The Diary of the first lady ETF officer (*discontinued) - Page 21

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update poor girl she very in
trouble update soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow dear..

Read both the parts..

It was awesome and mind blowing update..

Just loved it..

Do continue soon..

And thanks for the pm..

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

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Posted: 11 years ago

awsm superb n beautiful update

just loved it

eagerly waiting 4 next part

one rqst. dear tumhari story me RIYA ko plz jinda rakhna

update soon

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aashritha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey very nice story...waiting for ur next update.. :)

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fairy shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update dear
thnks for pm darlin

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Comment for chapter 8

Almost half of the diry Riya mentioned

About her mistake & how she tried to

resolve it 😆

First Shree helped Ri but it failed 😲

And then chotu even that failed 😲

Poor riya. ...

Beautiful expressed the felling of

Scariness ...

When Arjun scolded Riyq she did not

Fell bad for the words he spoke but for

Making him recolect his painful past 😊

Riya is love with Arjun but she is

unaware of that just hope she realises

It fast 😳

Coming to the case well written

I don't think I need to write anything

extra on this topic ..

Well said ppl r so much crazy in money

That they don't understand what's

right & watts wrong they could have

Been living but Mr.Bhatia's greedyness

Led to his & his wife death

Blackmailing is too a big crime ..

And the same mistake was committed

by the photographer ...

best lines of Arjun were :

"GALA KHARAB HAI YA MERI NAKAL

KARNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHI HO ."

&

" TUMHARA ERADE TUMHARA

HARKATO SA SAAF JALAKTE HAI

MERI PERSONAL LIFE MEIN DAKHAL

ENDAJ BAND KARO NAFRAT HAI

MUJHE UN LOGO SA JOH MERE

JINDAGI MEIN TAK JAK KARYE HAI

AAKHRI BAAR BOL RAHA HO DOOR

HORO MUJHSE "

AWESOME UPDATE

THANKS FOR PM...

SORRY BHUT BHUT BHUT BHUT LATE

HONA KA LIYA 😭

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update dear

loved it

amazing

continu soon

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Just read last two parts. ..

Awesome updates yar...

Glad to see everything getting okay between rii n her father n all her misconceptions n misunderstandings got cleared...

Aahan one of my fav case.. kalki devi...

Loved to hear riya's pov...

Well written. ..

Continue soon

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Unres comment for capter 8 on page 31

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