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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no hope they don't die, how did Udayveer end up trying to help Tanya?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Vibha - A huge hug to u for updating . As u know (I've said it before) - THIS IS MY FAVOURITE SS 😳. & Thanx so much for the dedication 😃 ... it lifted my low mood!

The warning u gave was 100% UNTRUE - the entire time I was reading ... my eyes were wide open, anticipating the next scene .
OK - let's start at the beginning ... the chapter was incredible 👏!!!
After u ended the previous chapter - I had 2 guesses in mind of what'll happen : 1) I thought terrorists entered the school , and since Manyata was on the verge of leaving the premises ... they grabbed her from behind! & 2) I thought those drug addicts/dealers (Walter and Lily's gang {hope I got the names right 😕}) tracked down Manyata - now they want to kill her because she could identify them later on 😔. But I was wrong - and the track u opted for was much much better 👍🏼! I liked how Manyata encouraged herself to take on her attacker ... she is MRS BRAVE-MAN after all 😉!! Kabir is lucky that he's still alive after that 😆!
Awww - Kuwar Arjun Singh is in love ... and he has found himself a mate ... too bad his "heropanthy" let him down 🤣.
I felt really bad for Uday 😭 ... it must've been so difficult for him to witness Manyata's closeness to Kabir💔, and then his realisation that he'd never get such loving looks from Manyata . That was so sad .
Manyata writing Uday a letter ... was so cute ; I'd go for MY DEAREST UDAY ☺️ (🤣) !!
And the final part, where Manyata is waiting so anxiously for Uday to profess his love for her , is going to end poorly ... because I feel Uday is going to set her free .
Now coming to the precap ... WHAT WAS THAT😲?? I have this image of the climax of NO ENTRY happening , don't kill Uday or Tanya please Vibha .
Anything else ... - or ya , U are going to update in 3-4 days time , I'll be looking forward to the Final Chapter !
I think I better go now ... ,
Thanks for the PM .
PS - I hope U got another concept in mind ... we want another SS from you .
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...but I didn't get it...After part 20-22 , I read part 24 & 25...then where is part 23???😕
Edited by sanghita0000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...but I didn't get it...After part 20-22 , I read part 24 & 25...then where is part 23???😕



Thank you Sanghita😳
i rechecked the word file of this story in my laptop and found that i've messed up with numbers somewhere...lol i think i named chapter 23 as 24 by mistake...😆 it doesn't matter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Part Vibha
Very nicely written
I loved Arjun and Manyata scene awww so so cute glad you included him in...precap is scary so much suspense
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey thanks for dedicating the update to me
i m so happy
sry for late comment
oh so uday is thinking that manyata loves kabir
and here manyata loves udday
oh god i hope manyata confess her felling
the promo is dangerous
i hope uday is fine
how uday is helping tanya
tahnks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
WONDERFUL UPDATE!!

I literally had my heart in my mouth..thinking that Manyata is in Danger-Zone now but funnily it wasn't so..

Manyata and Arjun scenes were so cute. Even I think that he has got himself a girlfriend🤣

You stopped it at such an exciting point di.. Have got so curious. I beileive Uday is going to let Manyata go her own way (though I Dont want THAT).. Anyways lets see what you have restored for us!!

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai , great part ! The feelings of Manyata are very natural . Thanks for the PM. Continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey... Vibha...
Sorry for the late comment...
One thing I noticed is that the chapter which is marked 24 should actually be 23 and the chappy which is marked 25 should be 24...
Anyways...
Coming to the updates...
Both the updates were fabulous...
I would comment chappy wise...

Chappy 24 (23)
So finally Manyata and Uday escaped...
And it was all because of Manyata...
Because Uday was toh completely drunk...
Abhi pini thi usko bhi...
Aww... Kabir still helped him...
This is called true friendship...
Ohh god... Why is somebody pointing a gun at Manyata...
And who is he...

Chappy 25 (24)

The Manyata and Arjun part was cute...
Manyata was going to tell Uday about her feelings...
But he interrupted...
I think...
Now he will tell her that the bet is over and that she can go to her house back...
Pls don't let that happen Vibha...

Update soon...
And thanx for the PMs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please
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Update Vibha!!!

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