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~~ HUM MAR JAYENGE~~

Chapter- 12 ~ KHATTE METHE PAL šŸ˜›

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kabhi alvida na kehna

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8L4x0TXwuI

Taani fainted and was about 2 fall , but rey held her by her waist before she fall , and save her from falling , rey got worried seeing her condition , she fainted while talking

Rey (worriedly ) - taani .. taani .. taani ... taani what happen , plz kuch bolo ????? kya hua ???? plz open ur eyes

(but she was fainted and not opening her eyes , all his efforts go in vain )

he pick her in his arms safely and take her inside, but fresh tears made their way in rey's eyes , tears which were reflecting his love , his worriednes , his care , and his fears , he rubbed her hands trying 2 wake her up saying " taani , taani utho , plz open ur eyes ," (but she was not responding at all ) rey made her lie down on d sofa safely , and sit on his knees beside her and hold her hand and start rubbing her hand while continuously saying " taani , taani plz open ur eyes plz open ur eyes , taani utho na plz open ur eyes damn it , ur rey is getting worried plz open ur eyes "

rey (shouted worriedly ) - AUNTY AUNTY AUNTY WHERE R U ????? UNCLE UNCLE WHERE R U??? plz come fast taani is fainted plz come fast

all hear some voice of shouting and come 2 d hall fastly ,

at first they were shocked 2 see taani in wedding dress , and they were even more shocked 2 see rey there with taani ,... and taani fainted , they were confused at first but they were more worried about taani at that time and not about all these things

taani's ma (with fear and worry in her eyes alongwith tears ) - TAANI

she come 2 her fastly ,

ma - taanii , meri jadoo ki pudiya plz aankhein khol aur humse baat kar mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai , plz open ur eyes (caress her head while pleading her 2 open her eyes )

her taauji also come near taani with a glass of water and sprinkle some water droplets on taani 2 make her conscious but of no use ,

they all were more worried now

rey (with tears flowing down on his cheeks through his eyes , full of love ,fear and pain) says "Uncle plz call taani's doctor "

mr. shekhawat nods in yes and go 2 call taani's doctor ,

while rey was continuously rubbing her hand and her ma was caressing her forehead

mean while swayam came home ... { when swayam reach d entrance he says 2 himself " pata nahi taani kaise hogi ??? plz Krishna ji taani thik ho aur aap mujhe strength dijiye ki main apni choti se behna taani jo ki mujhe bahut bahut bahut pyaari hai , uske saamne weak na padu , usse is disease se protect kar paun aur ek nayi zindagi ke saath nayi khushiyan de paun, plz make taani well very soon , I don't know ki vo kaise hogi , mera mann bahut bechain ho raha hai , main usse kaise face karunga samjh nahi aaraha , pata nahi apni choti behan ki iss disease ki vajah se jo dard mujhe ho raha hai , mere dil ko horaha hai , vo usse kaise chupaunga , vo pal main apne bhai ke dil ka haal jaan jaati hai, pata nahi main usse kaise sambhalunga par main strong banuga apni taani ke liye , apni choti se behan ke liye , main uske chehre pe smile vapis launga , uski khoyi hui khushiyan vapis launga uski zindagi main"

and come in deciding 2 surprise her with a smile on his face 2 bring smile on taani's face as well

he came in saying (without seeing taani fainted ) " taani , meri choti se baby sis where r u ???? see ur bhai has come just for u and I have also got ur favorite chocolates , and I have also got a surprise gift for u but I will give u these chocolates and gift only when my baby sis will give me a hug , so chal jaldi jaldi aaja aur apne bhai ko gale laga le ,

rey ( look at d entrance with a dry throat , listening and feeling a bro's care and love for his baby sis and tears flowing down his eyes )- SWWAYYAMM ..dekh na taani fainted while talking and maain.. kabse usse utthha raha hun , uth he naahhi rahi , aa ab tu he aakkke isko daant ke utha

swayam saw all and taani lying down on d sofa, he was shocked 2 see rey crying and his chachi ji (taani's mom ) also crying , his dad worried and taani fainted ,he says (worriedly ) - o god ...he came fastly 2 taani ,kept d chocolate box on d table

and started saying with fresh tears forming in his eyes - hey Krishna ji taani fainted , kya hua usse ,??? vo faint kaise hogayi ?????? ,

taani behna plz uth na ,dekh terra bhai aaya hai tere liye , mujhse baat nahi karegi tu , plz aankhein khol , and see ur bhai has come

(with little anger in her voice because of love care and worry for taani , his worriedness , love and care for taani turn into his anger , he shouts a little at all d servants n everyone present there) aap sab log uska thik se khayal bhi nahi rakh sakte , vo to kisiki baat sunti nahi hai , par aap sabko to uska dhyan rakhna chahiye tha na , aap jaante nahi hai ki vo kitni careless hai , at least u all should take proper care of her and usse bed se hilne he kyu dete hai aap log hunh ?????? I m sure usne apni medicines nahi khayi hogi , hai he ek no. ki naughty pie meri taani ..

