SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Awesome updates..Finally SwaRon are engaged..Gang part was seriously nice..The way they guys showed swaron whole journey in dance moves was amazing yet emotional for me..Actually in previous updates,i just loved that intense n passionate dance performance..I just loved it..Ur narration was awestruck..I mean whenever u write to show any dance sequence..Ur narration is just perfect..Maanvi character is nice n some where bubbly type i guess..

Now here in this update,i just loved all the loving moments shared by SwaRon..Swayam's fake anger and sharon was tensed n teary..After that trustworthy hug of SwaRon..So in short,engagement part was beautifully conveyed but still i am just looking forward to read Sharon side confession..After that Swayam's convo to sharon's mom was emotional one..I like ur writing there..So in all,U are doing great to penning down such story..Just keep it up..

And yeah,Dont worry about updates..Becoz exams are most prior then anything..

So all the best for ur Exams

Enjoy

Thanx for the PM

Prateek

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Wow :)

Amazing chapter :)

Really loved it :)

Swayam teasing Sharon ...

Swayam speaking to Sharon's mom ...

Swaron romance ...

Everything was awesome :)

Update soon :)

Thanx for the PM :)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#723

lovelyyy updatee😊

continue soonish😊

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

1st ... sorry sorry sorry... i knw i m late... mafi de de...

& i just loved d update... yeh maanvi ka story is interesting... waiting fr d nest update... update soon... 😃

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try2149

@try2149

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Wow sakshi both chapters r superb.

U wrote it so beautifully.

Swaron moments r so touchy, just amazing👏

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#726

sakhi i m so happy to read all the chapters in one go

i know ki i m late but still ek review toh bantah hai

firstly feeling really sad becoz such brilliant story came to an end

but i hav to say you gave a perfect ending

to such a brilliant start

the whole journey of swaron was so beautifully penned

n sply the last chapters i think thr were so many small moments

tat gave such a swaronish feel to the story

the intimacy n hot chemistry was very well penned

all in all a very pleasing read 😛

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

awesome update sakshi...i just loved it...

it was cute...sweet and romantic... 😳

swaron finally engaged...m happy... 😃

entire update beautifully penned down...

plz do cont dear...

waiting for next update now...

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

hey dea eagerly waiting to read further do update soon

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

update soon ...promise this time jaldi unres karugi

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#730

Thanks for the likes n comments.
Here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
Sorry for any mistakes further...

Recap- SwaRon Engagement...and some time spent by them.

The next day...

Swayam- Mom...bye... meet you at night now!!
Nandini- Okay Swayam... take care...

Swayam took out his car and drove to College... Sharon was already there in College attending classes...

***

Sharon *in mind*- Yeh Swayam kahan hai aaj...ek message nahi...no call...nothing! yeh ayega na College?? Aisa to nahi direct Office chala gaya ho??? Aisa hua to...I'll surely kill him... Goshh! Ek to aaj classes attend karne ka mann nahi tha upar se ye lectures!! I am pissed off...

Simmi who was sitting beside her...whispered in her ears...
Simmi- I know Swayam ko miss kar rahi ho... but apne facial expression thoda thik kar lo...Sir tumhe hi notice kare...ye to ofcourse tum nahi chahti hogi na...Sharon...
Sharon looked at her... and make a frustrated face...Simmi gave a forced smile...
Sharon- Sim... arghhh!
Simmi- Only 15min...then over...

Sharon sighed, took her pen in hands and started scribbing on her register... unknowing after much scribbing her hands automatically started writing Swayam's name because he was in her mind... and his name on her lips...
Simmi- Sharonnn... stop!!!!! Yeh kya likh rahi ho tum...have you gone mad...??
Sharon- What??? Ab kya kiya meine??
Simmi- Just look at what you are writing...

Sharon looked at it and bit her lip...
Sharon- Swayam!
Simmi- Wow! You are a gone case... engagement kal hi hui hai aur aaj dekho...huh...
Sharon *blushing*- Areee...okay na...
Simmi *irritated*- Blushing queen... aww...huh!!!

Lecturer- You two Sharon n Simmi...please...do me a favour...just get out of this class...

Sharon without wasting any time stood up and dragged Simmi with her... Out of the class...
Sharon- Sorry Sir.!

After coming out,
Sharon- Let's go to RH...please...
Simmi- Yeahh meri maa...

***
Meanwhile in Rehearsal Hall...

Swayam n others were rehearsing (Except Sharon n her classmates). The song ended and they all sat tired...

