Originally posted by: lashy
The kind of scenes that you outlined - the ones that spoke of pigeon/water, the sword practising, the lep, the plate-feeding etc.. they missed showing.. and suddenly the last two days they showed us loads of scenes that sort of upset the balance in the show! 😳
I know!!! I am so happy to see beautiful Akdha scenes in past few days.😳
( What is happening to me? Why am I remembering things related to him? why am I not being able to handle myself? why am I thinking about him since last night? First, when I was feeding birds, then during sword practice when I did not even realize I was hurt, then during application of medicine and lastly when I saw my brother and sister-in-law. I don't want to remember him when he did not even trust me! When I just started loving him, he accused me of adultery! Why can't I forget him? I am far away from him and yet I am not happy. what do I do, Kanha? Please help me, Kanha!)
A maid comes to tell her that Raja Bharmal had called her. Jodha goes and finds out about Shahenshah forgiving Shivani and Tejwant. Jodha tries to show Shivani's point-of-view to her father. Her father says he cannot forgive Shivani but wishes her well. Jodha tells that Dadisa that she understand love better than before but she is still mad at Shivani for putting her Mughal family's honour at stake. She was trying to show her father the other side of coin but does not mean she supports Shivani's elopment. She also tells her Dadisa that she is little surprised that Shahenshah had forgiven Shivani because she knows that how upset and furious he was when Shivani eloped and thus breaking his brother and her devar's heart. She wonders if he had started understanding love better just like her and how come even after she refused to go with him to Agra, he still forgave Shivani despite the latter being at fault. She wonders if Kanha is trying to give her some kind of signal.
This paragraph made more sense than what Jodha spoke in the serial👏
Aww thank u. 😳.It was one of my intention to show smooth transition in Jodha's feelings and how I would have liked CVS to show it.She also realizes that because she was hurt and angry in past few days she was not admitting to herself that she was also partly at fault regarding Sujamal bhaisa's misunderstanding. Yes, she did not know that Shahenshah knew of her outing at nights but later she realized that he still did not stop her when he found out first night because at first he did trust her but may be when she hid things from him, it created a suspicion in him and may be any other person would have doubted too.
Awww again...I wish she'd admitted this part too 😳
It seems u liked few parts of my os than serial and I am so glad u liked it.
My eyes were desperately waiting to have one look of yours. You have no idea how I handled myself all these days. Since I heard of you coming back, each moment was weighing hard on me and I could wait no more. It felt like time has become still
Since I have realized I was wrong too, I have been restless. I did not to cause you anymore hurt. I wanted to meet you right away. I have come back for you, for me and for our unbreakable relation
Rahim suddenly runs in Jodha's room surprising Jodha and making her happy. She takes him in her arms and hugs him. Rahim starts crying and tells her he missed her a lot and why did she leave him? He asks if she will leave him again! (Jalal is admiring Rahim and his choti-ammijaan's love towards each other).She answers she will never leave HIM by looking at her Shahenshah.
😳 - btw, "HIM" was written for two reasons: one is described above- that it was for Shahenshah but another reason was a little tribute to you because in your ff- NJAPA- you use it for Jalal. 😳
Rahim insists on hearing story from his chote abujaan and choti ammijaan. He brings both of them on Jodha's bed and sits between two to hear the story. He wants both of them to tell the story together by taking a turn. Jalal starts story by telling Rahim of a King who saw a Princess called "Registan ka Gulab" in her palkhi first time during Ganghor festival...Jodha continues to tell him how princess saw a handsome and uknown face which looked like a King in reflection of water. They continued the story while looking at each other and reveling in their journey and in between looking at Rahim while making themselves comfortable by lying down next to him on each side. They did not even realize when Rahim fell asleep and ended the story that with a new ray of sunshine will bring a positivity and a new beginning in King and Queen's lives. Jalal and Jodha falls asleep with smile on their faces ( next to Rahim ) with their hands entangled on top of Rahim's hands.
I loved the ending... with the story and didn't think its not romantic at all.. loved it... 🤗I can't believe this is your first work of fiction.. loved it yaar.. keep it up and keep it coming
Awww- I am touched and honored that you loved it.🤗 It is very special coming from you. I loved the ending too and many people loved it. It's funny because this ending just popped in my mind even before I decided where to start from.
P.S. thank you so much for the English translation because I can't read Hindi in English 😳
You are most welcome!! I know few people don't understand Hindi at all and another reason was in case you decided to read it, I wanted to make it easy it for you too.😳
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