(2 taani while crying ) - hey my chotu bubbly sweetu baby taani , plz get up na , see ur bhai is getting so worried , tu kabhi kisiki aankho main aansoo nahi dekh sakti na to phir ab sabko kyu rula rahi hai ??? , get up now (actually he and his heart was fearing 2 lose his baby sis , this fear was killing him from inside )

Rey was also crying holding taani's one hand in his , not in a position 2 speak anything ,

...

{ kisi apne ko khone ka darr sach ka roop le le to bahut dard deta hai dil ko ...

ankho se ansoo nahi rukte ...

dil ka dard nahi thamta ...

Aur is dard main aur is darr main chupa pyaar , ansuoon main bhara pyaar aur jhalakti hui fikar kisiko samjhayi nahi ja sakti }

...

Doc came

Swayam 2 doc (while wiping his tears )- acchha hua doc ap aagaye , dekhiye na taani ko kya hogaya hai , she is fainted while talking ,

Doc - let me check , u all don't worry ok

Rey give way so that doc could check her

But as rey tries 2 get up , he found that he couldn't move , as taani hold his hand this time not wishing 2 leave his hand .. rey's hand was weakly yet strongly hold by taani's hand , she hold his hand weakly from outside but strongly from inside that is rey was strongly hold by taani's heart , there was d strongest beautiful bond of love between their hearts

IN UNCONSCIOUSNESS ALSO TAANI AND HER HAND DON'T WANT 2 LEAVE HER LOVE'S HAND, { vo apne pyaar ka haath nahi chodna chahti thi chahe vo hosh main ho ya na ho , par vo apne pyaar ko nahi khona chahti thi , apne pyaar ka sath nahi chodna chahti thi }

But as doc had 2 check her b.p and all so rey had 2 leave her hand so he make her leave his hand unwantedly , and stand beside her

Doc check her pulse rate , b.p and all

Rey - what happened 2 her doc ?????

Doc - inka b.p . bahut low jaa raha hai , and as far as I know she has cancer as well ,

(everyone's hearts broke as doc take d name of cancer , they feel as if someone stabbed their heart )

Doc continues - so this is not good for her health , abhi main inko ek injection de deta hun , agar kal tak inhe hosh nahi aya to inhe hospitalize karna hoga

As doc was going 2 give injection 2 taani , rey feel the pain of that injection in his heart

Swayam - waiitt , doc plz aap meri baby sis ko injecton mat do , usse injection se bahut dard hota hai , she is very scared of injections

Doc -dekhiye I can understand , but I have 2 give her injection varna vo conscious kaise hongi ? aap sabse baat kaise karengi ? , agar aap sab chahte hai ki vo sab aakhe khole aur aap sabse baat kare then let me give her injection

Mr. shikhawat - swayam let doc give her injection

Swayam - but papa ,meri baby sis ko injection se bahut darr lagta hai aur usse bahut dard bhi hota hai , aap samjh kyu nahi rahe (with helpnessness in her voice )

Taani's ma (with tears in her eyes ) - swayam beta, tum chinta mat karo , taani ko ab injections ki aadat ho gayi hai , aur usse thik karne ke liye injection dene zaruri hai na , dekh to main bhi nahi sakti usse iss halat main but kya karun apni bachi ki bhalai ke liye , uski zindagi ke liye uska ye dard uske saath saath mujhe bhi sehna padta hai

They all feel so bad after listening and feeling a bit of a mom's pain seeing her daughter ill and in pain

Rey ( with tears in eyes ) says in heart - kaash aisa ho pata ki injection mujhe lagta aur thik meri taani ho jati

Rey close his eyes standing beside her as he cant see taani bearing any kind of pain

Swayam also turned back and her maa also close her eyes as she also cant see taani in pain

Doc gave injection

Rey also felt d same pain in his heart

He wince feeling tani's pain- sss

After giving her injection ,

Doc (2 rey and taani's mom ) ab aap apni aankhein khol sakte hai (2 swayam ) - aur aap bhi turn kar sakte hai

Rey and tani's ma open their eyes and swayam turns

Doc 2 swayam - ye rahi inki medicines ki list , I have added some more medicines in it and

