the doorbell. A women in her late thirties opened the door.

"Krishna" Pritha said smiling " & this must be Subhadra" she said looking at Subhadra warmly. Subhadra bent down & touched her feat. Krishna introduced her to every one, but her eyes searched for only one person, the culprit who was distancing her brother from her, she is going to have a talk with him, she is going to make it clear to him that he can be friends with Krishna but to a limit. She started searching for him. A boy of Krishna's age was standing in the garden, looking at something.

"Paarth" she called out she wanted to confirm if it was him before pouncing on him. She walked towards him. " Paarth " she called out again.

" Yes " said the boy & turned towards the voice.

Subhadra stood astounded

Warm brown eyes, the color of milk chocolate - the exact same color that Krishna has.

Heat flooded through her body, stronger than before when she had nightmares, but it was a new kind of heat - not a burning.

It was glowing.

Everything inside her came undone as she stared at the porcelain face of Paarth. All the walls that held her to his life sliced apart in swift cuts, like clipping the strings to a bunch of balloons.

She slowly started walking towards him.

flash!

They both were falling from a cliff, Paarth struggled to get hold of her.

flash!

they were in the mandap getting married

flash!

Paarth held her hand tightly in his, they both were walking in the gardens hand in hand

flash!

he was making love to her in the bed

flash!

he stood in bark dress, leaving her alone with an unborn baby

flash!

he was hugging her, they both were crying, dead Abhimanyu's body lay beside them.

flash!

he was going again leaving her alone, for his last journey.

flash!

She was not left drifting. A new string held her where she was.

Not one string, but a million. Not strings, but steel cables. A million steel cables all tying her to one thing - to the person she loved.

She could see that now - the dreams, the hazel eyes, the boy in the middle of the circle, but now it was plain.

She stood in front of him tears flowing from her eyes. Her hand mechanically went towards his face.

Paarth stood perplexed by this girl's behavior.

Her hand touched his forehead, slowly went down, touching his eyes, his cheeks, his lips. She stopped there

"Aarya" she muttered & then darkness engulfed her & she fell straight into Paarth's waiting arms.

Edited by sayee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks for the pm...love the story

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