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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: pixelflower620
awesome update buddy
so finally maan has admitted tht he spends his life hating geet but he cnt b wid ny other girl
nd finally d revelations nd maan coming into light
hope all mu clears out soon
do continue soon buddy
nd thnx fr d pm

yeah maan finally admitted...lots of secret to come out thanx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: saf24
Superb update. Maan believes what he wanted to and that changes his relationship with Geet totally. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

thanx... Sometimes people just believe what they see

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: custodian75
Waiting for Maan to know the truth. Hope he realizes his mistake.

thanx... He will know soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Finally Ms. shadow came to know abt Maan... Past moments.. kaise MU create kar di hain stilll he taken promise to protect geet from maan... Want this truth to out.. in front of them...

many secrets will come out thanx

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: goldenmoon
u idiot maan u believed some photos but not geet...
ye alag baat hai ki jisske pass koi samajh ke wo geet hi hai...
geet ko bhi pata chal gaya ke ye maan hi hai...
hopefully MU khatam hone ke aad bh geet usse maaf na kare

sometimes people believe what they see...thanx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: drrose31
part 19


Nice part


so many things cleared ...


reasons for their hatred ... is out ...


ummm... geet knows who is that person...


maan opened up to his miss shadow ...


lovely ...


waiting for more


thnx for pm dear

thanx doc...lots of secret to come out

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Originally posted by: spvd
hi dear post the link in the new thread
FF Daily Updates 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: zaara2212
sorry for the late response ... oh gosh what all has happened in the post...
will geet ever be able to know the truth 😭

truth will come out sooner or later thanx

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Part 20

Sunrays filled the room disturbing her from her deep slumber. Her back ached from the awkward position that she had slept in. Groggily she woke up rubbing her eyes as she felt his presence, lying peacefully and snoring softly. Last night's memories came rolling back to her. Instantly she cringed and cowered away... Did he do all that in his consciousness?
No he didn't... He called her "shadow"... That means he didn't know it was her.
Would he have done that to any other girl in her place? Be intimate with another??? That scared her- frustration building up. How did he get those bruises? Whom did he fight last night? Did he do that to protect her?? Or was it some other enemity?? Why did he send her away from that lonely road?? When did he come back and how?
Questions innumerable bombarded her mind, more than she could handle. Absent-mindedly her hands flew to his jet black hair, carressing softly , running her finger deftly through the soft mass. What was she doing here? Her motive to be with him now seemed unsure and meek to her. Can she forget that and live with Maan happily? Help Maan cure himself from his sadness and let him heal her... Now that she looked at him closely she could actually see his sadness... Dark bags under his tired eyes, tension lines adorning his forehead, stubble cut unevenly... An angry red bruise covering his bare chest... He looked tired and mostly depressed.
Geet understood he was sufferring just like her. Although that was no excuse to the way he forced her that night, she was curious why he did so. And then she resolved to find it all out giving her motive a momentary rest. Deliberately she chose to ignore it...trying to delay it as much as possible...because she knew, subconsciously, it was going to shatter him. If it wasn't for Maanu Di she wouldn't have the courage to face him and carry on with their plan to bring his arrogance...his ego...him down which was futile since he didn't have all those but in case of property it confused her. Clearly he cared two hoots about it... Then why did he buy HC? Make her work for him... Keep her unwillingly( though she was enjoying it she would never admit) at his house... Just why?? The thoughts just muddled up her mind making her restless. Her hands ran over the bruise on his chest...softly stroking as if to heal just by her magical touch. He stirred slightly waking up.
Waking up to the most beautiful sight of his life, Maan smiled. Geet leaning over him, hands on his chest, her hair wildly open- some of her teasing curls falling on his face, creating a curtain around him - tickling him. Nervously he pulled her hand, that was on his chest, to his lips kissing them softly, he whispered Good Morning Geet... Her hand tingled with the happiness she felt at his caring gesture. She smiled nudging him to get up.
He looked around...he was confused. How did he get here? The last he remembered was being in the kitchen having the pill and water to evade his headache. Maybe some servant have brought him up. He tended to land like that several nights now.
Geet tucked her hair behind her ear tieing them in a pony. Maan looked at her awe-struck. After last night when he heard she went to the farmhouse,he went in a frenzy. It was like all over that night again.
Him pushing her away to the point of no return.
She walking away to never return
He feared she won't come back to him. So so happy he was, she was back! To him! He hugged her tightly carressing her back, arms, waist...kissing her neck, collarbone and face. Geet was pleasantly surprised at his sudden outburst.
Where were you yesterday Maan?Geet was serious now. She needed to know how the bruises happened. Maan averted her gaze. N-no no-thingHe turned his face away from her. She knew he was lying- the way he averted her gaze, his body language, his face-she knew it. She yanked his collar back- to make him face her. Tell me MaanShe growled, staring straight into his eyes daring him to lie on her face.