U get them and give her medicines on time , don't let her skip even a single medicine and make sure that she don't take any kind of stress , She can't afford 2 take stress or any tension ok So keep her happy as much as possible ok

swayam - ok doctor

doc went and swayam 2 her chachi ..

swayam - chachi taani behosh kab hui ??? aur ye taani dulhan ke dress mai kaise ???

taani's mom - pata nahi beta , mai to andar kuch kam kar rahi thi taani ke liye he soup bana rahi thi ki itne mai rey ki zor zor se awaz aayi ki taani faint hogayi hai .. and mujhe laga taani apne room mai hai .. pata nahi ye wedding dress mai kya ... arre haan yaad aaya mujhe ..ab samjhi mai ki subah taani ne meri saari baatein sun le hongi .. aaj he subah mai iss lehanga ko dekh rahi thi aur Krishna ji se man he man shikayat kar rahi thi ki unhone kyu meri jadoo ki pudiya ki kismet mai itne gham likh diye sapna tha usse dulhan ke jode mai dekhne ka par unhone meri maasoom se bachi ko cancer ki bimaari de de itne pains aur problems ke saath.. aur is pagli ne meri ye khwaish puri karne ke liye ye lehanga pehan liya .. but meri bachi ko itne dukh kyu mil rahe hai ...jab vo itni pure hai itni acchhi sabka khayal rakhti hai .. to phir usse he ye bimaari kyu de di bhagwaan ne (she starts crying ) swayam go and hug her seeing her crying ... consoling her 2 not cry and have faith on Krishna ji , he will make taani alright very soon

rey spoke in heart " aunty don't worry aapka ye sapna zarur pura hoga , taani bilkul thik ho jaayegi usse thik hona he hoga mere liye apne rey ke liye .. mere khatir uski zindagi ko jeena he hoga MERI ZINDAGI KA HAATH PAKADKAR SANG SANG CHALEGI MERE PYAAR MERI TAANI KI ZINDAGI ... aur vo dulhan zarur banegi ... MERI DULHAN .. vo apne rey ki dulhan zarur banegi .. and mai apni taani se bahut jaldi shaadi karunga bahut jaldi that's my promise 2 myself and my life my love taani and will talk 2 swayam also about this once she will gain consciousness "

taanis' mom - bhaisahab (swayam's dad ), swayam beta aur rey beta aap logon ne subah se kuch khaya nahi hoga .. main tum dono ke liye kuch khane ke liye bana deti hu

swayam - nahi chachi ji mujhe bhookh nahi hai bilkul bhi nahi ...

rey - nahi aunty mai bhi kuch nahi khaunga jab tak taani ko hosh nahi aata

tauji - mai bhi meri baby ke bina kuch nahi khaunga .. vahi mujhe khana khilati hai aur vahi mujhe khana khilayegi ..

taani's mom understood that no one will eat anything until taani will be ok ... she herself hasnot eaten anything but how can a mom eat when her daughter is in such condition

they sat around her consoling themselves and their hearts that she will be alright very soon

2 hours pass ,

all r waiting sitting on d sofa near taani .. all r waiting for taani 2 gain consciousness and open her eyes ...

{ uski is condition ko dekhkar sabki aankhein baar baar nam ho jaati thi but they hide their tears from the other... taani ki pyaari baatein uski ma ko yaad aati , taani ke cute antics uske tauji ko yaad aakar kabhi hasate to kabhi rulate , taani jaise pyaari behan ke love and care yaad aati to swayam ka dil bhar aata ...)

plz open the following songlink in other tab

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=do43_BHYQ_o

VAADA RAHA

aur taani ka pyaar rey ka dil har pal churata, rey ka dil usse is condition mai dekhkar jitna behcain horaha tha vo kisiko samjha bhi nahi sakta tha .. apne pyaar ko zindagi ke liye fight karte hue dekhna iss d worst thing ever ,

Rey was feeling so helpless in front of her love s disease , so painful 2 feel taani's pain, so scared 2 lose her , his heart was crying thinking that the pure angel taani who spreads love and happiness in everyone's life is craving for happiness , a single happiness ... what if god took her away from him , this mere thought was killing him from inside though he tried hard 2 console himself that nothing will happen 2 his angel of love .. she will get well very soon , actually she have 2 get well soon for rey ..

