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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really great👍🏼... plsss continue😊... nd a looongg one pls😉😳
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#12
Not to be selfish or greedy but where is the rest and could u please hurry up n write, i am on my hands and knee begging.

This is a wonderful start i am looking forward to where u will tske this. Fantastic start.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing ff
plz pm me 😃
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OMG such a lovely response 😲 I never expected this. But thanks a lot everyone 🤗

Originally posted by: hely

yay me 1st...yipeee😆
it was nice..😳
i liked it...
u should continue...👍🏼
if u do cont. tn pm me plz..if u cn...


Will continue soon. 😳 thanks a lot

[Quote=princess_saumya]
It was cool as well as nice... A very good start dear...
Keep it up and please update soon...
They just kid update wen u want to...😆😉⭐️[/quote]

thanks a lot i will try to update more frequently😳

[quote=SUMESHNI]

Awesome plz continue soon [/quote]

thanks a lot

[quote=rima4ever] wonderful start
please continue [/quote]

thanks

[quote= udaymanyata07]
loved it...amazing...please update sooon...I can't wait to see what jalal does and what his punishment for them would be...[/quote]

hmmm you will find what our tedha Jalal does in next epi😉

[quote=ashpat]it's a great start. i liked that he heard all. update soon
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ya wish that would happen in serial as he will not trust anyone else.

[quote=PrincessNancy]

Simply amazing! Cant wait to see what Jalal will do...
Plz update soon...and longer chaps please!! [/quote]

Lol ok i have a super long chapter below. hope it will be good enough.

[quote=princess_saumya]

Its great year..
Are apki speed toh bahut achi hai... Itni jaldi 2 and update bhi
Very fast sir ji...
😃⭐️[/quote]

😆 well I had written the first two parts anyway and was thinking if i get atleast one response i will continue. 😉 but i am a female 😉😛😆

[quote=niveasree]
Awesome update, i want jo to give a tight slap in ruqs face😆

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loool even I want that 😡😉😛

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amazing update.. continue soon & do pm [/quote]

thanks. the update is come soon below. but unfortunately i will not have time to pm. i will update the title of the topic though😉 with the date so you can see if there was an update

hope that's ok


@daisydee425 : thanks a lot

@dodoneha : hope my next part satisfies you in its length😉 and thanks a lot

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Not to be selfish or greedy but where is the rest and could u please hurry up n write, i am on my hands and knee begging.

This is a wonderful start i am looking forward to where u will tske this. Fantastic start. [/quote]

😆😉 😲 begging ??!!! aree an update is coming up just for you 😛😉 thanks a lot

@SARA4444: thanks a lot 😊


@hely: thanks a lot 😊



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Hi all,
thank you so much for such a lovely reception.🤗

here is the next chapter which is little more than 2,700 words 😳 i hope this satisfies everyone. please enjoy this. I might not be able to update till weekend now so i have tried not to have any cliff hangers. 😉😛

Also please excuse my spelling mistakes.. i have not had time to proof read it 😳

Chapter 3

"App sab log yeh soch rahe honge ki humne aap saab ko iss waqt yahan kyun bulaya. Magar is sawal ka jawab dene se pehle hum aap mein se kuch logon se kuch sawal karna chahenge. Aur hum umeed karte hai ki aap saab humse saach hi kanhenge. Hum aapko batana chahte hai ki iss waqt hum keval ek shehenshah hai. Atgah sahib hume bataiye ki ek shehenshah se jooth bolne ki kya saza hoti hai Mugal Saltanat mein"

"huzoor, Shehenshah se jooth bolna, Mugal saltanat se gaddari karne ke barabar hai aur isi liye, muzrim ko saqt se seqt saza di jaati hai. Jaisae ki ta umar kal kothari mein daldena ya phir sazae maut di jaati hai."

"bilkul, aur agar aaj humare samne kisi ne yeh gunah kiya to unhe bhi aisi hi saza mukadar ki jayegi, phir chahe who koi bhi kyun na ho.".

