The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34*

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Oh god!! This was really great.. I could actually picture out the conversation he would have with his "Alter Ego".. 👍🏼

Great lines. KVB/Aahil Raza Ibrahim would totally think AND say these lines..

Well done!! I think you should keep writing more - No, I know for sure that you should write more.

I would love to read more of these small stories from you <3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

😆Lol. Thats so cute! 😆
Its okay. I''ll be waiting for that dreaded comment. 😆

JESUS I AM NOT CUTE.

WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY THAT.

NONONONONONO.

ILY

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sanamslight

@sanamslight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

THIS is AWESOME!!!. I had to giggle over and again. He's such an ass, fighting with his inner devil, haha.🤣 But good for him, his wall is coming down on him.

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

omg awww!!! this is hilarious n supppeerrr cuuttteee!!! LOVE IT!👏😃 do write more on SaHil!

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Prags,

Beautifully written.👏

As I went through this...I realised ...we all know the young Nawaab inside out😆...Many of those musings were what went through my mind also as I wrote my ff...

Yes...Sanam's ponderings, please...😳

Aahil is owned!😉😆

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -RohitMaxwell-
nice one

Thank you so much! Glas that you liked it.😃

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Superb
Just love it
amazing dear

Thank you so much!

I am so glad that you loved it.😃

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: neenabinu
loved what u wrote... its awesome...
hope to see u write more
aahil's POV came out superbly

Thank you! Thank you so much for your comments.

I'll try to write more.

Would be up with Sanam's soon!😳

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mahwash17
Oh god!! This was really great.. I could actually picture out the conversation he would have with his "Alter Ego".. 👍🏼

Great lines. KVB/Aahil Raza Ibrahim would totally think AND say these lines..

Well done!! I think you should keep writing more - No, I know for sure that you should write more.

I would love to read more of these small stories from you <3

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I am really honored.

I guess I have done it quite well then. As you guys said, he would think and say exact these lines. So glad it turned out as it should be.

Thanks alot once again.

Sanam's would be up soon!😳

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: suds.

JESUS I AM NOT CUTE.
WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY THAT.
NONONONONONO.
ILY

Yes you are! Atleast I find you cute! And others too! So you are, no?😆

Coming back to your comments.

Thank you!! Thank you so much for such a lovely comment.

You have an apple product. Man, respect. Coz I don't have one!😆

I am so so glad you loved it so much man. All the while I was writing I was picturing him how he would say these. Well actually I always picture him though. I love Aahil!😆

Sanam doesn't.

And Sherlock DP. Lol no. I haven't drawn and stuff. It's a photo I found on Google images.😆 I liked it an so kept it.

Thanks again! Would be up with Sanam's soon!