Its been 4 hours now since taani got unconscious

doc's words were ringing in rey's mind n not being able 2 control rey asks with teary eyes 2 swayam " swayam vo taani ka surprise gift uske ladoo gopal ji jo hum uske liye laaye hai vo diyo apne bag se"

Swayam nods in yes and get d gift and give it 2 rey ...

rey take it and go 2 d unconscious taani with that gift and take her hand and keep the laddoo gopal ji on her hand holding her hand from below

[ ye hai hamare chote se pyaare se laddoo gopal ji, jo sabki dil se wali wishes zarur puri karte hai 😊]

Rey 2 d unconscious taani - taani dekho na tumhara bhai swayam aur mai tumhare liye ye chote se pyaare se cute se ladoo gopal ji laaye hai jo ki super duper powerful hai , magical hai ... chalo now open ur eyes and see how cute is laddoo gopal ji and (2 ladoo gopal ji ) ladoo gopal ji hum aapko meri taani ko de rahe hai , aapko meri taani ko jaldi se jaldi thik karna hai ok chalo now ask her 2 open her eyes .. come on bolo na aap usse ki vo apni aankhein khole , uska rey bahut darr raha hai ab ..

Everyone's eyes fill with tears ..who were present .. kisika pyaar itna pure kaise ho sakta hai .. itna loving itna caring itna beautiful itna magical kaise ho sakta hai .. ??

Swayam controlling his tears say 2 rey " reyy control urself "

Taani's mom - haan beta taani jaldi thik ho jaayegi tum pareshan mat ho .. dekhna ye hamare jo pyaare se ladoo gopal ji hai na ye usse bilkul thik kar denge don't worry ..

While tears were flowing down reys' cheeks .. he says in between his tears " taani plz utho na plzz tumhara pyaar tumhara rey tumhare saamne hai dekhogi nahi kya ???"

He hears a low voice , yes that's our angel taani's voice

She spoke in her subconsciousness " rrreeeyyy"

Everyone come near her hearing taani's voice .. swayam smiled listening her voice .. " dekh rey hamari taani boli, tera naam liya usne , uske dil ne ... hamare ladoo gopal ji ne akhir magic kar diya .. meri baby sis thik hojayegi .. ye ladoo gopal ji aur hum sabka pyaar usse thik kar dega ... hamari duayein khali nahi jaayengi rey "

Rey nods in yes in between his tears and small smiles listening taani's soothing voice ..

Rey says while crying " taannii .. plz open ur eyes plz humse baat karo come on open ur eyes for all of us plzz "

She again says " reeyyy " as if this name was calling up by her heartbeats"

Rey's tears fell on her hand .. she opens her eyes slowly ... she never want a single tear in her love's eyes so how can she let him cry now ...

All were surprised and overwhelmed seeing the magic of laddoo gopal ji and their true love

Taani says weekly while seeing the ladoo gopal ji " aww kitne pyaare aur cutu se ladoo gopal ji hai ...chooo adorable " while smiling a little seeing n adoring d ladoo gopal ji .. n she look at the rey who was sitting beside her and she raise her hand 2 wipe his tears .. which automatically brought tears in her eyes .. and rey wipe her tears controlling himself

She look at all of her loved ones crying and feeling their love and care hidden in all their tears , she could also see some fears in their eyes and understood " maa ... tauji ... bhaii .. rey .. plz aap sab rona band karo I m ok don't worry plz .. (2 ladoo gopal ji ) - dekho na mere pyaare ladoo gopal ji .. bhai ro rahe hai maa bhi ro rahi hai tauji bhi ro rahe hai aur .. reyy bhi ro rahe hai ... mujhe kitna dard ho raha haiii 😭

All say together " kahann ??"😲

She keep her other hand on her heart " yahan aap sab jaante nahi kya ki aap sabke aansuon se mere dil ko dard hota hai "

Everyone is touched by the love and care of their angel taani

She continue " aap sab rona band karo na .. varna mai bhi rone lagungi "

All says together "NO"

She cutely ask " nahi chahte ki mai roun ??" all nods in no that they don't want her 2 cry

Taani smiles a little "so come on wipe ur tears now and smile "

Everyone wipe their tears smilingly

She try to get up holding her ladoo gopal ji and rey helps her immediately to get up .. their eyes meet again for sometime .. but both come 2 senses as everyone is present there .. rey made her sit properly on d sofa .. she looks at ladoo gopal ji and says in heart " thank you " and slowly caress that ladoo gopal ji and then keeps our adorable ladoo gopal ji on the side table and touch ladoo gopal ji's feet

She looks at rey, swayam, ma and her tauji

She again cutely says " kya aap sab mujhe hug nahi karoge ??? "

Everyone smiles seeing her cuteness alongwith bubbliness

Taani opens her hands " bhai hug do na plzz "

Swayam was so touched seeing d love of his adorable sister .. he went and hug her ... both had tears in their eyes ..