After brief spell of silence

"Mariam Makhani, aap iss harem mein sabse badi hai toh, pehle yeh sawal hum aapse puchna chahenge. Farz kare ki ek insaan ni koi galti ki hai, aur use uski uss galti ke liye, humne yani ki Shehenshah ne ek dwafa nahi balki do dafa sirf chetawani de ke chod diya gaya ho. Lekin usne phir se wohi galti dohrai ho, toh iska kya matlab hua?"

"shehenshah iska matlab yehi hua ki, us insaan ko apni galti ka koi pachtava nahi, aur nahi usne apki chetawni pe guar nahi farmya. Aur tisri baar wohi galti dauhrakar, usne saabit kiya hai ki unki teeno galtiyan saaza ke haqdar hai."

"shukriya, Mariam Makhani, apne humare dusre sawal ka jawab bhi bina puche de diya. Salima begum, aapka kya nazariya hai?"

"Shehnshah, hum Mariam Makahni ki baat se itafaaq rakhte hai, teesri baar wohi galti dauhrane se, ek tarah se uss insaan ne shehenshah ko lalkara hai. Aur isi ke liye, use apni teeno galtiyon ke liye saaza milni chahiye, ne ki sirf teesri galti ke liye."

"shukriya Salima begum. Ruqquaih begum, jaise ki Mariam Makahni aur Salima Begum ne kaha ki aise apradhi ko na sirf apni teesri galti ke liye balki apni teeno galtion ke liye saaza milni chahiye. Aapki kya rai hai? "

"Shehenshah, hum bhi Mariam Makhani aur Salima Begum se itafaaq rakhte hai, aise insaan ko apni teeno galtion ke liye saqt se saqt saza milni chahiye."

"aur apke hisaab se who kya honi chahiye?"

"shehenshah, humare hisaab se unhe har ek galti ke liye alag saza milni chahiye. Jiski sakhti badhti rahe. Jaise ki, agar usne chori ki ho, toh pehli baar ke liye, use chori ki hui cheez lautne ke saath saath, harzana bhi bharna hoga. Dusri baar ke liye, use haarzane ke saath, 50 kode mare jane chahiye; aur teesri baar ke liye uske haath katne chahiye. Uske saath saath, shehenshah ki tohin karne ke liye uska sar Kalam karna chahte hai"

"toh aap yeh kehna chahti hai ki teeno galtiyon ki alag saaza honi chahiye aur uske saath humari tohin karne ki saaza bhi honi chahiye?"

"Jee shehenshah."

"shukriya, aap beth sakti hai"

Everyone was looking at Ruku with shocked expressions for her harsh punishment, and she sat down with an arrogant face.

"Jodha Begum, aapki kya rai hai?"

"Shehenshah, hum Mariam Makahni aur Salima begum se sehmat hai. Aise insaan ne nisandeh apki chetavni ko na man kar, yeh jataya hai ki use apni galti ka koi pachtava nahi hai. Aur yeh bhi keh sakte hai ki who apni galti phir se avashya dohrayega. Isi liye, who kade dand ka adhikari bhi hai. Hum Ruqqaiah begum ki yeh baat avashya mante hai ki, unhe hare k apradh ke liye, alag dand milna chahiye. Parantu, usko marna, uchit nahi hoga. Parantu humara manna hai ki aise insaan ko diwan mein sabke samne, apni saari galtiyan, apne muh se manzoor karani chahiye. Isse sabhi ko yeh vishwaas hoga ki uss insaan ne apni saari galtiyan aur aapki chetavni ache se samji hai"

"shukriya"

"Wazeer-e-aliya, aap aaj bhi Wazeer hai, toh aapka kya nazariya hai"

This question shocked everyone, as no one expected him to ask Maham anga. But Maham was pleased

"Shehenshah, hum iss baat mein Ruqqaiah begum se itafaaq rakhte hai. Aur kehte hai ki aise insaan ko kadi se kadi saza deni chahiye. Balki hum to kahenge, ki hume use dusri baar hi unhe saaza deni chahiye thi."

"Toh aapke hisaab se, dusri galti pe hi saaza deni chahiye?"

"ji shehenshah"

"Aur agar, galti ki saza dene ke bawajud us insaan ne who galti dauhrai tab kya kiya jana chahiye?"

