MG FF || HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW #3 || ON HOLD - NOTE PG154 || - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
Double update... Thank you so much. I was eager to see their meet.
Now they had meet talked n talked and now they are under one roof.
I was really wonderful reading both update. Mixture of both Maan and Geet's POV..
They are still in love with each other yet destiny leads them to separate.
Maan have pushed himself to much lonely person.. He blames , hates himself for giving the pain to Geet. And the worst part, thou he was on wrong, Geet didn't give him a chance to let him explain. He couldn't prove himself.
Geet here is equivalently lonely person. Thou she can't hate Maan, she is scared to give a chance to Maan. She doesn't want to get herself hurt again and again. It only makes her broken.
I really loved Maan's entry, they way he protect Geet from Mr Rathode. This fellow needs to know his stand. How could he mishandle a lady, so rude and arrogant.
The slap from Geet was surprising. She couldn't take it when he bad mouth about Maan.
I'm really eager to know , how will their relationship takes leads from here. Now both are staying under one roof, going to be working together for few months..
What happen at the end? I guess it might be Maan... someone might have attack him..


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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb entry after 3 y she was in Maan's arm
Awesome double ud
Their love is still same but destiny playing
with their heart Geet must take step ahead and
listen him once
Maan was hell angry on Geet 4 not telling him
about Mr Andrew harassing her from 15days
Geet stop him for going hotel now they will live
in same house but wat happens to Maan y he scream
that Andrew have to do with this WAITING
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n triple amazing updates! Bt read Part 23 n commented already! JJs read Part 24 n 25 nw! Superbly written! Maan has arrived! Geet tries to deal with Rathode bt Maan arrives n is incensed! Maan confronts Geet! Geet asks him to stay ta her place bt Maan does nt want to hurt her! Geet sees his pain! Maan agrees he has hirt her bt will nt let anyone elkse hurt her! Maan sees the portrait of his parents! Geet realises tht he also lost his parents! Maaneet go n sleep bt both suffering! Geet hears a scream! its Maan! She is worried n goes to him n is shocked at wt she sees! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
someone screamd?
is the person maan?
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
thank you for the double update Both parts r just mindblowing
wat happened to maan...???
will b waiting for nxt updt

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Very nice to read all parts. Well written. Thank u so much for three updates. Can't wait for more. Feel bad for both of them:))))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
truly amazinggg!

geet is just scared to believe in her fate

maan is having nightmares???

pls cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
love the updates
the way u showed the inner turmoil of maan and geet was awesome

then get not being to avoid him but still not able to accept him


like the way finally maan made his mind to try and to bring geet back


waitng for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Andrew.. ki kahir nahi ab.. He dared to slap her.. one thing is sure.. Maan is mistaking her.. she doesn't want to hear him further becoz she doesn't want to hate him.. hope there is some side of story.. where there will be chance for them to come together again.. He was happy seeing her defending him in front of that Andrew.. Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update yeahhh i love the way they met..they understand each other so well still this distance :( i hope Geet give him chance to open up...thank u for the update ...

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