SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

it was a nice update all the three chap 30,31,32

i really like the swaron dance and song selction

i loved the thing that they understand each other so well

finally the engagement took place

the gang surprise was great

thanks

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

swaron are engaged... wowww...
man I, u r rocking girl...love u...
and the gang,,, the way they portray swaron life was awesome...
thanks 4 d pm...

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

First of fall , me very sorry sakshi ... Hope u will forgive me 🤗 🤗
Thanks for update n pm
Coming to update
U are amazing writer ... Specially when u describe its I am there . It's all happening I front of me .
Swayum got to know Sharon love her . He is so sweet that he want to give her more time .
Engagement ... Lovely couple swaron ... Finally ek horahe hai

Bohut accha update yaar ... Sorry once again for late 😳

Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

amazing

emotional tha yr...😭 rula diya tune mujhe

finally these guys are engaged ...yipeee🥳

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964103

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Unres!

Finally... completed all 32 chapters!! actually 33!!:P

The whole story is really nice... Never could I have imagined romance after marriage... with different people!;)

Going great!!

Thanks for the PM!!

Jiana!!

Edited by acceptng_lyf - 11 years ago

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khandelwalsonal

@khandelwalsonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Awesome update! Great going swayam sharon 😃
Loved it :)
Update soon!

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Read chapter 31and32 both were outstanding
Their dance was too gud ,
They are finally engaged
Manvi's entry sounds interesting
Update soon

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

Thanks for the response guys! :)
Enjoy the next update...

@surbhimathur- Surbhi dii..thanks for the helppp! ❤️

Recap- Maanvi intro..SwaRon engaged...An act by gang of their journey!

Sharon- Maanvi...meet these... our friends..humari D3 gang!
Maanvi- Ohh hello guys! Awesome act !!
All- Thanks...

They chatted for sometime and then... the gang members left after having lunch as the function was over... only Simmi was with Sharon...

Sharon- Simmi n Maanvi..tum log baatein karo... wo Dad Mujhe n Swayam ko bula rahe hai...okay... hum log aate hai...
Simmi- Yeah! Jaldi aana...

Swayam- Actually...now am bored...
Sharon- Same... ye milna milana... actually ab boring lag rahe hai...
Swayam- Yeh last... uske baad hum jayenge hi nahi milne...
Sharon *chuckle*- As if aisa tum karoge...
Swayam- Let's see...

They met other people... and then guests also went... only their families were left...

Swayam- Maa...hum Simmi aur Maanvi ke saath hai...
Nandini- Thik hai... tumlog jao...

Sharon was damn tired... she even was empty stomach from morning... busy with arrangements...and helping Gautam n Renuka... and looking after each n every need... she so wanted some rest...

Maanvi- Ye aa gye... Didz n Jiju...
Simmi- Guys...kaha reh gaye tumlog... we even had food...
Swayam- Waha milna tha kisi se yaar...
Sharon- Hmmm...but now no more...

Justthen Swayam's phone rang...
Swayam- Sharonn... tum baitho..I'll be back..Office se phone aaya hai...
Sharon- Hmm...okay!

Swayam went out...
Simmi- Sharon... tum bohot thak gayi ho.. rest kar lo...
Sharon- Nahi..Sim..it's okay...
Maanvi- No didz... Simmi..aap ise andar le jao... mein Plate leke aati hun...she'll have something there...
Sharon- But Swayam... bhi to...
Maanvi- Aap jao..I'll see...

Sharon and Simmi moved to the bedroom... Sharon sat on the bed resting her back on the wall... (Half-sitting position)

Simmi- Yaha kab tak rukna hai??
Sharon- Dinner yahi ka hai...
Simmi- Ohh nice... acha Sharon... I'll leave now... and will meet you at 7...
Sharon- Umm..okay... you too need rest... yaa... and thanks yaar!
Simmi- My pleasure babes...

Both hugged and she left...

Here, Maanvi took the plate and food...and went to Swayam... who just ended the talking...
Maanvi- Jiju...
Swayam- Haan...
Maanvi- Ye lo plate... aur mere saath chalo...

She took him to the room and made him see through the window...
Maanvi- Didz ne subah se kuch nahi khaya...
Swayam- Ohh damn...thanks... Maanvi..really... I'll go...
Maanvi *smiled*- Hmm...aur aap bhi kha lena...