"tab uske liye sirf do hi raste hai. Ya toh use, iss saltant se dur Mecca Sharrif ki yatra par bheja jaye, taki maula ki rah par unke paap kuch kam ho. Ya phir unhe Saza-e-maut muqqadar ki jani chahiye"

He nodded and contemplated for few moments

"Ruqqaiah begum, kya aap humare saamne aa sakti hai."

This was a weird request as usually the accused or the person giving witness was called. But Ruku still came with a proud look. Once she was there, Jalal stood up and came infront of Ruku. Whilst signalling for others to keep seated

"Ruqquia begum, apko yakinan yaad hoga woh waqt jab, harem ki saari begumon ke kehne par, Jodha begum harem ki zimedari sambhalne ke liye tayar hui thi. Yaad hai na apko?"

"Ji Shehenshah. Hume yaad hai"

"hmm tab toh apko yeh bhi yaad hoga, ki kisine harem ki Hindu baandiyon ke hojre mein Kanha ki murti rakhvai thi, taki Jodha begum ka naa badnam ho?"

Ruku was scared now but she had no other choice than to answer

"Jee Shehenshah, hume yaad hai"

"uss waqt jab humne issi diwaan mein, ek bethak bulai thi, uske khatam hone ke baad humne apse ekant mein mukhatib hone ki darkhwast ki thi. Haina?"

"jee"

At this point Jalal started walking around her like a tiger walking around her prey.

"kya aapko yaad hai ki humari kya baat hui thi us waqt?"

"Jee Shehenshah, achi tarah se"

Jalal stopped in front of her

"hume yaad dilwaye, ki humne kya kaha tha?"

"Ji?"

Ruku looked at Jalal with wide terrified eyes.

"hume bataiye ki uss din humne aapse kya kaha tha?"

At this ruku narrated the entire thing, word by word at how Jalal knew that it was her who did that and had warned her to not repeat something like this, or else she will loose the little respect he had for her.

By now everyone was shocked at this, and knowing that it was Ruku and Jalal knew this. They also had a sense of forebidding. Even Ruku seemed to have noticed this as she had tears in her eyes.

After a few moments, giving everyone time to come to terms with these facts, Jalal continued.

"Ruku begum, kya aapko who waqt yaad hai jab hum, Aamer se Jodha Begum ke begair laute the? Aur humne Wazeer-e-aliya ko saza di thi?"

"Jee Shehnshah" Ruku replied in a trembling voice that no one had every heard from her.

"Uss waqt apne humse kuch kaha tha. Yaad hai apko?"

"Jee"

"Kya kaha tha apne humse"

"Humne aa.. apse mafi mangi thi"

"Maafi mangi thi. Kis baat ke liye maafi mangi thi aapne?"

"Sujamal ke iss mehel mein aakhri din pe, hume Maham Anga ne bataya tha ki woh Dilawar Khan nahi the, ek Rajwanshi the. Aur humne yeh jante hue, unhe Jodha Begum ke hojre mein bheja"

There was a stunned silence at this confession of Ruku. Some members had stood up from their seats.

"Ruqqaiya begum, hume yakin hai ki aapko humare aur Jodha begum ke nikah ki salgirah ka din bhi bohot achi tarah se yaad hoga?"

"Jee shehenshah."

"toh hume bataiye, ki us din sham mein aap kahan thi"

"humari tabiyat kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi, isi liye hum apne hojre mein hi the."

"apne hojre mein. Kya aapse koi milne aya tha?"

"Jee"

"kaun aur kyun"

"Salima Begum ayi thi, woh hume jashan ke liye le jane ayi thi"

"toh apne kya kaha"

"hum... humne unhe kaha ki humari tabiyat kuch theek nahi lag rahi aur isi liye hum Jashan mein nahi ayenge"

"uske baad kya hua"

"uske baad jab sab jashan mein the tab hum.. hume bohot bura lag raha tha, toh humne Hakim saahiba ko bulaya ki woh hume bata sake ki hume kya hua hai. Tab unhone hume bataya ki hum ammijaan ban ne wale hai. Aur ..."

