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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

beech me kyun ghus gayi sparrow

pahle teaser de doon update do din baad le lena😛

no plz rashmi aisa mat karna ..
plz update do ..teaser nahi cahaiye ab plz
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nahin mila😭😭
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iss page par ye sixth post hai
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please stop posting pics
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you will have to wait for new thread
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

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please stop posting pics
warna iss thread me update nahin milegi
you will have to wait for new thread
soch lo kya karna hai

i will not post ..
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Part-57

They reached the village in the wee hrs. It was very cold.. But for their surprise some villagers were present there to welcome them.

They were some senior people of the village including the sarpanch. Gautam was a very respectable personality as he had done a lot for the development of the village without any personal interest. He had helped the villagers to build a school there where all children of the village including girls studied. Modern systems of education were being used there.

Many young men of the village worked in Handa industries in Delhi and their families were doing well in the village...

All got down of the bus. Villagers welcome them. Geet and Rahul came forward to touch their feet and in return found many blessings.

Serpanch looking at Maan-handa sahib ye Geet ke pati hai na

Gautam-Haan sarpanch ji..ye Maan hai aur hum damaad ke saath saath bahu bhi le kar aaye hain..Ye Anvesha hai..Diwali ke baad rahul ki shadi hai is ke saath.Maan ki bahan hai ya aur ye dono hamaare samdhi hain..Ram ji aur Priya ji.. and village people met Ram and Priya with full respect.

Maan and Anie too took their blessings. Villagers have heard from Gautam about Khuranas . They knew that they were so rich but did not get a hint about that by their behavior..sarpanch asked the care taker to take the luggage in. They all came in and the tea was ready for them . They enjoyed the tea in that cold and felt relaxed. After having the tea Villagers left as it was early morning and asked all of them to take some rest.

Elders decided to take some rest while all youngsters decided to take a walk as the weather was so beautiful. First.. it was a hilly area and the second no sign of any pollution was there in the air.

They walked a little long .. Anie and Maan found the village quite beautiful...Rahuil and Geet showed them the building of school. It was quite big and looking like some modern schools as they had seen in Delhi.

They returned and all had their breakfast...

Now it was time to take care of for what they were there...Gautam had called the senior persons of the village to know the about the problems of the village...and for the issues related to their land

Women too came to meet Sudha and Priya and Obviously to meet Maan and Anie too as they were their SIL and would be DIL..

And for the surprise of Khuranas ..there was a group of children too who were there to meet Geet..As they knew that she was married now and with her Inlaws..So they were standing in a corner. They did not find her like she was before marriage ..they could see that there was standing a different Geet..least they knew about whatever happened with her in last one year

Geet saw them and came -Arrey tum log yahaan kyun khade ho? Geet di ko bhool gaye kya?And she spread her arms for them ..and kids became happy to see that gesture and fear disappeared from their hearts and they came near her,,she hugged them and said-Aao yahaan


and she took them to her inlaws. ...

She introduced her them to her inlaws and Khuranas were surprised to see that Geet knew the name of every child..Rahul went in and came back with a bag in his hand. He gave it to Geet and Geet opened it. There were chocolates in the bag. She gave a chocolate to one little girl..,she brought her hand to take that but Geet took it back-Not like this..you have to give me a kiss in return..and that girl smiled and nodded. Geet gave her the chocolate and she kissed on her cheek in return...

Geet-aur jis kisi ko bhi chocolate chahiye he will have to give me a puppy otherwise no chocolate..Theek hai ? and All kids repeated this act os kissing her on her cheeks..

Maan and Anie were watching this with amused expression but Rahul was smiling to see her sister as she loved kids and enjoyed their company..

Priya and Sudha were talking to the ladies and Gautam and Ram were busy were gents..Rahul..Anie and maan were watching Geet who was busy with the kids...Maan watched the kids kissing Geet and he did not know what happened to him.. The scene in front of him awakened the feel of little J -everyone can touch her, kiss her except me..and It's me only who should have this right only. She is mine first.. He moved ahead in a trance and spread his palm in front of her like some hypnotized person -She put a chocolate on his palm without seeing who was there as she was busy in taking another chocolate out of the bag and received a kiss on her cheek in return .