Swayam " I missed u sooo much meri pyaari baby sis , meri cutu sweetu pyaari behna"

Taani " I also missed u a lot bhai .. maine aapko kitna missy kiya ye aap soch bhi nahi sakte .. "

Swayam " love u a lot meri pyaari baby sis "

Taani " love u too bhai .. "

They broke the hug ...

Swayam with tears in his eyes " naughty baby bataya kyu nahi , pagali .. ek taraf mujhe bhai kehti hai aur ek taraf itni badi baat apne bhai se he chupati hai hunhh .. aise karta hai koi ?? itna bhi trust nahi hai , pyaar nahi hai apne bhai se hmm ???? tum ye kaise bhool gayi ki jab hum khushiyo mai saath jhoome hai , har pal ek dusre ka haath pakadke badaya hai zindagi ka .. to kya mera haq nahi banta tumhare dard mai , painful phase mai tumhara saath dene ka hmm??? tumne to apne dard mai , apni sadness , apni fight mai , apne sorrows mai he apne bhai ko apne se duur kar diya .. jao mai tumse baat nahi karta .. m angry with u , its d limit ok .." (while tears were flowing down swayam's cheeks and taanis' too )

Taani - aisa nahi hai bhai I love u so very much mere sweetu se pyaare se bhai .. ab plz gussa mat karo na .. agar aap he mujhse baat nahi karoge to mai to mai apne bache hue zindagi ke kuch din bhi jee nahi paungi

(rey's heart broke listening taani .. and tears were uncontrollably falling from his eyes too .. though he was trying hard 2 stop them .. he wipe his tears again n again but they were falling from his eyes again n again )

Swayam (with little anger and pain ) - chupp bilkul chup bahut bakwas karne lag gayi hai tu pagal kahin ki , get one thing very clearly that until ur bhai is with u nothing can happen to u and don't u dare say any such stupid thing again..

Taani - ok meri pyaare bhai as u wish .. and ye kya bhai phir ro rahe ho aap .. dekha isiliye nahi bataya maine .. kyuki aap nahi jaante ki mere bhai ki aankho ke aansoo mujhe kitna zyada hurt karte hai ..

(she wipes her bhai's tears and swayam wipes his sis's tears and keep his hand on her head caressing his baby sis and blessing her from heart)

Swayam - but don't worry behna main tujhe itni easily chodunga nahi . apne bhai se itni badi baat chupane ki saza to milegi.. par tere thik hone ke baad , teri ache se khabar lunga mai ..(he slowly hold her ears with fake anger and twirl her ears ) hmmm shaitan , my naughty pie

Taani - ouch bhaiii chodo na plzzz acchha baba galti hogayi maaf kar do plz ab chodo na plz ...

Swayam smiles seeing her little sister's cute antics

He leave her ears and say "aise nahi chodunga budhu , pehle tere cutu se cheeks pull karunga .. thodi punishment to milegi he na apne bhai se jhooth bolne ki , apne bhai ko chodkar itni duur aane ki so that aage se tu kabhi mujhe chodkar na jaaye kabhi bhi nahi "

{ all were smiling and laughing in between their tears seeing the cute and sweet bro -sis moments )

Taani keeps her hands on her cheeks ... " no bhai aap mere (cheeks ) gaal nahi khechoge no no no "

Swayam says smilingly - yes yes and yes hehe

Ab to mai cheeks aur nose dono pull karunga hehe ...

She gets up 2 run but rey hold her by her shoulders and says in between his tears and small smiles " ji nahi , aap bilkul bhi nahi bhagegi .. abhi to thodi si thik hui ho,.. sit here only ( make her sit )

Both of their eyes were struck on each other ..taani could feel reys' care in his actions and smile but at the same time her heart ached seeing rey's dried tears and feeling rey's pain .. he also smile with her assuring her that no need 2 worry he is ok .. and 2 cheer her up ... and lighten up her mood , he holds her hands and winks at swayam

rey say" swayam pull her nose as well as cheeks "

taani left open mouthed seeing his mischief ..

swayam pull softly her cheeks and nose hehe

taani was giving fake angry glares 2 reyam

rey " what ?? stop staring ok u deserve much more punishment ok "

taani felt bit relieved seeing reyam's smiles and a smile automatically adore her face seeing reyams' smile which relieve reyam and their hearts

Taani's mom - koi apne bhai aur love ke aane se apni maa ko bhool gaya

Tauji - aur apne tauji ko bi

Taani " ma , tauji come here na plz hug me na I don't wanna leave this chance don't know aage kabhi aap sabko hug karne ka chance milega bhi ya nahi life mai "

She didn't wanted 2 say that but by mistake her heart let her feelings out

Rey got very angry , ( though her anger was just a form of his deep pain) - just shut up ok (tears filled in his eyes in that moment only ) .. tumhe kuch nahi hoga .. TAAREY'S LOVE IS NOT WEAK OK ... mera pyar tumhe kabhi kuch hone nahi dega samjhi tum , don't u dare any such thing again

Swayam (with tears in his eyes) - rey sahi keh raha hai taani .. tumhe kuch nahi hoga kabhi bhi nahi hoga .. kya tumhe uss rakhi par bhi bharosa nahi jo tum mujhe har saal bandhati aayi ho hmm ??