But before she could complete her sentence, Jalal clapped his hands, and the guards got the Hakim with them.

"Kya yehi hai woh hakim saahiba"

"jee haan" by now Ruku was terrified and wondering why the hakim was under custody

Jalal in the mean time walks to the hakim

"Hakim saahiba, Ruqqaiah begum ne hume bataya ki jis waqt humare aur Jodha begum ke nikaah ki saalgirah par jashan ayojit kiya gaya tha, uss waqt, Ruqqaiah begum ki tabiyat theek nahi thi. Aur apne unhe jancha tha. Toh kya aap yeh bata sakti hai ki kya hua tha Ruqqiah begum ko?"

Hakim nervously looks at the Ruku and Maham.

"Kisi se khauf khane ki zarurat nahi hai, sach bataya jaye."

"Shehenshah yeh saach hai ki Ruqquaih begum ne hume bulya that. Lekin jab hum unke hojre me gaye, toh who durust thi. Humare puchne par unhone hume hokum diya ki, hum aapke pass aaye aur apke yeh batayien ki Ruqqiah begum pet se hai. Hum bohot khush hue yeh sun kar, aur humne Ruqqiah begum se kaha, ki yeh toh khushi ki baat hai, aur agar woh hume, unhe jhanchne ki izzazt de toh hum unki sehat ke bare mein vistar se aapko bata payenge. Lekin..."

"lekin kya?"

"Lekin shehenshah, begum sahiba ne humse kaha ki woh pet se nahi hai, par hume phir bhi yeh jooth aapse kehna hai. Aur yadi humne aisa nahi kiya toh woh humare chote se bache ka saar Kalam karva dengi."

At this she fell on Jalal's feet

"hume maaf kar dijye, humne Ruqqaih begum ki baat keval apne bte ki zindagi bachane ke liye mani shehenshah. Humne unho woh aushadhi bhi di jinse unke sharir mein pet se hone ke sare aasar nazar aye. Taki koi un par shaq na kare"

"utho, aur hume yeh batao ki aaj sham ko kya hua"

"aaj sham ko bhi hum wohi ark le kar Begum sahiba ke hojre ki taraf ja rahe the, tabhi hume Wazair-e-aliya mili. Aur woh bhi humare saath ayi."

After that she tells what happened and how MA knew about the drama.

"uske baad jab hum bahar aye, toh humne aapko wahan dekha, aur aapne hume quaid karne ka hokum diya"

"hume khshma kar dijye, shehnshah. Rehem kare"

"aapne humse jooth bol kar gunah kiya hai. Lekin iske piche ek wajah thi. Isi liye hum aapko akhri baar maaf karte hai. Lekin yaad rahe, agli baar koi bhi aapko aisi dhamki de toh aap bejeejak aake hume bataaiye."

"jee Shehnshah, shukriya"

"aab aap ja sakti hai"

And hakim leaves the place

"toh Ruqquiad begum, kya aap hum sab ko yeh batana chahengi, ki Hakim saahiba ke jaane ke baad apke aur Waazir-e-alia ke beech kya baat hui? Ya phir hum bataye?

"hum batate hai..."

And she tells them of her plan.

Before Jalal could say anything else, Hamida comes and slaps Ruku hard.

"itna bada jooth? Itni badi saazish? Hume yakin nahi hota ki aap wohi Ruqqiah hai. Nahi aap woh Ruqqiah nahi hai jinhe hum jante the. Woh Ruqqiah kabhi aisi harqat nahi kar sakti. Aapne, Jodha ko badnam karne ke liye, hum saab ke jazbaat se itna bada khel khela? Kaise kiya aapne yeh? Jodha begum, ne aapki dekhbhal ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya aur aap"