Geet-Thank U ..and looked at kid who kissed her and froze at her place. Geet felt her cheeks turning hot with the change of the color... she felt her blood rushing towards her ears..her senses stopped to work.she stood like a statue. She was staring him ..her eyes forgot to blink..She looked in to his eyes as he too was looking at her with deep eyes..

Anie's mouth opened to see the act of her brother..and Rahul ... he knew that Maan was now in trouble as he had to give an answer to Geet for this act..

Children giggled to see them and they laughed putting their palms on their mouth...their giggling brought both of them back from their dreamland..

Maan came back to his senses realizing what he had done ..Now he had to cover up his act before Geet..he started to think fast..

Geet-Maan ..aap..ye..

Maan had fined the answer for that very quickly- Wo Geet you asked them to get a kiss in return of that chocolate..otherwise you were not giving them chocolate and I wanted to take a chocolate ..and I could not wait long for that because chocolate were going to be finished..I thought that rule was the same for all so I did that ..I m sorry if you felt bad..and he returned the chocolate back to her..

Geet-No it's ok.. you can take it..

Maan-Thanks ...and without wasting time he turned from there, took a deep sigh for making himself safe from the questioning eyes of Geet ... He was feeling her gaze on his back. his eyes met with Rahul who was watching him with a smirk on his face and Maan smartly raised his eyebrow looking at him. For Anie ... she did not know about the personal life of her brother and his wife..She only helped them earlier as Rahul asked her to do that to make them comfortable with each other..as they were married in some awkward situations.

after the distribution of chocolates ,the children took Geet outside of the house.


Anie too was with them. They all sat on the stairs outside of the house .It was their routine whenever they were in village. They used to talk to Geet for hrs..they always told her about what happened in the village in last one year ..which family got a new member...Kids were talking nonstop and Geet were listening to them but her mind still was wondering in that kiss land..so she was sitting quietly there without talking to them.

A girl said to geet-Didi aap badal gaye ho..(You are changed)

Geet-wo kaise?

Girl 2-haan didi..jab aap pahle aati thi to bahut saari baaten karti thi..ab dekho hum baat kar rahe hain aur aap sirf hamaari baaten sun rahi hain(Yesdi..when you came here earlier you used to talk a lot..and now only we are talking you are only listening)

Geet-nahin aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai(No..nothing is like that)..I m the same Geet

A boy- If that so then let's go for the swimming...

Geet-n nn nahin swimming nahin

Boy2-see we told you that you are changed..and they sat there silent with a pouting and grumpy face..

Geet-aisa bilkul bhi nahin hai..dekho na saath me sab hain ..aise me swimming ke liye jana theek hoga kya..(No ..not like that,all are with me so it will not look good na to go for swimming)

Kids were looking disappointed ,,They already had made plans for swimming..but Geet was not supporting them..and then they saw Maan and Rahul there. A little girl was sitting with Geet. Maan took that girl in her lap and set near Geet.

Maan had heard their talks as he and Rahul were standing on the window , which opened outside of the house. Kids with Geet were sitting near that window so their talks were audible to Maan and Rahul. Both came out to be a part of that group. Rahul sat near Anie .

Maan- I think Geet does not know how to swim..and he looked at Geet with his corners of his eyes to see the reaction of Geet

Geet mouth opened as she knew that Maan was aware of her swimming.

Boy 1-nahin ..she knows..we all go to swim in the stream..and she had defeated rahul bhaiya so many times in the swimming competition.

Maan-Achchha ?? and he smirked to see Geet and said-your Rahul bhaiya was saying that he lost to your di intentionally. Am I right rahul ? and he winked at him. Rahul nodded in yes and Geet responded at this.

Geet-Maan..Rahul was lying..