He cupped her faceI wanted to protect you. She was taken aback. What could she possibly reply? That when he was trying to protect her, she had come to him with a motive to harm him...well not exactly but his business. She was ashamed. She lowered her eyes which he thought as her not believing him.
They were following us in that street...thats why I asked you to make a run...He said looking at her, his eyes though spoke an ode of love to her, him still unaware confused between hate and love. They are dangerous people Geet, believe me... I have taken care of them though. I... Are you alright?He spoke nudging her chin with his fingers to look up at him. She nodded smiling hesitantlyI am...fine. Just a bit...worried for you... "Just a bit" was such an understatement for her condition. Maan carressed her pink-

tinted cheeks softly. She looked at him quizically trying to cover up her embarrassment for such an open confession. Who dressed your wounds?Geet wanted to know whether he remembered what he does at night...with her. My...me- few men found me... And luckily they took me to Shekhar uncle. He dressed my wounds...and gave few medicines alsoMaan moved away from the bed to get ready for office. Maan you are injured...may be you shouldn't-Geet hesitated if she had the right to stop him. He smiled slylyAre you going? No?Geet nodded a confused yes and no. Yes?Oh she was so adorable, he could just eat her alive. Then I am going...He winked at her. Geet was stunned for a moment. She looked away at the floor carpet as if it was the most interesting thing in the universe. She heard wrappers being torn...Maan! You didn't brush yet? Maan bit his tongueOops!She scowled at him as he rushed to the bathroom brushing fast. She rummaged through his medicines, sorting them out...Maan these medicines...She intended to ask how to sort them but..Yeah some of them are antibiotics or pain-killers... And one anti-depressant pillHe went silent at the end. She bit her lip, anti-depressant? Since when did you start taking this pill... As far as I know you never...She heard the shower turn on. Since we- umm Meera prescribed it. Shekhar uncle checked its viability...its good... Her guards raised up as she stood shocked. Who is Meera?She squeaked. We lived together in US...She supported me a lot. That was such a huge flat...so spacious...and beautiful...and-He finally seemed to realize what he had done. Geet had gone all silent
'They lived together' as soon as she heard that she refused to hear further. The three words reverberated in her ears again and again. Unwillingly tears rolled down her face as she washed herself finishing her daily duties in the guestroom bathroom. He was with another? How could he? She wiped her tears vigorously. Why should she care? She won't. Wrapping the bathrobe around her, she walked out and the sweet aroma of pasta hit her nostrils. She smiled a little... Her favourite...the way only Maan could make. How much she craved for this in the last half a month while her stay at hospital! She dressed up in a jeans and kurti, that she found on the bed in the guestroom. Must be Maan! Last night it wasn't there... She further opened the cupboard to find a whole set of wardrobe for her. Probably Maan, Again! She snorted. She is not going to give in easily.

She combed her hair, remembering the past events in last night. His sobbing, him confessing love for the 'her'...was he speaking about Meera? Her caring for him... His sweet gesture when he woke up... She tied her hair in a bun... Applying no makeup, she trotted downstairs where Maan was at kitchen cooking... She was pleased at his attire...tight shirt..first three buttons open, black pants...so typical Maan. She cleared her throatAhem...what are you making?He grinned at her widelyYour favouriteHis smile fell seeing her pale face. Clearly her guards were up and she would definitely shut him out. He hugged her from back, closely like a second skin. She squirmed to free herself but he wouldn't let her go I am sorry... I shouldn't speak so insensi-Geet trying to fight so hard against the damned sensations searing through her heart and her dripping core. Both emotionally and physically he caged her to him, only for him. What is she to you Maan?She spoke cutting him off, defeated. He stilled a bitJust a uhh friend...She snorted not believingWhat am I to you?She spoke so lowly that he had to strain his ears to hear her. He was silent. Her eyes hardened. Just a uhh friend huh? Or friends with benefits haan...She spat now struggling hard. All the nights he forced her in the farmhouse came back, hitting hard. He turned her around instantly, with a firm grip on her wrist. The look of despair and pain in her eyes...it made him guilty for a moment...guilty enough to not question her back about Rehan as of yet. The fateful night when they separated...the hurt inflicted...it was all fresh but now when they spent time apart, their hearts yearned for each other, to be together... His heart won over...You are my life dammit! Get it in your thick mind will you?He roared pinning her to the wall. She flinched back. When he realized he had scared her instead, he hugged her tightI am just yours Geet...you are my everythingHe soothed her rapid heart. She fluttered her lashes, stepping away and finally having her much needed breakfast. She gobbled it all up.
Maan wanted to run away after their confrontation but he couldn't. He was so entranced by the sight. He stared at her adoringly occassionally having food from his own plate and sometimes tucking her hair. And finally they left for office. And much to her

chagrin, on the "beast". He had got it delivered from farmhouse when she was in the bathroom.