"baas, Jodha begum Jodha begum ... aur kuch bhi nahi aata kisi ke muh pe. Iss harem ke begum-e-khas hum hai. Lekin jab dekho tab saab logon ke much par sirf Jodha begum ka naam hota hai. Agar Jodha begum kuch kare toh saahi, aur hum kare toh galat? Jodha begum ne shehenshah ki itni tohin ki. Unhe kitne dino tak jagah jagah bhatkaya, aur unke maafi mangne par unhe maafi nahi di? Aur itna saab hone ke baad woh muh uthaye yahan chali ayi, jaise ki kuch hua hi na ho? Itni besharam aurat toh humne aaj tak nahi dekhi. Aur aap saab ko phir bhi woh itni pyaari hai. Lekin hum jante hai ki bholi si shakal ke piche kya hai. Aur isi liye humne yeh chal chali. Aur aage bhi chalenge. Aur aap ammijaan? Aap ko toh yeh pasand ayengi hi, yeh ek Hindu jo hai. Aapko toh hinduon se bohot lagav hain na? Iss namurad, do kaudi ki, naapak hindu begum ke liye aaj aap hume, Begum-e-khas ko maar rahi hai? Aaj apne saabit kar diya ki aap toh Mariam Makhani kehlane ke layak hi nah..."

Before she could complete there was a loud sound of a slap and ruku found herself on the floor with blood oozing out of her lips.

"badzaat, aihsan faramosh, tumhari yeh jurrat? Tumne na sirf Jodha begum ke khilaf saazish ki, humse jooth bola, aura ab humari ammijaan se unchi awaz mein baat karne ki gustakhi ki? Aaj apne humare zehen se apni liye saari izzat nikal di hai."

Saying so he escorted Hamida to her seat and sat on the throne

"toh jaisa ki aapne khud kaha ki, teesri baar galti karne par teeno galtion ki saaza ek saath di jaati ha. Toh aapki pehli galti yeh thi ki aapne Mugal niyamo ko tod kar Kanha ki murti baandiyon ke hojre mein pohchai. Iss ke liye hum aapse aapke harem baandiyan chin te hai."

"aapki dusri galti yeh thi ki aapne, yeh jante hue bhi ki Dilawar khan ke bhes mein koi rajwanshi hai. Apne use shehenshah ki begum ke hojre mein bheja. Aur aapne humse yeh baat chupai. Yeh baat yeh saabit karti hai ki aap harem ki zimmedari nibhane ka hunar nahi rakhti. Isi liye hum aapse aapka yeh audha bhi cheente hai."

"nahi Jalal hume maaf kar dijye"

"aapne, humari Ammijaan, Mariam Makhani se badaluki ki, humari begum ke bare mein behuda shabd kahe iske liye aap Begum-e-khas kehlane ke layak nahi hai. Aur hum yeh audha aapse chin te hai. Aapne humari chtavni ko naazar andaz kiya. Aur ek tarah se shehenshah ko chunauti di. Iske liye hum aapko talaaq dete hai"

At this he clapped the hands and called the Maulvis and proceeded with the taalaq (please forgive me I do not know how taalaq is done, as I am not a Muslim. But for this FF, please assume in front of Maulvis he said talaaq three times and was granted)

"aura ab apka akhri gunnah. Aapne ek Shehenshah aur uski puri saltant ko yeh jataya ki aap uss saltanant ke waaris ko janam dene wali hai. Yeh mugal saltanant ke saath gaddari hai. Aur iske liye, humare pass aab apke liye keval ek hi saaza hai, Saza-e-maut. Isi liye hum yeh elan karte hai ki kal subah, suraj ki pehli kiran ke saath, aapka saar Kalam kar diya jayega."

"nahi Jalal, hume maaf kar dijye, rehem kijye hum par"

"sainko, le jao isse, aur aaj raat kaal kothri mein band kardo"

Ruku kept screaming and pleading but was dragged away.

"Waazir-e-alia, humare saamne aiye."

She stood infront of him.

"shayad aapko humari baat samaj mein nahi ayi thi, isi liye aapne ek baar phir, hume dhoka diya, aur Jodha begum ke khilaf saazish ki. Iske liye hum aapse aapka Waazir-e-alia hone ka haq chinte hai. Aaj se aap na toh Waazir-e-alia hai, aur nahi iss mehel mein rehne ki haqdar. Lekin aapne apni puri zindagi iss salanat ko di hai, toh hum aapko mugal saltant mein hi, Mathura mein ek ghar denge, aur aapko har mahine kuch sikke bhi diye jayenge. Hum aapko kal sham tak ka waqt dete hai, ki aap apne saman ke saath, yeh mehel khali kare"

"jee shehenshah"

"aab aap tashrif le ja sakti hai"

After doing salam, MA left without much drama as she knew there was no point in fighting.