Taani - bhai mujhe apne Krishna ji aur mere chotu se ladoo gopal ji , apne bhai aur uss rakhi pe pura bharosa hai ... aap sab mere saath ho na to mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye ...

Rey (with tears in his eyes )- par hamein hamari taani chahiye hamesha hamare saath hamare paas .. hamari taani ke bina hum jee nahi sakte ...

Taani's eyes filled with d pearls of tears listening rey .. she could feel rey's love and care in his heart

Her maa's tears were not stopping ... she was not in a condition 2 say anything .. she just came 2 taani and hug her daughter as tightly as she could in a hearty wish 2 save her and keep her always close 2 her heart forever n ever .. Taani hug her back with tears flowing down her beautiful eyes

Taani - maa ... Maa main hun na aapke saath hamesha hun (in heart agar Krishna ji ne chaha to ) .. mai jahan bhi rahun par kabhi tumse juda nahi ho sakti ... love u ma.. love u so very much ... Aur ab to swayam bhai bhi aagaye hai na aapki jadoo ki pudiya ka khayal rakhne ke liye phir kyu ro rahi ho .. aur dekho bhai aur rey apne saath ladoo gopal ji ko bhi to laaye hai ..

Taani's ma - tumhe kuch nahi hoga mere jadoo ki pudiya ko kabhi kuch nahi hoga ..

she broke the hug and wipes taani's tears and taani also wipes her tears and says " love u maa love u so very much , u r d world's best ma " she kiss her maa on her cheeks her maa says " I m ok taani mera bacha , tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya , main tumhare liye ko kuch leke aati hun"

while she was going taani calls her

and say " maa aap mere paas raho na .. and aap sabne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga na ... ramu kaka se kahiye na ki vo kuch bana de sabke liye , aaj mai sabko apne haathon se khana khilaungi aur sabke haathon se he khaungi "

her maa " ok as u wish my princess " she sits there after asking ramu kaka 2 cook food for everyone and bring the food in d hall only

tauji (2 cheer up her ) - oyyee chotu princess mai to reh he gaya mujhe to tera jaadui hug mila he nahi .. ( he acts 2 be sad )

taani opens her hand for him and say" aww come here and hug ur little princess

tauji come and hug taani slightly and say "get well very soon mera bacha and stay well always.. may god bless u princess"

he went and sit on d other sofa in front of her

rey was also craving 2 hug his love .. and so was taani .. both had some dried and some fresh tears in their eyes .. they both were looking at each other in between ...

taani - mai change karke aati hun ..

rey - nahii ruko na

all look at him with suspicion

rey continue " abb .. I mean pehle kuch kha lo .. baad mai change kar lena vaise bhi itni weak jo hogayi ho.. and tum is lehange mai bahut beautiful lag rahi ho so thodi der pehne raho na isse .. bahut pyaari lag rahi ho issmein .. jee bhar ke dekh to lene do mujhe apne beautiful angel ko" (he say his heart out without even realizing that everyone is present there )

all smile ..and cough fakely " ahhuu ahhu "

taani blush listening her love ... rey came 2 his senses and felt shy for what he said ..she keep a strand of hair behind her ear while blushing .. look look hawa hawa ..

taani's ma - vaise to meri jadoo ki pudiya hamesha ki pretty lagti hai but is lehange mai meri jadoo ki pudiya sach mai bahut he zyada khoobsurat dulhan lag rahi hai bilkul aasman se aayi hui pari jaise ... tune ye mere khwaish puri karne ke liye pehna na ???

taani nods in yes .. " hmm maine socha ki mai meri pyaari maa ki thodi se khawaish to puri kar dun .. vo kya hai na mai meri maa ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti .. and meri maa ki khwaish meri zindagi hai ... unhe pura karna mera farz so that's why I wore this "

swayam smilingly - aww shoo sweet my cutu sis .. and yes undoubtedly u r looking very beautiful and pretty just like an angel .. actually u r an angel .. my angel sis

tauji - hmmm meri little princess is actually looking like a princess a very beautiful princess

taani smiles ... she look at rey whose eyes were not moving from her ... their eyes met and again starts d silent love conversation between them ..

