JaGan OS-You make my life complete

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JaGan OS - you make my life complete
ok its my first ever OS
while reading WU,,, i got this idea
please forgive me,, i type madly with many mistakes😆😆

Shashank vyas as jagdish




Sargun mehta as Ganga







Ganga pressing jagya's cloth and talking with her self - yeh doctor sahab bhi na, always busy in work, sometimes in hospital some times in office,, no time for me😕
but i know he is very hard working and i should understand him and the watch towards jagya's pic who was smiling at her and staring her beautiful wife
Jadish enters the room
Jadya- Ganga where r u? i m getting late
ganga-yes doctor sahab ur bag and cloths r ready
jagya gets ready and gives a hug to ganga and goes

Next day
Ganga gets up early in morning, it was her habit but today was something special. it was their marriage anniversary and she wanted to wish him but she was so disapointed that jagya was not there
ganga comes down in hall, DS is prayinh
ganga-Dadisa have u seen doctor sahab
DS-yes he went hospital,some emergency case
ganga was so disappointed and sad,,,
ganga thinking- cmon i m a nurse, i should understand his job
he is MLA of jaitsar and MD of jaitsar's biggest hospital
i should plan something specail for him,, i will give him surprise when he will come back
she tried to pacify herself but still she was feeling sad
she tried to call jagdish but his phone was switched off,

Hopital
jagdish after a very long and complicated case,, comes in his cabin and sits on his chair
suddenly his eyes went towards the picture kept in his table
her life her better half ganga and their sons mannu and abhimanyu
he smiled at watching the pic
and suddenly his eyes went towards the calender kept in his office
jadesh-OMG, how can i do this, how can i forget this date
he was feeling so angry on hiself
he picks his mobile- i shud call ganga and ask sorry and wish her
but he stopped- no i shud plan something unique for my ganga

BH

Ganga working in kitchen with sumitra but feeling lost
sumi-what happened ganga?
ganga-no nothing
sumi-hmmm ok,, we r going to meet sugna
you know na jagya is so busy and he is not going,i m feeling worried for him
ganga-maa i will stay with him here, u dont take any tension
sumi-thats great,,,

AT night
ganga wears the red saree jagya bought for her
and waiting for her prince charming
it was too late but jagya was absent
she was feeling lil bit frustrated but again tries to pacify her self
when suddenly she gets a call from jagya
jagya-ganga i m so sorry i will come late today, u eat and sleep but please do me a favour
ganga-what?
jagya-i left a file on terrece plzzz email that
ganga(sad)-OK :(
she goes upward with a heavy heart
she enters the terrece and shocked
terrece was decorated with heart shapped ballons and candles,,it was a dreamy sight

suddenly jagdish comes singing,few lines of song which suits them alot

Tu jo mila
Toh zindagi hai badli
Main poora naya ho gaya
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa

Milne ko tujhse, bahaane karun
Tu muskuraaye, wajah main banun
Roz bitaana saath mein tere, saara din mera

Ganga so happy to see this but then an idea came in her mind, she decided to tease doctor sahab
she brought a fake angry expression
jagdish*holding his ears and making cutie face*-i m sorry ganga
ganga was about to leave when jagdish pulls her towards himself
both were so close to each other , they cud listen each other's heartbeat which was taking each other's name only
jagdish-sorry

ganga-dont say sorry doctor sahab, i understand u have double work , and i m proud of u doctor sahab
jagdish- thanks alot ganga, u always understands me you make my life complete , i m so lucky to have u in my life
ganga-i m double luckier than u
jagdish-why?
ganga-i got a handsome and caring hubby,and winks at him😉
jagdish*naughty smile*-umphhh then this handsome and caring hubby wants something
ganga-what?
jagdish with naughty smile comes close to her lips
ganga understand and pushes him away
jagdish again pulls her
Deep eyelock between them
jagdish untie her hairs,, and winds start playing with them
her black hairs spreaded on her face
jagdish lovingly removed her hairs
his deep eyes were flooded with love,, she cudnt resist any more
his eyes just hypnotized her
jagdish cups her face ang give her a kiss
ganga shyly hugs him tight,, jagdish happily took her in his arms
those arms were meant for her,,, ONLY for her








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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shobhi that's such a cute os... wow.. needless to say I loved it..
Could totally see JaGan planning these surprises... how romantic... lovely n then the way Jagya plans everything out is amazing... wanna see this onscreen too..Please cvs.. n I loved that last line...arms meant only for her... omg...thats sounds soo out of the world
Well I didnt notice any typos really...so absorbed was I in imagining my fave two in your piece...well done...
Thanks a lot for this.

Neha
Edited by sneha02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww dil khush kar diya 😃what a cute OS Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely n very romantic OS..😳
Thank u shobha.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

Shobhi that's such a cute os... wow.. needless to say I loved it..

Could totally see JaGan planning these surprises... how romantic... lovely n then the way Jagya plans everything out is amazing... wanna see this onscreen too..Please cvs.. n I loved that last line...arms meant only for her... omg...thats sounds soo out of the world
Well I didnt notice any typos really...so absorbed was I in imagining my fave two in your piece...well done...
Thanks a lot for this.

Neha

aww thank u so much neha
4 detail cment and so encourging words
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shona..awesome OS..but can't expect anything like this in the serial..but would love to see Jagan scenes like this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww such a lovely OS
his eyes just hypnotized her
jagdish cups her face ang give her a kiss
ganga shyly hugs him tight,, jagdish happily took her in his arms
those arms were meant for her,,, ONLY for her

These lines are just
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@shobha b'ful work. i read it now while working from ofc com oderwise my net isnot working.don't know wen will it b ok.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Late latif to read this But really enjoyed it Shobha Such a cute OS ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dear you should write more of them

this was nice

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