Throughout the ride Maan just talked and talked and Geet listened. Maan was sad- though he knew how possessive Geet was...he knew how upset she was with him about Meera...hence the silent treatment. Still he tried to talk...may be annoy her enough and get her to speak. He went on to tell how depressed and restless he was last night, had the pill and slept off. He sincerely made efforts to cheer her up but to no avail. Instead Geet was tensed. Finally she got to know what happened at night. According to Maan, after he had had the pill his mind was totally blank. He supposed it to be the cause because he slept off. Now whether he spoke the truth or not, she had to find out. She was determined to uncover the secret behind the massacre of their families.

However she was in for a huge shock... To find police vans at the door of KC. Maan wasn't. He knew they would come up with this. With his typical arrogant style, he got off the bike, pulled her close by waist almost glueing her to him and walked to the inspector.
Geet tried to remain calm and composed throughout the whole ordeal.
We have to arrest you Mr.KhuranaThe constables tried to put handcuffs in one of his wrist. Maan stomped his feet hardI had not finished yet...He growled menacingly. The constable writhed in pain on the floor, holding his foot. Listen...
Where is the arrest warrant?Maan spat, his broad shoulders taking an animalistic pose. The Inspector handed it to him with faltering confidence as the two scoundrels finally arrived. Sameer had a sling around his left arm and Anil around his right. Both had bandages around their leg where the bullets lodged. Maan put his hand around Geet pushing her behind him. Adi covered her on her right and Pinky on her left. Rest of the staff crowded around them watching the ruckus. Geet still cowered away with disgust from the leeches. Maan hid her with his wide upper form.
So according to this, I hit them first... Shooting them right?The inspector nodded helplessly trapped.
Okay lets say I cooperate with you... How many witnesses will testify for my so-called crime?Maan smirked taunting, his eyes cold trained on Anil and Sameer. The poor man gulped and saidTwo sire, Anil sir and Sameer sir.Maan raised his eyebrow, in an intimidating pose for calling them "sir" infront of him.
And how many will do that for me?Maan said showing his hand around indicating all his staff of 150 members.
I Uhh...The inspector stuttered.
A whole of 150 members that they attacked a woman's self respect... Right in a lift... I just retaliated... They attacked me and I shot them... Just simple a fight for survivalMaan said too calm for his own good. The Inspector had broken into sweats by now, however he controlledCan I... Can I speak to the woman? And all control Maan had flew out of the window. He charged at the insolent man but he was held back. She had clutched to his back so tightly that her nails almost digged his back. Let go Geet...He hissed. She nodded a meek no and came forward. She testified his statement as the truth. The Inspector obviously did try to intimidate her with awkward questions...keyword 'try'...as soon as he tried he was knocked out by Maan. Never intimidate my womanHe spat hugging her. She didnt approve of him touching her one bit- she was still angry about Meera...but his words...'my woman' built a fuzzy feeling in the pit of her stomach. The security dragged the knocked out man as Anil and Samir limped out hideously. Rough calloused hands held their collar and dragged them back...Its not that I dont have upperhand with contacts...Maan smiled coldly It is to instill the fear in you that you dare not harm my woman even when I am disarmed, bas****s. Moreover do not risk more. What would you bribe people with anymore? You are broke, your companies sold, your houses mortgaged, cars and commodities broken! Completely penniless...helpless...worthless! GET OUT!!He shouted.

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Maan drank and drank till he thought he could forget the image of a certain remarkable girl who overruled his mind and heart. Sadly he couldn't. He dragged his feet to the car. It has been two days since they...broke up...after the deaths...but still it seems like eons since he last saw her. He drove madly towards the cremation ground. There was a huge commotion nearby. His heart felt sinking. Why did it feel like he was loosing...something...someone? He ignored the feeling but lost focus and rammed the car to a nearby tree.

