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Posted: 11 years ago
part 23
awesome dear...
nice one...
poor Geet...
and Maan too...
whats the entire truth?
Daadima is shocked to hear Geet's decision...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 24
awesome...
this man is so disgusting...
and Maan is here...
Maan and Geet are meeting after a long time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 25
awesome...
so they are gonna stay at the Mansion...
what happened to Maan?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update
maaneet faceoff
maaneet r really in lot of pain
but now i think that maan pain is more because everyone as left him
i want geet to atleast listen to the truth once maybe maan is not really at fault
hope geet does it
at night i think its maan's paining scream
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i m loving this story too much.. great update dear!!!!😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
The situation is like none could be blame! I know the situation is tough n both are burning in their own hell but I can only wish for them to start it all over again with giving each other some space n time! And now that Maaneet are going to stay together i m so waiting for their interactions as i m completely clueless about how u gonna make them come close n trust each other n Geet to let go of all her guards completely she has created around herself! She has already taken one step by making Maan stay at their own house though she gave the reason to be dadima for it, i simply loved how she still cares so much for him! I so m looking forward to what Maan can do now as till now it was Geet who was keeping all her promises n doing her duties n all but now i want Maan to try hard n win her again by making some great efforts n show his charms though this time in a right way n by not hurting her!

-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates
maaneet met!!!!
waiting to see how their relationship will take a turn now!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating.. 😊
Not a very long part..but its on someone's req.. 😳
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Updating dear..😳
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HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW



PART 26

Geet woke up startled in her sleep when she heard an agonizing scream break through the silence of the night. She looked around her room; scared ,but it was empty. Was she dreaming.? Her breathing became heavy and another shiver ran down her spine as the sound echoed through the house again. It suddenly dawned upon her that she wasn't alone in the house. Maan.!!! She jumped out of her bed and ran towards his room, horrified with the screams. She pushed the door open and the sight that awaited her shook her to her core.! Her senses froze as the sight in front of her sunk in, Maan was screaming in his sleep. His face was now muffled into the pillow and he was thrashing in his sleep. Panic shook her when he screamed into the pillow once again. Her heart grappled in pain at his condition, he was in immense pain. Geet ran towards him and tried shaking him out of his sleep but all her efforts went in vain as he only blabbered further.

Maan.?? Maan, wake up.! Geet shook him frantically unable to bear his condition. It was the first time ever she was seeing him in so much pain. His muffled screams were dreadful enough, she felt relieved for a minute that she hadn't seen him actually screaming.

I.. I'm.. I'm.. Sorry.. No.. I didn't.. Maa.. Paa.. I didn't.. Maan mumbled in his sleep. Geet felt tears clouding her eyes, he was having such a terrible nightmare. Geet felt choked seeing him tormented to such an extent. Grabbing the glass of water kept next to her, Geet tried waking him up once again.

Maan.?? Maan.. It's okay.. Maan.. Geet kept on repeating until she felt him snap out of his sleep. Maan sat up on the bed startled out of his sleep. He looked around to find Geet sitting beside him, looking shocked. He wiped away the beads of sweat off his face and looked at the water in her hand. Her bewildered face gave away everything, he knew how she had seen him. Before she could question him, Maan quickly got off the bed and stormed into the washroom closing the door behind. Geet stood motionless near the bed trying to grasp all that had just happened. She had never seen Maan in such a condition. Something was haunting him. She sat on the bed waiting for him to come out, disturbed by her own thoughts. Maan on the other hand stood infront of the huge mirror looking at himself. Once again it was the same nightmare which had gripped him over the past 2 years, all his loved ones going away from him. He couldn't take it ever, it always managed to haunt him in his sleep. It had been a long time he has slept properly without waking up screaming. Daadimaa had given up by now.! The worse part was, Geet had seen it haunting him. Her eyes darted towards the bathroom door as it clicked open and he walked out of it.

Maan, are you okay.? You were.. Geet asked him as he walked towards the door but stopped talking seeing him stop. Maan looked back to find her looking at him in concern.

I'm fine Geet. Just stressed out, I need some air. You can go and sleep, I just need some time alone. Maan said in a low voice and walked out of the room leaving a worried Geet behind. Geet quietly walked out of the room but as she remembered his tormented face, her heart didn't allow her to go and sleep peacefully while he was disturbed. She knew it was her own loss in thinking about all this but the moment her thoughts went back to his face, all her efforts crumbled. There wasn't any way she wouldn't feel the pain if he was in one.! Her heart wouldn't be at peace until she would make sure he was okay. Geet slowly walked towards the terrace where she had seen him leaving to. Hiding behind the terrace door, Geet spotted him standing towards the end of the terrace facing away from her. As she looked closely, she noticed him smoking with a glass and bottle by his side. She stood there, shocked with what she had seen, Maan was no longer the same; he had changed . She knew him in and out and she was aware of his habits and dislikes. Although she knew about his often drinking Habit but she had never seen him smoking. He never smoked. Disappointment washed over her, everything about him looked so changed that now she felt like she didn't know him.

