Arjun Subhadra ff.....Chapter 6 on Page 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
nice one sayee!!! continue!!!
loved the way you wrote the flashes!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Loved paarth subhadra meeting... and dose flashes wer d highli8... continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
I was waiting for dis
Very nice update
Loved d way you showed her visions n those flash things were gr8.
Update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT -especially ArSu meet...so beautiful. SAYEEE - u r finally fulfilling my ArSu fantasy. I am so hardcore for ArDi and ArSu both...I decided to fulfill my Ardi dream by myself, but you are giving me ArSu too - thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Such A Brilliant Update !!! Loved Every Line Of It !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think this should be a Krishna Subhadra FF 😊 you write nicely Sayee... :D And I love the quotes you put before starting... but can it not be parth subhadra FF coz Subahdra thinking "I will have to go when Draupadi comes" is kinda bad. How mean.. I like ArDi but that does not mean Subhadra has no importance
Just my views..nothing else..
and loved your lines keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awesome update sayee..loved d flashes..cntinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
sayee!! Late reply!! Awesome update hon!! I am feeling so bad for Subhi!! but Drau has already suffered enough burying her love in the deep for Paarth!!! so i want it to be an ArDi but if u want to continue as Arsu then also its fine with me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paarth-Subhadra:: A Tale of Friendship, Love & Sacrifices

By: Sayee

Last revised: 23-07-14

Summary: it comes back one by one

Disclaimer: Only the story idea is mine.

Ship: Paarth/Subhadra

"Sometimes, soulmates may meet, stay together until a task or life lesson is completed, and then move on. This is not a tragedy, only a matter of learning."
~Brian Weiss~

"From the moment I saw you, I wanted you in my dreams"
~John Geddes~

"Love makes you stronger among the people but makes you weak against the one you love"
~Heenashree Khandelwal~

"She had been his talisman, his cure for the insecurities and worries that he knew deep down didn't really matter, but somehow had always managed to get the best of him."
~Erik Tomblin, The Space Between~

Pandavas Residence

Paarth held that girl in his arms tightly, he didn't know who she was, he hadn't seen her ever in his entire life she still knew his name how come, he started looking here and there hoping to find someone who knew her, nobody was there. He picked her up in his arms, she was so tiny he thought, he moved towards the shed & took her to the corner & laid her on the haystack, he was about to get up, when he felt a sudden pull & he fell over the girl again, he bent down to see what pulled him, her kurta's button got stuck in his shirt's button, he tried removing it but no it won't come out so easily. That's when he realized the position he was in, he looked up to her face.

Their faces were so close that he could feel her breath on his lips, his eyes scanned her face, she was beautiful, her hairs flowed with the rhythm of the air, her lips were shaped just like Madhav's he thought, his eyes moved down her jaw line it was the same as Madhav's strange he thought this girl looked like Madhav, that's when his eyes went down to her chest where actually his button was entangled, a locket it rested in between her breasts, it was the same one which Madhav wore in his ring, but slowly his mind shifted to her...urmm...breasts they were really well shaped, Paarth mentally kicked himself how could he think about her like that, he doesn't even know who she was. and he went on shuffling with his shirt's button, it was deeply entangled with her kurta's button. In the process, there were few times when Kurta would get pulled up he would get a peep inside her Kurta, to avoid it he just closed his eyes & continued trying, & finally it came off. He sighed & got off, that's when it clicked him-she was Madhav's sister. He quickly called Madhav on his phone & told him.

"Aahaaa!!!!" Subhadra shouted she saw Parth too jumping from the cliff. He was coming towards her fast & he caught her in the nick of the time, & they fell face to in the water...

she couldn't breathe...

she shoved her hands here & there but to no avail...

she couldn't find Paarth, she tried shouting but water gushed into her mouth, it was difficult to breathe, she tried opening her eyes. And then out of nowhere strong arms held her, she frantically swimmed towards it she banged herself into his chest, she hugged him tight of fear of loosing him again, his strong arms encircled her body holding her close to him. He was trying to swim upwards that's when the water started to move apart, & they went down. Her legs touched the ground, she spit the water from her mouth & opened her eyes to look at his face, he was smiling at her, a reassuring smile, she hugged him tight out of fear.

That's when she remembered " Bhrata Krishna " & she unwillingly but quickly, moved away from him, this unexpected action caught Arjun off guard, he looked at her questioningly, but she just held his hand tightly in hers & looked up to see her brother standing on the cliff.

She slowly opened her eyes, he stood there her husband stood there, giving her a reassuring smile, the same she saw few seconds back in her dream

"Aarya" she called out softly.

Paarth looked at her confused, its the second time she is calling him Aarya, he opened his mouth to explain that she is getting confused, he was not 'her Aarya' but before it, she just got up fast & hugged him tightly.

"Kaha thae aap?" she was getting disoriented.

Paarth couldn't understand one word she spoke, he knows hindi but he couldn't grasp the meaning of her words. She was blabbering something that he was her husband & all, how could he be, he was just 16 & he vaguely remembers Madhav saying that his sister is just 15.

That's when Krishna entered the shed & quickly pulled her away from him, Paarth wanted to say no but still, Krishna pulled Subhadra in his arms.

"Bhrata Krishna...woh aarya..." she looked at Paarth but couldn't finish, she fainted because of the sudden mental load & stress.

To Be Continued...

It's a short one I know...sorry load shedding but will update 2morrow pukka...😊
Edited by sayee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
hey don't sep arrya arjun and subhi maya😭😭😭😭
please..
read all at one go
hats of to u for writing something like this👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i like the way u r taking the story👏👏👏👏
dp keliye brata bheem ya yudi hain

arjun keliye sirf subhi hi hain
dont make her sacrifice😡 this time also...

😆

aarya😳

loved it when she calls

continue soon
waiting
Edited by shavii - 11 years ago

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