"kal Ruqquaih sultan ke saar Kalam par hum nahi chahte ki koi bhi maujud ho. Aur unka hojra khali kar ke saaf kiya jaye, unki saari chezein phek di jaye aur unki bandiyon ka kya karna hai, yeh Harem ki nayi authedar dekehngi. Who kaun hongi iska faisla hum phir kabhi lenge, lekin is dauran, ammijaan kya aap yeh zimeedari nibhayengi?"

"beeshak Jalal"

"theek hai, shukriya."

"taqliya"

Edited by pari0706 - 11 years ago
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Wow...
Superb start...
Loved it...
Omg...
Jalal heard everything...
Ab kya hoga?
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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OMG WOW WHAT AN UPDATE, WHOO.
BEAUTIFUL, ABSOLUTELY BEAUYIFUL.
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It was auspme yaar...
What a great punishment yaaar...
Very nice chapter..😃⭐️

Another very great update...
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superb but death punishment ?kuch jyada nahi ho gaya?plz mat maro use yaar.
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Chapter 4 last part

After the dismissal of the the diwan, Jalal asked the guards to escort Atgah and Maan out of the harem.

He was left there with Jodha, Salima and Hamida.

All three of them approached Jalal but before they could say anything, Rahim barged in crying.

"Ammijaan aap kahan thi, hume akele kamre mein dar lag raha hai."

"Salima Begum, aap jaiye aur Rahim ke saath rahiye. "

"jee shehenshah, aadam"

"shaba kher"

With this Salima left, feeling assured that Jodha and Hamida are there with Jalal.

"Jalal aap theek toh hai na?"

Hamida asked with a worried voice whilst caressing his hair softly.

Jalal looked at her with moist eyes,

"humari kya galti hai ammijaan? Kyun saab log humari peeth par vaar karte hai? Pehle badi ammi ne jo kiya tha kya woh kaam tha? Jo aab woh ruk begum ke saath milkar itni badi yojna bana rahi thi? Aur Ruku, humne unhe kya nahi diya, unhone jo chaha woh diya, Allah kasam, unki har farmaish ko sar ankho pe rakha. Phir unhone hume humare pyaar se alag karne ke bare mein kaise socha? Aur toh aur, humse humare bache ke bare mein jooth bola? Kya unhone ek baar bhi yeh nahi socha ki, aise sapne dikhane ke baad, jub hume yeh kaha jayega ki ek bar phir humara bacha iss.. iss duniya mein ane se pehle hi apni akhri saans le chukka hai. Toh humpar kya betegi?"

As the ladies heard that both of them had tears in their eyes, Jodha kept her hand on his shoulder. She was about to take her hand back, when Hamida hugged him, but he held her hand in place.

After sometime, Hamida asked Jalal to get some rest, and signalled Jodha to take him. Jalal went with Jodha but had still not left her hand.

In Jodha's room, Jalal put his head on her lap and hugged her.

"Jodha Begum, aap toh hamesha humari ankho ke saamne saach lati hai na? toh hume bataiye, bataiye ki humari aisi kaunsi galti this ki Ruqquaih begum aur Maham Anga, ne hume itna dard pohchaya"

"Shehenshah, pehli baat toh yeh ki aapki iss me koi galti nahi hai. Iss liye apne maan se yeh glani (guilt) ka bhav hata dijye. Aapne, toh keval unpar vishwaas kiya tha, unhe apna mana tha. Parantu ek baat toh shayad aap bhi jante hai, ki just audhe par aap hai, uski Shakti ke lobh mein koi kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Saata ka, taaj ka nasha hi aisa hota hai ki apno ko bhi dushman bana de. Aab humare, Sujamal bhaisa aur bapusa ko hi dekh lijye. Sujamal bhaisa ke bapusa, Aamer ke raja the, parantu ek yudh mein mare gaye. Shayad apne uss yudh ke bare mein bhi suna honge. Mandrail ka woh yudh jisme, Sujamal bhaisa ke bapusa Raja Puran Mal, uss waqt ke Mugal Shehenshah Humayun ka saath de rahe the. Bayana ka qila wapis hasil karne ke liye."

