Akdha FF: Trust (on current track)Last Part pg4 3/6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi All,
Most of you might not know me 😳, but I am mostly a silent reader... and many times, I get a FF idea about the track, but never get around to writing it down. but today, I finally managed to start something.
😳 based on the current pregnancy track. I am kind of ignoring the entire chand begum issue for now. not sure if i will implement it again. but for this FF MA and Ruk has joined hands

This is my first Adkha FF, so please let me know if you would like me to continue

Part 1

Ruks was sitting on the bed and dasis were massaging her legs.

"Gustakhi ke liye mafi chahtein hain mallika, Wazir-e-aliya apse mukatif hone chahti hai"

"bejdo unhe"

Maham Anga entered with the hakim

"takhliya"

Everyone left leaving MA and Hakim alone with Ruks

"yeh hum kya sun rahe hai Begum Ruqqaiya, apne apni dawai khane se mana kar diya? Agar aap dawai nahi kayengi toh aap janti hai na kya ho sakta hai?"

"kuch nahi hoga hume, humne Jalal se keh diya hai ke hum maa ban ne wale hai, iss sultanat ke waris ko janm dene wale hai. Abb hume iss dawa ki koi zarurat nahi hai."

"lekin Begum-e-khas yeh dawa aapki sahaita karegi"

"nahi, hum bohot jald apne iss natak ka ant karne wale hai, aur sara illzam ayega Jodha Begum par. Kisiko kano kan khabar bhi nahi hogi ki, humare pet mein kabhi koi baccha tha hi nahi. Aur Jalal, uss do kodi ki hindu begum ko mehel se nikal denge. Toh isi liye hume iss dawa ki koi zarurat nahi. Aur yaad rahe, jub hum dard mein hone ka bahana karke tumhe bulaye, toh hum tumse kahenge ki Jodha begum ne hume kiya khilaya hai, aur tumhe hume aur uss khane ki chiz ko dekh kar kehna hai ki isi ki vajah se humara baccha gir gaya hai, samji"

"ji Begum sahiba"

"Takliya"

The hakim left

"parantu itni shighra (jaldi) kya hai iss natak par pe parda girane ki begum e khas? Hum ise kuch din aur chala sakte hai"

"nahi Maham Anga, yeh natak humne, Jodha begum ko Jalal se dur karne ke liye shuru kiya tha, aur ab hum unhe humare Jalal ke pass aur nahi dekh sakte. Hum chahte hai ki Jalal jald se jald Jodha begum ko ya toh Aamer bhej de ya unhe mrityu dand de. Par apne humara is natak mein bohot saath diya hai Maham, iske liye hum aapke shukar gurzar hai"

"isme shukriya ki kya baat hai Begum Ruqqaiya, Jodha begum ki vajah se humne apne saare adhikar, apna rutba, aur apne bte Jalal ko khoya hai, toh unko Jalal ki zindagi se aur is mehel se dur karne ke liye hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai"

"lekin abb hume bohot hoshiyari se agla kadam uthana hoga. Hume sabko aisa dikhana hai ki jodha begum doshi hai. Aur iske liye hume aapki madad ki zarurat hai Maham."

"beshak, hum kal hi yeh kaam shuru kar denge."

They both share a laugh

"aab hume izazat di jiye, kal toh jashan ka din hai, toh uske pehle thoda araam farmaya jaye, shabba kher"

"shabba Kher Maham"

And Maham left, whilst Ruku called the dasis and went to bed.

However, both of them were unaware that someone had heard the entire conversation.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay me 1st...yipeee😆
it was nice..😳
i liked it...
u should continue...👍🏼
if u do cont. tn pm me plz..if u cn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was cool as well as nice... A very good start dear...
Keep it up and please update soon...
They just kid update wen u want to...😆😉⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is part 2

Chapter 2

Jalal was pacing in his room, unable to believe what just happened a few moments ago,

Flashback

He had not been able to meet Jodha whole day today as she was extremely busy with Ruku. He was very happy that Jodha was being there for Ruku just for him. He couldn't believe how pure and selfless she was. He wished it was her who became Mariam-uz-Zamani just like Salim Chisti baba has forcasted but non the less he was happy about Ruku's pregenancy.

He was really looking forward to being with Jodha and taking her in his arms; but before that he wanted to make sure that this time someone doesn't disturb them and hence he wanted to check if Ruku was asleep. 😆

And so he went towards her room, however as he rounded the corner he saw Maham Anga entering ruku's room with Hakim. Earlier he would have been happy that his Badi Ammi was so caring, but now he didn't trust her so he quickened his pace and went to Ruku's room. He signalled the guards not to announce his arrival.

He couldn't believe what he heard next and when the Hakim came out, and saw him. He ordered the guards to hold her as prisoner and take her away.

But when Maham came out he hid in shadows. After he was sure that she had left he signalled the guards not to tell anyone about him being there and left.

Flashback ends

He was devastated. Everything that happened since he came to know about this pregnancy came infront of his eyes. And he realised that Ruku did all this to not only separate him from his love - jodha ; but she also insulted HIS Jodha on numerous occasions.

At this thought, anger took over the hurt feeling and he asked the guards to ask all the ladies of Harem to gather in the diwan of harem in half an hour. He also called for Agtah Khan and Maan singh

And told them about it and questioned the hakim. After that he asked Atgah and Maan to accompany him and asked the guards to bring Hakim when he claps.

With that he entered the Diwan to see that everyone was there. Everyone had a question on their faces but ruku also had an arrogance. He oculd see that Jodha was very tired and seemed worried after looking at him, with maan and atgah. So he gave her a reassuring look and small smile and took his seat.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it...amazing...please update sooon...I can't wait to see what jalal does and what his punishment for them would be...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's a great start. i liked that he heard all. update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simply amazing! Cant wait to see what Jalal will do...
Plz update soon...and longer chaps please!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its great year..
Are apki speed toh bahut achi hai... Itni jaldi 2 and update bhi
Very fast sir ji...
😃⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update, i want jo to give a tight slap in ruqs face😆

continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update.. continue soon & do pm

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