OS: Ankahee Baatein (Unspoken conversation)- Author's note-pg 9- 05/23

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutiegurl4u
How dare you!! You can't just end it there. I want more happy lovey dovey disgustingly sweet crap(yes i know that doesnt make sense, just go with it dids) I loved the story and i was smiling the whole time i was reading. i loved that you added the translations too. but just saying you didnt add the translation for hojra and i had to ask you.(you didnt have to be mean and laugh at me!)

p.s. others who are reading this, this is my sister so yes i can tease her and be mean

So finally, after 4 days u read it and commented!! bad bad sister! 😡😆. awww thank u my lil sis for loving it. I know u love the happy and lovey dovey moments but it's supposed to be one-shot so ended it here but if I get an incentive and motivation to develop this story I might or write a new os but can't promise.

@underlined: it was funny the way u asked 😆- now u know it means room.

Love u my lil sis 🤗

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cutiegurl4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ashpat

So finally, after 4 days u read it and commented!! bad bad sister! 😡😆. awww thank u my lil sis for loving it. I know u love the happy and lovey dovey moments but it's supposed to be one-shot so ended it here but if I get an incentive and motivation to develop this story I might or write a new os but can't promise.

@underlined: it was funny the way u asked 😆- now u know it means room.

Love u my lil sis 🤗

jung ka elaan ho gaya hain! i have been working double shifts for two days and i am was tired!!! and love you too big sis. also get it right its "happy lovey dovey disgustingly sweet crap" not "happy and lovey dovey moments". also i would do the cool smiley thingies but i dont know how to do them! you know i am not tech savvy(no jokes and dont laugh) also you do realize i am going to bother you till you continue this story, right? muahahahahahaha!

love you dids
p.s. i saw the smiley things after i ended i was too lazy to add them and i am sore so yea. and i didnt know how to change the color(not tech savy)

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ashpat

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yurimehta11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

hi sorry for late comment you wrote very beautiful i never feel while reading that you are writing first time Tumne jo likha mujhe bahut accha laga better than show no overboard emotions everything is balanced I request you to write further agar ho sake to isse ff bana do I am waiting for next update from you thanks for pm me such a fantastic writing

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Posted: 11 years ago

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: yurimehta11
hi sorry for late comment you wrote very beautiful i never feel while reading that you are writing first time Tumne jo likha mujhe bahut accha laga better than show no overboard emotions everything is balanced I request you to write further agar ho sake to isse ff bana do I am waiting for next update from you thanks for pm me such a fantastic writing

Thank u. Surprisingly, it's my first creative writing. I am really happy u liked it. I appreciate it coming from a good writer like u. I will try to c if i can continue this or maybe write another os. Thanks for reading and commenting.