As his eyes squinted open...he closed immediately. There was too much light. Later he was informed by Shekhar, he had brought Maan to US...according to Shekhar he was too depressed and needed a getaway! The Khurana's family lawyer was supposedly

handling the media mess and the company was supposedly headed by Vicky. He was feeling restless. Like he left something back in India. He knew very well what it was but won't admit.
Later in the day he rummaged through net on his laptop to find the news which literally broke his heart "Geet Handa met with a fatal accident. Condition critical". Should he act upon his promise? But he just couldnt bring himself to her, above his hatred. Why did she have to betray him? Did she really? Questions swirled his mind. He looked at his phone...may be a call, a message...something from her...to know she was alive and safe...willing to- willing to what? He dare not admit it. Too afraid to admit he still loves her...can never hate her...the need to know about her safety.,it was crazy. He was so crazy that he refused to change his mobile number...that may be she would contact him. The last he had heard of her was her getting into an accident. So many times, he had tried to find about her, discreetly though! But in vain... He was distracted by Shekhar. He introduced Meera, his daughter, to Maan...Maan this is my daughter Meera, Meera meet Maan... Khurana uncle's sonMeera nodded coyly as Maan shook her hand hesitantly. I have some work Maan... You two enjoy... She will be great company, and Maan just relax!However Maan felt unsettled and tensed. After Shekhar left, Meera insisted that he should eat. After much resistance he relented. And much to his annoyance, she fed him and was being too touchy. It all felt so so wrong. The eyelash flutter, the leaning of her body on his, her so-called husky voice felt so repulsive to him. He pushed her away, moving a yard apart. But she was too much pursuieng, as she told him to take the last pill-she being a doctor, without much ado he had it. And then it started. A mind-cracking headache.
He held his head hard...he threw all things away from the table...throwing things...getting aggressive...destroying the whole room...glass pieces on the floor. He ransacked the room like a crazed man.

All through this time, Meera stood at the corner, extremely scared. Sure the medicine had side-effects but never did they imagine in their dreams that this would be the reaction. Maan's gaze finally fell on her. He stalked towards her like a ferocious predator.

Her heartbeat was slowing down. The graph of the electrocardiogram tending to a flat line. Doctor rushed in frantically trying to give shocks to her chest... Rahul paced around rapidly in the waiting room... Waiting for some positive news of Geet's recovery... Maanu cried incoherently, every now and then praying to God to save Geet. She was guilty enough...blaming herself for her father's death...blaming herself to follow that scoundrel Vikash...blaming herself for mass death...and now for Geet being at the brink of death. Why did she not listen to Rahul? She cursed herself carressing her stomach...petting their baby and now getting her child endangered...by Vikash. Oh how much she hated that man! Her hatred for Maan though had turned neutral...she neither hated nor loved him now!

Maan grabbed her hand, digging his fingers to her arm. Her father did tell her to seduce Maan- What the hell did you give me?He screamed in pain. Anti-depressant pills...She whispered. She felt so ashamed that she couldn't make Maan want her. So she decided to lie Maan about their "amazing" relationship.
Maan pushed her away as she crashed to the wall. He felt as if he touched a burning log. 'I can only touch Geet' He chanted madly. That soothed his soul and he walked out...too angry to face the bit*h.

Her heartbeat became stable. Rahul and Maanu relaxed visibly thanking God. The threat of Vikash still making Maanu edgy. She is stable now... Although she slipped to coma...she is safe...you can visit her...Rehaan informed. He had assisted the doctor in the operation. She had hit her brain on the steering wheel, too hard. Rehaan rushed her to hospital as soon as he found her at the accident site. Her purse vibrated. It was Maanu calling. Rehaan informed them of her condition...and they came along right away.
Maanu was unaware of Vikash's plan to kill both fathers. Now that she knew, her heart shattered, she deemed herself to be responsible for it. Rahul was shocked too, he didn't expect that Vikash would go to this extent for mere property. He- his thoughts broke as they saw Geet. They touched her face, gracefully kissing her forehead asking her to get up soon. However Rehaan looked worried. What happened Rehaan? You look tensed?Rahul enquired still fearing Vikash's call.
Her beat should raise by a unit when anyone touches her...it isn't happeningHe prodded along her skin but no response. He called in a female doctor asking to touch her private parts...may be that would stimulate her recognition but no response. Rahul sighed dejectedly She has developed autopagnosia