Swayam- Hey...baaki sab ki classes kab tak hai????
Nilesh- Abhi hai yaar 5minutes...
Swayam- Acha mein aata hun 2min mein...

He got up and went to boys locker room... a minute later Sharon n Simmi arrived...

Nilesh- Simmi n Sharon??? Tum dono yaha?
Simmi- Are class se bahar nikal dia Sharon ke karan...
Nilesh started laughing and also the others... they all were chatting... and after the classes got over the rest of the gang also came there...

Sharon- Ye Swayam kaha hai?? Aaj nahi ayega kya?
Taani- Are Swayam aaya hai... aata hi hoga...kuch kaam se gaya hai...

Just then some students came inside the RH with VP Sir... Everyone stood up...

VP Sir- Guys! Yeh 6 students hai dusre College ke jo ki is Event mein participate karne wale hai...tumlogo ke saath...
Nilesh- Sir...ek hi team mein??
VP Sir- Haan...
Rey- 18 students in a team???
VP Sir- Nahi... Dance competition mein jo log College se pass out hai wo part nahi lenge... unlogo ko yeh 6 replace kar rahe hai...
Nilesh- What?? !!
Sharon- Sir...aisa kyun...
VP Sir- Ye Manager ka order hai...but guys...tum 6 log hi choreograph karne wale ho so you will contribute...and by the way these are also nice dancers... I wish tum log ek achhi team banao...good luck!

Everyone introduced one another...
Ritu, Jiya, Aman, Divya, Tina, Yash were the new ones.
Sharon- Means...Swayam and you 5..(Nilesh, Rinni, Rey, Tanni, Aashi...) only as choreographers...and not participants!!
VP Sir- Okay guys... they will join you after half n hour.

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Swayam came in... and found the new ones n VP Sir leaving...

Swayam- Yeh log kaun hai guys?? Anything serious..?
Vicky- Abe yaar tu baith to idhar...sab batate hain...

He came and sat opposite to Sharon...
Swayam- Haan tell now...

The whole scene and orders were narrated to Swayam...

All turned upset...
Swayam- Guys... upset hone se ab kya hoga... we'll have to accept it...
Aashi- Sab gadbad types ho gaya...
Swayam- Umm...just think that we are together... not in Competition but as Friends...as D3 group...
Taani- Swayam... but kya aisa ho sakta hai ki humari team "D3" ka naam announce na ho.. I mean D3 means we 12 na...so... I hope you understand...
Amar- Haan...yeh sahi hai yaal...
Swayam- Haan... I got... I'll try to talk about this to VP Sir...as to keep the name as "St. Louis College" only and not "D3" team.
Sharon- Hmm... fine then...

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The new gang (naming it as- Tashan Group) came inside... D3 gang stood up and exchanged smile...

Nilesh- Guys...yeh humare team ka captain hai... Swayam Shekhawat...
Swayam- Hy guys...
Tashan- Hello...Heya...
Swayam- So we'll start our rehearsals from today only...
Yash- Yeah okay...
Rey- Yeh competition hume jeetna hi hai...islie energy level and all sab full-on hona chahiye...
Swayam- Yes he is right... choreography sabke hisab se set hogi so no worries...
Divya- Umm...humare kitne performances hai?? I mean duets, solos?
Swayam- Jisko lagta hai ki solos mein lena chahiye part so wo apna naam dede...baaki duets decide honge... and ek group dance bhi hai...
Sharon- Swayam... listen...before starting can't we see their dance and wo humara dekhe?
Before Swayam could speak...
Yash- Yeah yeah... you are right...
Sharon shrugged her shoulders... Swayam nodded...looking at her...everyone felt weird...as Yash jumped in between...
Swayam- Okay! Lets start with you guys...

They all performed after one another... Aman, Jiya, Tina, Ritu were really good and the two Yash and Divya were average...

All clapped for them...
Swayam- Its good... solos and duets ke liye anyone of you can give your name...
Tina- Thanks... Now you all...
Swayam- Guys...go on... Vicky...jaa...

Vicky performed...then Amar, Bharat, Sharon, Simmi and then Neha...did...

Everyone enjoyed their Dance... they were also fab...

Aman- You all are too good mahn...
Vicky- Thanks yaar!

Ritu- Kya hum duet 10min ke baad start kare to???
Simmi- Yeah sure..no problem...

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Swayam was sitting beside Sharon...