"Kya, woh Sujamal ke bapusa the?" Jalal exclaimed while getting up

"Jee, lekin Sujamal bhaisa tab bohot chote the, aur isi liye woh apne bapusa ke baad raja nahi ban sake. Aur humare bapusa ne rajya ke kar bhar sambhala. Lekin jab uchit samay aya, tab Bapusa ne Bhagwan Das bhaisa ko apna uttaradhikari banaya. Who yeh bhul hi gaye, ki Aamer ke jis singhasan par woh baithe hai, uska sahi haqdar humare Sujamal bhaisa the."

"toh sujamal ne kuch kaha kyun nahi"

"kaha na, unhone iss baat ka virodh kiya, parantu Bapusa ek raja hai aur Sujamal bhaisa ko apne pran bacha ke bhagna pada. Uske baad unhone apke subedar Sharrifudin sahib ke saath haath milaya, taqi woh unki madad se Aamer pa sake. Aur bapusa ne bagair humse puche, humari shaadi Raja Suryabhan se tai kardi. Taqi unki taqat badhe, jab ki Sukanya Raja Suryabhan ko pasand karti thi. Aur uske baad kya hua, yeh toh aap bhi jante hai Shenshah. Aaj isi saata ke nashe ne humare Sujamal bhaisa ko dar dar ki thokre khane par vivaash kar diya hai"

She finished with tears in her eyes

"aap Sujmal ke kafi kareeb thi?"

"Jee, jab hum chote the na, toh humari sirf ek behen thi, sukanya. Aur humari unse bilkul nahi banti thi. Toh hum humesha apne bhaiyon ke pass jate the, ki hum unke saath khel sake. Bhagwaan das bhaisa toh hum saab se bade the, aur bapusa ke saath rehte the. Aur baaki saab, humara uphas karte the, humse kehte the ki ve yudh kala ka abhyaas kar rahe hai aur ladkiyon ko waha nahi aana chahiye. hume udas hokar chale jaate aur mehel ke kisi kone me chip kar rote rehte. Tab Sujamal bhaisa hi the jo hume dhundh pate. Ek din unhone humse pucha, ki kya hum yudh kala ki shiksha pana chahenge? Aur humare swikar karne par unhone hume woh sab kuch seekhaya jo unhe sikhaya jaata."

Jalal looked at her lost in her past whilst Jodha continued with her tale

"Aur ek din, unhone, humare aur humare anya bhaiyon ke beech ek spardha ka ayojan karvaya, jahan hum unhe bata paye ki hum ek ladki ho ne ke baad bhi, yudh kala mein nipun ho sakte hai. Uske baad humare saare bhai humare saath samay bitana chahte the, humse dosti karna chahte the. Yeh saab hone ke baad bhi hum, sabse zyada samay Sujamal Bhaisa ke saath hi vyatit karte. Woh humare saath khelte, aur humari halki se kharoch par bokhla jaate, aur pura mehel sar pe utha lete. Aur agar hume kisi ke bhi karan hume chot lagi ho, tab toh unki shamat aajati. Humare dwara ek baar bulane par woh, saab kuch chod kar, yahan tak ki apne aap ki chinta bhi na kar ke humare pass aa jate. Aur aaj hum..."

"Aur aapko yeh baat khaye ja rahi hai ki jiss bhai ne aapke liye itna kiya, aaj aap ke wajah se woh ek baagi ke taur par bhatak rahe hai. Haina?

"Jee, hume unke dukh ka karan bane. Unke liye kuch bhi nahi kar paye hum"

"Jodha begum, hum aapko vachan dete hai ki, hum apke bapusa se baat kar ke Sujamal ko unka hissa dilwane ki koshish karenge. Aur aisa nab hi hua tab bhi, jis Raja Puran Mal ne humare Abba huzoor ki madat ki, unke bte ke liye Mugal saltant mein humesha jagah hogi. Hum khud unhe yeh paigam bhejenge. Lekin kal, aur hum chahenge ki yeh pegam aap humare liye likhe. Lekhengi na?"