ramu kaka came with food and serve khichdi 2 taani and other food 2 everyone

taani make faces seeing khichdi

taani " ma mujhe khichdi nahi khani , mujhe rajma chawal khane hai plz .. "

taani's ma - nahi beta tumhari health abhi puri tarah thik nahi hai .. u should eat khichdi only .. ek baar tum thik ho jao phir mai tumhe apne haathon se rajma chawal banakar khilaungi pakka

taani - ok

swayam - taani don't be sad baby ..

rey - achha agar mai tumhe khichdi khane mai accompany du then u will not be sad na ok then I will accompany u in eating khichdi .. kaka I will also eat khichdi ..

taani smiles see his love and care for her

swayam- I will also eat khichdi

ma- mai bhi ..

tauji - mai bhi

taani - arre nahi plz aap log meri vajah se khichdi kyu khaoge .. aap log to dusra khana kha sakte ho then u will eat that only .. plz .. I will feel bad if u will do so ..

rey- nahi taani jab tum khichdi khaogi to hum sab kaise dusra khana kha sakte hai ..we will also eat khichdi ..

all nods in yes

taani - nahi ji bilkul nahi .. agar aap sabne chup karke apna khana nahi khaya then I will not eat anything ..

swayam - tumse koi nahi jeet sakta hai na

taani - vo to hai ..(smiles)

rey - ye kya zidd hai yar , acchha baba fine u eat khichdi ..and we will eat our food .. ab to thik hai??

taani - hmm ,

taani looks at kaaka and then taani 2 kaka " kaka mujhe pata hai aapne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga na , plz aap bhi kuch kha lo ..chalo jao apni plate lekar aao ...aap bhi hamare saath he khaoge "

everyone was feeling so proud 2 see her generousity and kindness ... they were smiling seeing an angel spreading love

kaka - nahi bitiya rani aap khalo hum kha lenge baad mai

taani - kaka aap ruko mai he aapki plate lekar aati hu

swayam -( in an orderly tone ) taani tum betho vahin .. mai jaake kaka ke liye plate le aata hun

swayam go and get a plate

kaka - bitiya rehne do na plz hum khalenge na baad mai

taani - aap chup rahiye aap yahin khayenge hamare saath ..

swayam gets d plate n serve food 2 kaka

taani - ma tauji bhai kaka ... (after thinking a little she calls rey also ) ..rey aap sab idhar aao na first bite mai aap sabko khilana chahti hu and aap he ke hands se khana chahti hu ...

all come near her ..

swayam - pehle mai khilaunga tumhe

taani - nahi bhai pehle mai aapko khilaungi

swayam - mai pehle khilaunga tujhe bola na

taani - mai khilaungi pehle apne bhai ko

mai ... mai .. mai .. mai

rey laughs and comes forward while they were busy in their mai mai fight , he take a spoon full of khichdi from tani's plate and asks taani

" taani say aaa "

Taani open her mouth 2 say aaa confusingly .. ( her mind was still engrossed in bro-sis pehle khilane ka fight )

As soon as she open her mouth rey feed her d first spoon of khichdi ..(hehe )

While taani was shocked and had no choice but 2 eat it .. all laughs and

swayam was bit angry hehe " kya rey pehle mujhe khilana tha taani ko .. "

rey " arre swayam tum usse khilate to tab na jab tum dono ke mai mai fight finish hoti "

swayam laughs ... taani also smile by this cute gesture of rey ,.. maa and tauji were also smiling seeing the cute antics of trio

swayam - ab next mai khilaunga .. and its final now no arguments (showing his finger 2 taani while smiling )

taani in response just opens her mouth ..

swayam feed her khichdi and then she take a spoon of rajma and rice from other plate and feed it 2 swayam ..

then her ma and tauji feed her khichdi and she also feed them rajma and rice ..

kaka was hesitating but taani call him and feed him rajma rice as well .. and says " ab mujhe to khilao na kaka "

kaka feed her khichdi .. some tears of happiness and respect came in his eyes seeing the angelic behavior of taani and he just says " jeete rao beta bhagwaan tumhe jaldi jaldi thik kar de aur tumhari zindagi mai khushiyan he khushiyan bhar de "

all smiles but then rey says cutely " mujhe nahi khilaoge apne haathon se , mujhe bhool gayi ??"

taani nods in yes that she will feed him and says " idhar aayiye na rey " and he comes close then she take a spoon of rajma rice and feed it 2 rey ..

their eyes meet again and there starts a silent love conversation between 2 lovebirds ... our eyes speak those feelings so easily which we cant speak ..