He took the plate from her hands and went to the room where Sharon was...
he sat beside her... she opened her eyes...

Swayam- Subah se kuch khaogi nahi...to weakness lagegi hi na... yeh lo...
Sharon- Tum bhi khao...
Swayam- Hmm... ye lo...

He fed her... and also ate in between...
Both had the food...and he kept the plate aside...

Sharon- Let me wash my hands...
Sharon got up... and both washed their hands...

Swayam- Vaise Sharon...tumne apna phone check kiya hai subah se??
Sharon- Actually Swayam..w...
Swayam *rude*- I am asking you...? Just tell me yes or no???
Sharon- No... but tum itna rude kyun ho rahe ho??
Swayam *in mind*- I love teasing you my love!
Swayam- Kyun nahi ho sakta kya???
And then he turned to other side...
Sharon *teary*- Swayam but... mein...busy thi...
Swayam *anger*- Itni busy ki apne boyfriend ka msg tak nahi padha? Sharon...this seriously nahi expect kiya tha meine...
She didn't answer... he was waiting for it...but then guessed some sniffing so turned back...and found tears rolling down her cheeks... she was feeling really bad... he firstly went and closed the door... and then came to her...
Sharon- I am sorry...but...meine...
Swayam- Hey hey hey... Sharon...shh...ro kyun rahi ho...
Sharon- Mujhe...
Swayam cupped her face...
Swayam- Mein just mazak kar raha tha... tumne gussa nahi hun...
Sharon- Swayam...tum...sachhi..nahi ho??

He nodded and softly kissed her tears away... she sighed...
Sharon- Agli baar aisa mazak mat karna...samjhe...
Swayam- Haan baba...nahi karunga...pakka...

Sharon just crashed herself into him...and he lovingly hugged her back...
She smiled and broke the hug...

Sharon- And dare you say that you are boyfriend... I'll kill you!!!
Swayam- Huh...I know... you'll say ki..."because now you are my fiance..."...isn't it??
Sharon- Yeahhh! Intelligent...huh...
He winked and she chuckled...
Swayam- Now go and rest...
Sharon- Ok! But jab tak mein so na jaun..you be with me...
Swayam- Ye bhi koi batane wali baat hai... chalo...

She lay on bed... and covered herself with a quilt... Swayam kept staring at her...

After she slept...he opened the door..and went out... their were 2-3 rooms more where the parents were resting... since the Dinner was here only so RaiPrakashs requested Shekhawats to stay till Dinner...and they agreed...

Some hours later...
Maanvi was roaming in the garden area where she found... Swayam sitting on a bench listening songs... in I-pod... she tapped his shoulder...he plugged out ear phones...
Maanvi- Jiju...mein baithu yaha?
Swayam- Hey...haan ofcourse...sit na...
Maanvi- Mujhe lagta hai...meri aur aapki bonding badi achhi hone wali hai...
Swayam- Umm...yeh to achha hi hai...vaise...tumhari shaadi kab hai???
Maanvi- Apke shaadi ke 2 week baad...
Swayam- Ohh great... Sharon ka College khatm...fir Shaadi...
Maanvi- Apko pata hai jiju... mein didz se almost 2 years baad mil rahi hun... but mujhe pata hai...kya hua unke saath aur apke saath bhi... but I feel so good ki didz ko aap mile ho... you won't believe...but Didz maasi ko I mean apni Mom ko miss karti hai... chat ya video calling se jab bhi baat karti hun...kahin na maasi ki baat aa hi jaati hai...
Swayam- I know Maanvi... Uska pain... and I know aaj bhi Sharon apni Mom se vaise hi baat karegi jaise koi bhi important din par karti hai...
Maanvi- Jiju...I really thankyou ki aap unko itna support karte ho...
Swayam- She is my life Maanvi...
Maanvi- I know...she says the same...for you!!
Swayam *in mind facepalm*- Then why don't she confess...uff... I wish jaldi hi...
Maanvi- Jiju...kahan kho gaye?
Swayam- Are nahi...bas aisehi...
Maanvi- Umm... acha mein bahar hun...kuch guests aane wale the..mein aati hun...
Swayam- Yeah yeah.. okay...mein bhi chalta hun andar hi...