"aap ... aap aisa karenge Shehenshah?"

"beshak Jodha begum lekin apne humare prashna ka jawab nahi diya Jodha Begum" Jalal smiled and wiped her tears.

"hum avashya likhenge. Lekin humari iccha hai ki job hi hum likhe uske shabd apke ho. Issi liye aap hum batayega, aur hum use patr mein utarenge. Theek hai?"

"theek hai Jodha. Acha aab jab ki sab sach samne aa chukka hai. To ab kya aap syasati mamlo mein humari madad karna chahengi?"

"avashya Shehenshah, agar aap ko lagta hai ki hum iss zimmedari ko nibha payenge, toh hum tayar hai"

"hume pura yakeen hai Jodha, ki aap isse bakhubi nibhayengi. Aur phir hum humesha aapke saath rahenge."

They smile at each other

"toh phir kal diwaan-e-khaas mein hum apko, Mallika-e-Hindustan ka khitab denge."

"iska kya arth hua Shehenshah?"

"iska matlab yeh ki, kal se aap humare saath Mugal Saltant par raaj karengi, hum aapko ek mohor bhi denge jo keval aapki hogi. Aur jis se aap shahi farman jari kar payengi. Yeh haq keval ek Shehenshah aur uski Mallika ka hota hai. Iss se aap koi bhi farman jari kar sakti hai. Par hum shukar guzar honge agar aap hume quaid karne ka hokum na de"

"kya aap..par hum aapko quaid..."

With that Jalal starts laughing and Jodha makes a baby complaining face. But starts laughing with him after a while. And after a while, jalal lies down on her lap again, and gives her time to think things through.

"Dhanyawad"

"Shukriya kis liye?"

"ki aap hume is ke kabil samjte hai, aur itna bharosa karte hai. Hum aapko vachan dete hai Shehenshah, ki hum kabhi bhi aisa kuch bhi nahi karenge, jis se aapke hriday ko pida pahunche. Nahi kabhi aapse jooth bolenge."

Jalal smiles, gets up from her lap, and kisses her forehead.

"aapne hume, yeh samjaya hai ki awam ke dil ko kaise jita jata hai. Aapne humare aur humari awaam ke beech ka fasla kam kiya hai. Aapse zyada kabil iss audhe ka haqdar aur koi nahi hai. Aap humare dil ki Mallika hai, aur kal hum apko is saltant ki Mallika banana ki ghoshna bhi karenge. Hum bas aapka saath chahte hai Jodha. Bohot akela mehsus karte hai hum khud ko."

"aab aap akele nahi hai, hum hai aapke saath"

And they hug each other.

After having had multiple heartbreaks, Jalal finally found his soul mate who would stand by him. He is no longer lonely, but he found his Mallika. A Mallika who he could blindly trust. Their life was not perfect, neither had all their problems been solved. But they were now one soul in two bodies. And hence they could face everything that came their way.

Even though jalal was deeply hurt by Ruqquaiah Jodha's love heal him. Listening to her and Sujamal's relationship, and also the relation ship between his father and Sujamal's father; Jalal was very keen on helping Sujamal.

Jalal always trusted blindly, he never changed that habit of his. But this time he put his trust on a person who never broke it. He finally started the journey that will make him immortal in history as Akbar. The Shenshah, who was known as Jallad became Akbar (literaly meaning the Great).

Moral: (Oh I always love these) Trusting someone is not bad, it can be the most beautiful feeling in the world. But we need to check if the receipient is worthy of the trust we are bestowing on them. Or else, we are in for a very painful time of our life, from which we may or maynot be able to recover.

Please forgive me for any errors, or if you felt that the language I typed in is incorrect. I am not an expert in the language, but have tried my best. This may be the last part of my FF but it as we all know, the story is not.

I am not sure when I will be able to write any more, so its better to stop this here. Thank you all for the lovely response, on my first ever FF. if I get an amazing inspiration
Edited by pari0706 - 11 years ago

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