Maan stood at the end of the terrace sipping his drink. It was the only thing that kept him away from nightmares, giving him the scarce sleep he often got. It was almost every night now that the nightmare haunted him, he had thought coming to London would keep them away, but he was wrong; the one who could keep re. Way was no where with him. Frustrated, he gulped down the entire glass making Geet frown in anger. The sight disgusted her and she walked away from the place unable to bear his tormented state anymore.

Entering her room, Geet plopped herself on the bed thinking about him. The more she tired to understand him, the more mysterious she found him to be. It was hurting her no less to see him in such a condition and there was only one person who would help her out. Grabbing her phone, she dialled Daadimaa's number hoping she would be able to know more about him. As the phone rang, she realized how difficult it would be for her to live in the same house as him yet be so far away from him.

Daadimaa.? Geet meekly spoke into the phone as she heard Daadimaa's voice on the other end. How was she supposed to ask Daadimaa about what happened.? How would she react.? Maan meant the world to her.

Geet bte.? What happened.? Daadimaa's worried voice came through the phone.

Daadimaa, is Maan okay.? She asked as her voice shook towards the end.

Geet, what happened to him.? Daadimaa's panic was evident in her voice. Geet held the phone tighter as she remembered his agonized scream.

Daadimaa, Maan was screaming in his sleep. He was mumbling to himself and I didn't know what to do.. I have never seen him in so much pain Daadimaa. Geet said frantically on the phone. She heard Daadimaa sigh.

I'm not surprised bte. Maan hasn't slept peacefully for even one night in these 2 years. He often has nightmares and he just sits in his room refusing to sleep. I have asked him to go see a doctor so many times, but he just doesnt listen to me. I have stopped worrying about his screams, I have become used to them now. He has started drinking to keep himself away from the nightmares. I thought going to London might help him but I guess here is no place my Maan will find his peace. Geet quietly heard Daadimaa talk on the phone. Her heart pricked at the way Daadimaa described Maan's condition from the past 2 years, he was till suffering from the same haunting memories.


His night mares are just a result of all the pain and guilt he has in his heart which he refuses to let go off. He has never opened his heart up. It's oblivious that those memories will haunt him. You are the one person he could have explained himself to, the one person for whom he could feel guilty too and punish himself for all mistakes he did. But when you went away, he was all alone yet again. He never talked to me or anyone. He had changed himself completely, cold to the world around him. Cold because nothing would effect him, but he forgot that his heart was always a part of his body, he wouldn't be able to betray it. Daadima spoke on the phone, Geet could sense her tears. Was his pain because of her, she had left him without giving a chance to explain himself out of her own selfishness. It was her who didn't have the courage to hear the truth, why did he have to suffer.? Unable to hold back her years, Geet set the phone back into it's cradle disconnecting the call. Her heart was aching thinking about him. She could feel the sobs building in her chest, yet she was helpless.!

She sat on the bed remembering the moment she had spent with him. Those were her most cherished moment of life. It was all she had in the form of memories. Tears rolled down her eyes as she thought about the pain he would have been through in the 2 years.! He would screamed himself awake out of his sleep countless times. He never shared any of his pain with Daadimaa, he was all alone. What if she didn't have enough courage in herself to face the truth but she wouldn't let him go through the pain anymore.! Maan felt a hand on his shoulder, he turned around to find her standing behind him. She had tears in her eyes and a smile on her face. His heart swelled in happiness as she opened her arms for him, giving a heart beat to his lifeless heart. Maan smiled and hid himself in her open arms, dipping himself in the crook of her neck. Her hands wrapped around his back tightly holding him closer while his hands wrapped around her waist, holding her closer. Tears streamed town his eyes as he felt her so closely after 3 long years, all his pain vanished with her touch. Geet sat on the ground and pulled his head into her lap, caressing his fade softly. Maan closed his eyes in peace, it was the touch he needed. No pain could harm him while he was in her arms. Maan dreamt of her, reeling with every touch of hers as she caressed him to sleep. He drifted off to sleep, lost in his own sweet world which only had the two of the, no pain nor any guilt. Geet slowly walked over to the terrace to find him sleeping on the floor. She rushed towards him but her surprise, he was sleeping on ground with a smile on his face. Her had reached out to touch him but she held it back afraid if she might wake him again, ruining his peaceful sleep. Geet sat there admiring his smiling face for a few minutes when she felt the wind blowing across the open area.

Her hand caressed his hair as he slept on the bed peacefully, devoid of any nightmares. Her hand softly caressed his hair until she felt the peaceful smile cover his lips once again. It was then she realized, she could do anything for that smile even if it meant putting aside all her fears and preventing him from being in pain while he on the other hand, he would take any pain for her to be happy, even if it meant suffering every minute of his life. That was their unconditional love.!


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Well, there goes the next part. I wasn't gonna update till the likes were done..But.. This update was specially for someone..
@ Aishu : Happy Birthday Aishu..😳 Hope you are happy with a small gift as the update is small too. 🤗❤️

If the part didnt turn out well, I am sorry guys. I started typing this at 2.A.M.. My eyes were droopy and I didnt know where I was going with this.. Still tried my best..excuse the mistakes please.!!! 😃

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