Both moved in... Swayam went to Sharon's Room...
Sharon- Swayam... tum kya kar rahe the??
Swayam- Kuch nahi...bas bahar baitha tha...
Sharon- Okay...let's go out...
Swayam- Yeahh...

After dinner...Swayam texted Sharon...
"Meet me at the terrace...in 5"
Sharon replied...
"Yup okay!"

Swayam was waiting for her...she came to him... both sat on the bench...
Swayam- Abhi tumhara mood kyun off hai...?
Sharon- Bas...Mom ki yaad aa rahi thi...
Swayam- Baat kar lo...simple...
He pointed to the stars... she looked at it...
Sharon- Nah...Mom meri baat akele me sunegi... kisi ke bhi saath nahi...
Swayam- Ohh... to mein baat kar leta hun...
Sharon- Okayy! Let's see...tum kya bolte ho...

Swayam *looking at the stars*- Umm...aap dekh rahi ho hume na... I know confuse hogi ki mein kaisa hun..but but..no worries... aapki Sharon ab meri hai... I promise ki kabhi use hurt nahi karunga... apki kami khatm nahi kar paunga...but koshish karunga ki utna pyaar de saku ki use aapki yaad aaye to sirf yahi batane ke liye... ki wo khush hai...na ki hurt hokar yaad aaye... and ya yeh mein dil se keh raha hu...

Sharon lovingly looked at him... he also had tears in his eyes...and Sharon wiped them...
Sharon- Mom bhi khushi se rone lagegi...ab bas karo...
Swayam just took her in his embrace... tightly!!

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When Shekhawats were about to leave... Sharon was at the backside of the bunglow!

Sharon was arranging her saaree nicely..she was pinning up the loose end of Saree...and also it was bit hot...and hair were open... so she thought of tucking them up... she tied them up with a rubber band...
Swayam saw her... and came towards her...

Swayam- Sharon... Kaha thi tum...?
Sharon- Are bas ho gaya...

Swayam noticed her tied hair...he just called her.. "Hey"...
She looked at him... and questioned "What"...
Swayam spoke nothing but came close to her... she was not able to speak... just kept looking at him... he just pulled her towards him from waist...and chills ran down her spine... because his hand was on her bare part...of waist... he moved his other hand up and till her hairs...and opned the rubber-band...and her hairs fell straight... he took that rubberband and then held her palm... He kept it in her hand... And kept holding her palm... she also held his hand tight with her...

Swayam- This looks better...
Sharon blushed...

He headed more close to her... her smile vanished and an intense look could be seen in both their eyes... Sharon was getting lost in him...
Sharon- Swayamm...
She remembered the past dance...the intimacy they shared... the feelings... she was now trying hard to control... he knew it was not the right time... he slowly refrained his hand from her waist...and she left a breath... they both left their hands free... but were standing just at the same distance...

She looked down...
Swayam- Engagement ke baad milna will become rare na... but still College is the option...
Sharon- Hmmm... but I..I..gonna miss you!!
Swayam *meeting his eyes*- Hope we get chance to meet daily...
Sharon- Hmm... hope so... now?
Swayam- I'll leave...

Both came out...and took the blessing of opposite parents ( :P ) and Shekhawats left for their Mansion...

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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Updated the 33rd Chapter!! Hope you all liked it. I am getting less response on my chapters, kindly tell me do you want me to write further chapters or not

Do HIT LIKE n KEEP COMMENTING! Means a lot.

I am unable to update regularly coz of exams, so bear with me. but plz do not stop your comments. plz..they are really very encouraging! 😊

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Love,
Sakshi

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#710

*Edited*

Wow amazing chapter sakshi! Such hot and sweet moments of SwaRon filled up! They both got so tired man...then the scene following that was awesome! Swayam faking his anger on sharon then her getting all nervous and teary..then the hugg..awwieee...cutiepies!

I like this maanvi now...loll she seems to be a good sister-in-law :D
Then the last SwaRon scene was intense and hot! The way swayam touched her waist and freed her hairlocks...even i got the feels! Lolll such nicely penned scene man. It was really very good.
Okay now all the best for your exams and shutup for that ThankYou note :)
Will wait aaram se...you prepare for entrances :*

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago