The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sanamslight

THIS is AWESOME!!!. I had to giggle over and again. He's such an ass, fighting with his inner devil, haha.🤣 But good for him, his wall is coming down on him.


Thank you!!! Thank you soo so much!!
Yes he is an asshole! šŸ˜† I loved and enjoyed writing this so much. He isn't what he shows. Deffo that. And I love these guys.šŸ˜†
Thank you once again for loving it so much!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

omg awww!!! this is hilarious n supppeerrr cuuttteee!!! LOVE IT!šŸ‘šŸ˜ƒ do write more on SaHil!


Thank you!! Thank you soo soo much for such lovely response. And loving it so much!
I would be up with Sanam's soon too!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Prags,

Beautifully written.šŸ‘

As I went through this...I realised ...we all know the young Nawaab inside outšŸ˜†...Many of those musings were what went through my mind also as I wrote my ff...

Yes...Sanam's ponderings, please...😳

Aahil is owned!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†


Thank you so much Soup! I am so glad that you loved it.
Yes we all know him quite well now. It's Sanam's turn to start knowing him.šŸ˜†
I enjoyed writing it so much. His inner fights.
Haha. I loved the last line. Yes he is owned!šŸ˜†
Sanam's would be up soon too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Hola everyone! I am back with Sanam's perspective.

I need to clear one thing though, i guess its not what actually Sanam's view would be. Coz i might not be able to capture essence exactly till now. I might not connect with her. So if it turns out to be stupid and funny. I am sorry!

I have been able to connect only with ARI right now, completely.šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

Okay, here we go. The circumstances are the same as in Aahil's.

Sanam: In conversation with her Alter ego.


She started walking towards the kitchen. Proud and victorious. Nose held up high, as always! She hasn't bent down in front of Jallaad Jinn! What more could she ask for?!

He owns me? Since when? What does he think of himself? Jallaad Jinn. Ughh. He needs to learn, throwing few cents of money doesn't make him own me. Six months. It would be over then, for once and for all.

Oh. I thought it was over. This stuff between you and..

Allah Miyan! Stuff? With that Jallaad Jinn?! Oh. I would love to beat him once again!

You seem quite excited for this challenge with Jallaad Jinn no?

Oh yes. It would be so much fun seeing his innocent defeated face again!

Innocent? Jallaad Jinn? You mean..Innocent Jallaad Jinn?! Weird!

Whatever! Ughh.That stubble he has. Whats that with his stubble?! Jallaad jinn!!

Ah. Since when you have started thinking about your Jallaad Jinn's looks?!

Allah Miyan! Pai gaya panga! Mine? He couldn't be anyone's! Forget about being mine.

So, you agree. You want him to be yours. Right.

Shut up! God! Those eyes! Always ready to murder someone. Pounce on somebody and kill him off on the spot.

Ah. So we are gonna get started on his eyes now.

Why do i feel sometimes, he is not what he shows. Those eyes. Such deep intensity, they have. Along with that vulnerability. That innocence, that pure soul, behind that masked Jallaad. That heart...

Woah, woah woah! Now your heartless Jallaad Jinn has grown a heart too?

What do i actually care? I need to pay his debt back. Thats it! Thats what i am here for. Ain't i?

Umm..is it something else also?

No! Ofcourse not! Ughh, Jallaad Jinn! How proudly he says? - "i own you now, Miss Dhabevaali".

You seem to be growing a liking towards this name eh? Miss Dhabevaali.

Shut up! What kinda name is this? I am not his Dhabevaali!

"His'? He owns you all right eh?

No! He doesn't! Never would!

Seems legit. Why? Coz' you wanna own him..someday?

No!! I would never be his!

Yeah. Coz he would be yours!

Ughh..go away!!

Huh. Mohtarma Duffer!

*poof*

Ughh. Jallaad Jinn!


And thats all! Hope you guys enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it.😃

Thanks for reading!

Do give your valuable comments and criticism. I would love to hear it. 😳

And also do tell me should i continue with a series or something?

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Me 2 Ahil fan so didn't read this btw just read ur note any ways acha he ho ga but love Ahil Pov just superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
res res res
Unres!!!!!
šŸ¤— Heyyy Pragya. Lo main aa gyi. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Lovely sweetheart. This wasn't bad at all. I liked Sanam's alter ego more than Sanam. (Did you notice...I kinda love alter ego more. The sadist in me is growing. šŸ˜† )
Undoubtedly, the Aahil one was my favourite. And like Faruuu said, we are biased...maniacs biased to Aahil. šŸ˜†
*High-five Faruu* mwaahhh
And me too like...you getting into his head more than Sanam's. *Well.You.Know.What.I.Mean* 😈 Emotions acche se bahar aate hain. šŸ˜†
And she did notice his stubble. Smart girl. šŸ˜† I am loving it.
Now I want Junoon. Junoon Junoon and Junoon. 😈
And don't stop writing on Sanam's. It really is amazing. But next something better be about Junoon. Okay.
Love you guys. šŸ¤—
Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
I'll have 2 this time. šŸ˜†
************
Yehhh last time it was zero...now its 2. Go girl. Score is getting better. 🤣
Faruuu, yes we both made it this time. And 2-2..wowww. Love uuu. šŸ¤—
And I love the 'biased' us also. *high-five* 😈
Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Mine!!!


Oh Pragyaaa!!! You awesome!



Yes. That stubble!


Wow Sanam. Not bad ehhh! You like him you like him you like him.


Yes yes yes YES. on the series!!!!!



And...would you hate me if I say I like you in Aahil's head better!!??



Coz Aahil is just Hayyyeee!!!!



I may be bias!


Oh wth. I AM bias!



I want more!!!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Let this be on page 8!

Edited

Coz I wanted two as well!!! Heee!!! Yay Aalooo we both made it!!

Pragyaaa we love youuu!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Shit res rs te
edit***

auto correct f**ked up there^^^
soz 🤣

i was half asleep when i resed this, so yeah- sorry it took me so long 🤣
driving on bumpy terrain and having coke (the dRINKING KIND NOT THE SNORTING ONE... JEEZ)
does not bode well with my stomach 🤣
which means i was really really high.
LIKE A KITE!!!
i maybe still am.
*shrugs*

dont worry man.
you essenced the shit out of this one.
she would so totally say this.

did you see the way she was staring at him during the dupatta scene thing?
mentally undressing him with eyes.
thats what she was doing.

SO GOOD SO GOOD
IN THE BOLD MAN THE STUFF IN THE BOLD MADE ME DOUBLE OVER 🤣

oh, this is awesome- you have to make a series outta this srsly.
Edited by suds. - 11 years ago

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