Maan- How can I believe..

Another kid to Maan-Do you know swimming?

Maan-haan.we have a swimming pool in our house..

Kids laughed to hear that. Geet too smiled at this even . Rahul too smiled as he knew that Maan was being trapped in his own trap.

One kid- there is a difference between swimming in the pool and stream..In pool you have still water but stream is flowing..so it's tough to swim there and Geet di can defeat you in that.

Maan-I don'e believe this .. she can't defeat me.. I can bet.. .. (to Kids) araey she is scared ..I know her she will not accept it

This ignited the spark of original Geet in her- Maan you can't chalenge me. I can swim here far better than you can..

Maan-Then prove it..

Geet-think twice Maan before challenging me ..you know it very well that it's dangerous to challenge Geet.

Maan-It's not necessary that you always will win..

Geet-don't try to be the object of their fun Maan.They will laugh at you

Maan-For that you have to defeat me and for that you will have to go for the swimming

Kids were now excited..as they had seen Rahul losing to Geet so many times..Now they wanted to see Maan losing to her.all said-Yes didi accept it..and show him that you are a better swimmer than jijaji..

Rahul understood the intension of Maan. He knew that he wanted to bring that Geet back which had disappeared long time ago..and he knew it too that geet was the girl who loved to take challenges..and he was right..Geet accepted that challenge.

Kids became happy and they informed their elders who were there and talking with Handas and Khuranas...

Girls informed ladies that maan and Geet were going for a swimming competition and Sudh said-Geet .. leave these childish behavior..you are married now but priya stopped her - Sudha ji jane dijiyei n logon ko..Let them enjoy.. .. and sudha agreed as Geet's MIL gave her consent. Geet changed in to a top and 3/4 leggi..as she could not were the swimming costume..Anie was not interested in swimming as she never swam in natural water .. She was looking little uncomfortable Rahul today kept himself away from Maan and Geet as he wanted to leave them alone with each other .both were going with them to enjoy the competition.

They were coming out of the house where boys were waiting for them...they had already informed them about their plans.

As they came out of the house they heard the gents of the village..They were saying to the kids-Damad ji hi jeetenge..

Kids-why..Geet di is a very good swimmer. She had defeated Rahul bhaiya so many times

One man-Haan .. Rahul is her brother...lekin pati ke saamne patni jeetegi to pati ki kya izzat rah jaayegi.. sab hansenge un par ki pati kamzor hai patni se

Geet heard it and stopped.. she turned to say something but Ram said-arrey nahin ..ye sab purani baaten hain..aaj kal sab barabar hai..ladka ho ya ladki ..chhota bada kuchh nahin..

Geet smiled to hear it and she moved without saying anything to them.

All reached to the point

(I don't know anything about the swimming competition..I don't even know about any rule of swimming..all the competition part is only my imagination to create a suitable scene for the update)

It was a beautiful stream. Clean sparkling water was flowing there..Anie was little scared to see that. The water was flowing with much noise

There was place at a little height on the shore of the stream..It was made naturally with the cutting of the hill..it was used to take dive in to the stream

Rules were set. they had to swim four time along it's width. It was very long..so they had to swim along with the width of it and it was tough because while swim they had to fight with the flow of the stream..Maan stood on the edge of the stone from where they were going to jump..

Maan was in his trunk and his upper body was bare and he was looking hot.. geet looked at him and felt some butterflies in her stomach but she shrugged her feeling as swimming was in her mind. Maan gave Geet his hand to help her in coming up on the stone ..and Geet held it to come up. He unintentionally pulled her with little more force and Geet landed on his bare chest..and she kept her hand on his shoulder to balance herself. Geet blinked her eyes twice to absorb that feel of his body in her mind.. Maan was already trying to control himself since Geet started to sleep with him . and he had done masters in controlling being Geet around himself. He parted her away from him and made her stand properly muttering a sorry to her. She too controlled her body and stood with him to take the dive.

And kids counted -I.. 2..