Maanu stood up alert and shocked. What the hell do you mean?She demanded. Rehaan was unfazed and some other emotion she couldn't point out. Exactly what I said. Inability to recognize people by touch... Look at her you talk to her... Her beat raises but when you touch her no response...He informed. Maanu did verify the theory. She was so so broken. What's the cure?It was Rahul who asked. He held up Maanu who was heartbrokenly falling down.None...I have searched the remedies... Its just practice and may be regular touch to make her recognize people... However her condition has been worsened by the comaHe spoke worriedly and then walked off talking to the doctor who had headed Geet's operation. Rahul looked at his phone, Vikash's call. He dreaded it so much, but took it eventually. Last time Vikash was just silently threatening him about the baby and now he openly did it. Maanu now aware of what extent he could go, agreed to him and so did Rahul. They couldn't risk lives now. When Geet, baby and Maanu all are so vulnerable. As the call ended, Maanu sat down screaming in pain holding her wobbling belly. Turns out it was the baby growing in her and the stress combined for the cause of pain. However their many worry was 'to wake up Geet as soon as possible and get her to hate Maan and work against him. Snatch his property and handover to Vikash. Perfect revenge plan as Vikash ordered.'

Maan walked out of the room to the garden, spending the rest of the night there. He cuddled up in the bench, relieving their memories. He missed her so so much.

Two months later
Maan missed her today all the more. Today would have been her birthday. They would have gone sky-diving as he had planned it and reserved their place before engagement. His pain worsened when the owner himself called enquiring about their reservation. He didn't know why but he asked him to postpone it. Just then Meera came in a skimpy outfit twirling around. She had been giving the medicine in small doses through his food or directly since that day... The bloody sight of her like this didn't settle down well with him. Sure being a psychiatrist she was a great friend...but then she just wasn't it...she just wasn't the one...she just wasn't Geet. Oh why the hell he remembered her? Why couldn't he forget or hate her completely?? As Meera slithered her hand around his neck, he stood stiff. Seeing no resistance she was encouraged. She placed her lips on his. In a fit of rage, he placed his hand around her pulling her close, leaving nail marks around her bare waist and neck. He wanted relief...release from this complicated pain. But all he felt was an inanimate object on his lip that produced an acid like burn throughout his body. He pushed her disgusted, she repulsed him. He held his lips scrubbing them hard trying to remember even the slightest touch. I am sorry...so so sorry...its I love someone ... I can't hate her... Can't forget herHe rushed to the bathroom washing every bit of her on him. Scrubbing hard leaving red marks. Meera was so damn insulted. She was determined to seduce him to sleep with her as instructed by her father, just after the medicinal effect at night, she smirked evilly.

Geet's body jerked, machines beeping...as if her body responding to the call of her other half, his need to be with her. Her body was slowly waking up from coma. Her condition improving.

As planned Meera mixed a heavy dose of the medicine in his food and served him making sure he ate. After that was done , she made sure he drank quite a lot of alcohol to loosen up. Then she slowly inched closer to him. He was already agitated from earlier and now the heavy dose with being drunk now drove him to the limit of aggresiveness. As soon she was in his reach, he held her hair harshly throwing her towards the window. She got up unsteadily, though scared but appeared unfazed and slipped her dress down a bit and approached him. He was downright animalistic by now,he pushed her away with all his manly strength, she rammed herself to the door. Blood dribbling down her head and mouth.Only Geet can be close to me... Only she can be close to me...He screamed madly, crazily chanting...affectionately. Scared, she whimpered and ran away. However, Maan furious as ever hit whatever he could in the room and slipped to a deep slumber.
Next day as Maan woke up with a huge headache he felt unsettled. Last night something wrong happened, he could feel it in the air. As he tried to recall, all he could feel was blank. Just nothing. He couldn't stay there anymore. He felt suffocated. He packed a small bag with his necessities and his mobile and left US to India.
However when Shekhar questioned Meera about the marks, she shied and lied that she and Maan spent the night together. Shekhar was very happy but he had urgent work and hence left town. Meera couldn't possibly explain how she was insulted and rejected when she threw herself at him so openly. Hence opted to build a web of lies infront of her father about all the trips

and the dates she had with Maan supposedly. However in India, Maan wallowed in sorrow, pity then self-hatred and finally in hatred towards her. Even though Vicky tried to explain, as much he knew of the engagement night, that Geet was innocent and forced. However his mind refused to register any other logical thinking. Like he had just pre-determined that he had to hate her. That she was at fault. Somewhere he knew it was all pretense...that he would melt like ice at her first sight...that his all walls will be broken at her first touch. Yet he wouldn't admit. So stubborn he was. Yet it all happened sequentially.
He did melt like ice at her first sight with the heat of their love and passion.
All of his walls did break completely at her first touch. She was his undoing.

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