..they have food and taani starts 2 get up and rey comes 2 her and hold her by her waist 2 help her get up ... but as rey touch the bare waist of taani .. both starts feeling magical , so tantalizing by the touch of their love .. whenever rey touch taani she starts feeling as if butterflies are dancing in her stomach ..

But today she have 2 be strong as she has made a decision in her heart which she have 2 put into action .. for the betterment of both of them ..

She says being strong or I should say acting strong " rey its ok aap rehne dijiye .. mai chali jaungi " and removes his hand from her waist ..while rey was a bit confused by her actions ..

Taani 2 her ma " maa aap mujhe upar mere room tak chod dijiye na plz "

Maa " haan meri bachi ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai chal mai chalti hun tere saath " . she comes and hold her daughter and they move forward while rey was a bit confused that why didn't she let him help her ..

Taani was 5 steps ahead from rey and says NOT facing him

" rey aap kal india vapis jaa rahe ho na ?????"

(while tears fell from her eyes and she was trying hard 2 control herself and her unstoppable tears )

Rey was hell shocked hearing that...

~~~~~~~ end of this chapter~~~~~~~~

Precap - (may be this will be d precap but m not sure as I have not write it yet )

Ch-14 (hopefully yahi hoga ) - TERA RASTA MAI CHODON NA

Taani crying after locking herself in her room

Taarey's conversation and taarey scenes ..

TAAREYLICIOUS MOMENTS ARE ON UR WAY , BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS OF LIFE, LOVE AND CARE ARE ALSO ON UR WAY ..

MORE TWISTS N TURNS , SUSPENSE AND SURPRISES R ON UR WAY SO STAY TUNED

~~~~~~~~~~~

TAKE CARE

KEEP SMILING ALWAYS 😊

Sorry if I disappoint anyone ... I know this was not a good chapter but I always try 2 give the best update from heart and this time also I tried my best .. I don't know that whether any of u like this update or not but if u like this chapter then HIT LIKE AS WELL AS GIVE BIG BIG BIG COMMENTS FROM HEART plz .. (minimum 4 lines comments ;) ..zyada bade comments honge to mujhe zyada achha laga aur update jaldi ayega but it should be a DIL SE WALA COMMENT
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper update,

this time also u made me cry. very emotional update.

laddo gopal ji will make taani fine, but did't get taarey scenes.

next part update soon as per precap mentioned.

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
You always give best update
Love it
I still cry... Moni you always wrote emotional and heart touching... Love it soo much
Swayam and Taani cute fight.., hehehe feed Rey ne kiya hehehe super cute scene reyaam and taani
Taani take decision to make Rey stay away from her...
Plz rey ko India mat send karna...
Precap interesting update soon Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
very beautifully written
it was so emotional
the concern and love everyone has for taani is lovely
precap looks interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...loved it...
all worried for taani..and caring for her...i so loved this...

then that rey puting ladoo gopal ji in her hand it was so touching.

then whole khichdi feeding scene was lovwly.

taani ask rey is he going back...waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oyeee whr is PM
I think you are on mission to make me cry 😭 why such emotional
Update yaar I cried today all were so scared rey was feeling like he is lossing
His breath his life his happiness his reason to live his taani 😭 swayam felt like
He lost everything his baby sister n taani mom was also scared with tauji 😭
Finally doctor came but his words made me cry yaar 😭 taani did not wake up
Rey talk with taani n finally rey love for taani taarey love show it's pure magic n taani
Open her eyes n she was fine better thn before I luv how she talk with Krishna ji
It brought smile on my face with tears everyone hug taani luv taayam cute little prt
Taani n her mom prt was adorable tauji n taani prt was nice but y she did not hug my rey
Why u did not show taarey hug 😭 I want to hug rey not taani coz she got 3 hug n my rey
not even one hug to rey tight one taani care for everyone n rey care for taani n he said her not
To change haaye luv other reaction hehehe I luv taani care for all ppl even for kaka atleast she feed
Rey I luv tht luv taayam fight n yupie my rey win 😊 I luv tht but taani told rey to go 😭 tht break
My heart yaar n ur per-cape is vry bad I don't want to cry plzz yaar I want taarey romance plzz taarey
Hug kisses romance plzzz thanks for PM n u better update soon or else I will kill u pakka
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo awsmmm prt dr
lvd it
thnks 4 pm
plz cnt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
bohot emotional the but super duper update tha
loved it

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