Maan- All the best Geet..

Geet looked at him and said-Same to you..

Maan-Do you think you can win..what if you lose?..bachhon ke saamne kya izzat rah jaayegi tumhaari ? See .. How confident they are looking for you.

Geet smiled-Think about yourself Maan...what if you lose..you are here for the first time..so you should take care of your reputation.. main agar haar bhi gayi to kya farak padega?

Maan- First you have to defeat me..uske baad sochna ye baat..

Geet-Ok. Then... Wait and watch . Maan showed her his thumb. They were ready now

Kids counted three and Maan and geet jumped in to the stream and the competition began.. kids were shouting-Geet di..Geet di..

Anie was alone there who was shouting-Bhaiya..Bhaiya.. to support Maan.and Rahul pulled her towards himself with her waist and her voice stuck in her throat. Kids were looking in to the stream only as their pride was at stake. Anie looked at Rahul with some horror but he was looking in to the water.

Rahul-kya hua ? chup kyun ho gayi?..continue your cheering yup for your bro..

Anie -rahul you are taking the advantage of me now days..It's very dangerous being alone with you..

Rahul-then do the practice for it..you are going to live with me permanently after one and half month..aur main kya kya karunga tum soch bhi nahin sakti..

Anie's eyes widened at this..She got shied and said-Rahul leave me please ..

Rahul-achchha ..don't you like it?..He looked at her with her raised eye pulled her little more towards him.if you don't like it them you move away..I will not leave you and he looked at her with naughty eyes..Anie looked at him and with a smile, she stood unmoved in his arms.

Maan and Geet had covered one lap.both were side by side .second lap started and Geet and Maan were still at same speed.. third lap was going to be finished..they both touched the shore at the same time that meant .. they both were together till now. Fourth lap started and after few minutes Maan touched the shore after finishing the lap but Geet was not there.. Maan searched here and there and found Geet coming behind him..and Kids were like-Oh No.. all faces hung down seeing Geet losing. Geet finished the lap... maan looked at her but she did not look at him..Maan came out of the water and he again gave his hand to Geet to come out of water.

Kids came near them..

Geet looked at their hung faces and said-Sorry.. wo kya hai na..do saal ke baad swimming kin a yahaan to shayad main thak gayi and lost... but don't worry.. next time I will win..

Kids were upset and Rahul consoled them by saying-arrey muh kyun latka liya?Koi zaroori to nahin ki Virat Kohli har baar century hi banaaye..kabhi kabhi zero par bhi to out ho jata hai na..aur agar di nahin jiti to kya hua jiju jeet gaye .kya faralk padta hai..you can be happy for him na. He is here for the first time so you should congratulate him..go .. and kids understood that and congratulated him. Geet was smiling to see them congratulating him..

Precap-Rahul hits in Geet's mind and confused Geet asks Maan about Love😉


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Bechari Geet ko kamzor bana diya ...Anyways khud Maan Geet ka hai tho koi bhi jeete kya farak padtha hai...
Maan getting J coz of Kiss ...chance pe dance
Aniee...Rahul getting close...
Abhi Abhi tho holi huvi... 2 months baad diwali aayega kya
update sooner
Edited by SunRahaHainaTu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update 👏

finally they reached the village😊
baccho ko lagtha hai ki geet badal gayi hai so they didn't go to her
geet giving chocolates to them aur maan J when they kissed geet😆
arre maan babu baccho se jalne lage but wah kya bath hai chance pe kiss dediya geet ko😉
maan trying to bring the old geet back so he changelled for swimming competition👍🏼
geet lost seeing maan's upper bare body😳😉 ek din mai itne sare shocks pehle kiss aur ab ye bechari geet 😆😛
maan geet ko unintentionally pull kiya ya intentionally 😈
geet janbuch kar har gayi taki koi maan ko kuch na kahe👍🏼
interesting precap 😃
rahul kya kehne wala hai geet se and geet asking maan about love
me waiting eagerly
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago

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