Swayam- Sharon... engagement ring kaisi lagi...ye to tumne bataya hi nahi...
Sharon *turning to him*- Ohh...jaise tumne bataya mujhe...
Swayam- Aisa ho nahi sakta...meine text kiya tha tumhe...check it...
Sharon- Liar... okay..let me check...mera phone bag mein hai... I'll be back!

She moved with confidence and opened her bag... she immediately smiled...when she found a beautiful red rose kept in it... she caressed it... and secretly kept it with her... without showing it to anyone... Swayam there was waiting for her reaction...he couldn't see because she was facing the opposite side...

Sharon came to him hiding her blush and rose...
Sharon *serious*- Koi message nahi bheja tumne... huh...
Swayam *confused*- Nahi mila...?? Kuch bhi...??
Sharon- What kuch bhi?? Tumne kuch aur bheja tha???
Swayam- Umm...h...no...no...

He started thinking as to why she didn't get the rose... just then he sensed something soft on his palm...and held tight... he looked at it...
Sharon had kept the rose on his palm and covered with her palm...holding his palm tight...

Sharon- Yeh to mil hi gaya mujhe...
Swayam *smile*- Yehi to reply tha...
Sharon *blush*- Yeh new style ka reply ... I just... loved it...
Swayam- Hmm...actually mein nahi chahta ki yeh reply public ho... islie better hai isse pehle koi dekh le you just hide it...nahi to...you very well know "our friends"...!
Sharon *giggled*- Yeah...

She kept it inside...and came to Swayam... Everyone was busy chit-chatting...

Swayam- Guysss!!!
All looked at him...
Swayam- Without wasting time...lets...get back to Dance! Plz..
Amar- Haan yaal...
Taani- Yes! You're right... now duets...
Ritu- Humare group se Aman n Tina gonna show it...Yash n Divya...
Simmi- Humare group se... Vicky Neha... and... Sharon...you...?
Sharon- No...Simmi... I am not taking part in duets...please...
Rey- Hey wait... vaise bhi abhi hum sirf duets ka trail le rahe hai... so why not a duet of Swayam Sharon?
Swayam- Rey...but...
Nilesh- Are Swayam... chal na yaar... chemistry honi chahiye tum dono jaisi...tabhi duets jeet payenge yaar... ek demo to de hi sakte ho tum dono...
Yash- Chemistry... ? Itni achi hai...?????
Neha- Best hai...
Swayam- Okay fine... you all start...

Aman n Tina danced... according to majority the choreography was appreciable but execution was little out of the way...
Tina- Guys... I know execution thoda gadbad tha... but we'll practice more...
D3 Gang- It was really enjoying... seriously...

Now Vicky n Neha...
There dance was salsa duet..which was over all performed well... flexibility was little bit missing in their lifts...
Tashan- Too good...
Neha- Thanks saying Neha...
Rey- Abe lifts mein dhyaan se... girana nahi Vicky...
All laughed...
Vicky- Haan yaar!! Tension mat le...

Yash n Divya... after they performed hip-hop...
Swayam- It was nice but you still need polishing guys... okay!!
Divya- Yeah...thankyou!
Bharat- Abe...mere aur Aashi se bohot hi acha tha...
Aashi- Bharat sahi types bola...

Rinni- Swayam Sharon... Now you both... rock it...!!
Sharon- Hope so...we do...

Swayam Sharon started... there dance was mixute of two-three styles...
The minor mistakes..both covered intelligently without anyones notice... and then ended up with a perfect pose...

All clapped... for them...
Aman- Bohot...acha tha yaar... seriously...kyun Yash..?
Yash- H..haan... mast...
D3- Yo!!!! You both rock...
SwaRon- Thanks everyone...

They went and sat down with everyone...
Divya- Kya hum rehersals kal se start kar sakte hai... and also costumes agar ready na hue ho to mein wo karwa sakti hun... samples hai... jo humne decide kiye hai...wo hum leke aayenge... aap log bhi dekh lena...
Rinni- Haan...yeh acha kiya...
Swayam- Okay! Kal se rehearsals... vaise bhi time ho gaya hai... I'll also leave...Nilesh tu???
Nilesh- Haan...mujhe bhi nikalna hai...

Tashan group bid bye to everyone...and left...
Swayam- Acha guys! If you all want to rehearse...then you do...okay...
Amar- Haan...hum tholi del baad daayenge... (Haan...hum thodi der baad jaayenge)

Swayam bid bye to Sharon... and both Nilesh n Swayam went...
Sharon and others also went home after rehearsing for an hour...
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