Akdha FF: Trust (on current track)Last Part pg4 3/6

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Saumya

@tinkylove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Ooo i5 was so sweet I loved jodha and sujamal par very much...

It was cool off dear...

Nice very nice...😊

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: princess_saumya
Ooo i5 was so sweet I loved jodha and sujamal par very much...
It was cool off dear...
Nice very nice...😊

thanks deary... i am glad you liked Jodha and Sujamal part. I have always been interested in that story and wanted to explore it a bit. finally got a chance 😉

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Hi Pari.. It's apt ending this FF here.. It was nice reading this.. I request you to start a fresh FF with different concept.. 😊

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Eh leh...
Inni jaldi khatam hogaya...
It was truly amazing...
I loved it a lot...
Loved that part when Jodha talks abt her and Sujamal's bro-sis relation to Jalal...
Wow...
Jalal is going to give her the title of Mallika-e-Hindustan...
It is amazing re...
I will miss this story...
Thanks for writing it... :)

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Hi Pari.. It's apt ending this FF here.. It was nice reading this.. I request you to start a fresh FF with different concept.. 😊

hey,

I am glad you agree as I felt that if I continued it would only drag the story and i didn't like it.

i am glad you liked reading the story. once I get some inspiration I will be back with a different track for sure 😳

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ...anika...
Eh leh...
Inni jaldi khatam hogaya...
It was truly amazing...
I loved it a lot...
Loved that part when Jodha talks abt her and Sujamal's bro-sis relation to Jalal...
Wow...
Jalal is going to give her the title of Mallika-e-Hindustan...
It is amazing re...
I will miss this story...
Thanks for writing it... :)

😆 i know it came to an end very soon... but it was only meant to show how the truth comes out and the trust between Jalal and Jodha 😳 i i continue now it will be a drag and i don't want that 😊

i am glad you loved it ... and especially love the Jodha - Sujamal part. It is my personal favourite.

i really did enjoy writing this story and am so happy that you loved it and will miss it 😳

if i get any more ideas I will come back with a new story pakka 😳

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ash

@ashpat

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

this was amazing. i loved the last part especially how jodha shared about sujamal and her childhood. then jalal giving MEH honor and she promising him she won't lie ot hurt him. I also liked the background of sujamal's dad.I You should start another story. pm me when u do. thx

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow lovely ff keep writting great pleasure to read ur writtings

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Hi Pari ... I just loved ur ff ... Beautiful ... Would have been happy if it was contnd ... Never mind ... I hope u'll come up with another interesting story line in the future ... Btw loved ur writing ... Keep going

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ashpat
this was amazing. i loved the last part especially how jodha shared about sujamal and her childhood. then jalal giving MEH honor and she promising him she won't lie ot hurt him. I also liked the background of sujamal's dad.I You should start another story. pm me when u do. thx

Thank you for the comment. i am glad you loved this part. it was my personal fav as well 😉

I will write another story once i get some good plot 😳

Between the background of Sujamal's dad is actually part of history 😊