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Abhi😳 covers up and plays around with his name
He doesn't want Pragya to start another round of blame game
RaBul were saved or lost their chance to get caught
Abhi😳 like's Pragz's name-beta this is only the shuruat


Prep for second marriage is on in full swing
Third time lucky has such a familiar ring
Some comic relief is provided by Dimpy "aunty"
Mama will have to get a tattoo saying meri biwi chornišŸ˜†

These people need to learn to close the door and talk
Or learn not to overhear others' convos and stalk
Pragya buys a balloon for Suresh miya
But her heart reaches her rightful piya

Purab is confused between dosti and dil
But the dogtags are more expensive than the earringšŸ˜†
Aroras play passing the parcel with Suresh's khaana
Pragya comes to know Bulbul ka chakkar hai chal raha

PraBul have a heart to heart vaali talk
It's finally badi behen ki turn to mock
She's shocked to see Bulbul act coy
They compare their soon to be ex lover boys

Roomie tries to drill sense in Suresh's brain
Also caught between dosti and dil-uff! such a pain

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Posted: 11 years ago
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You really write so well ya!! :)
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Originally posted by: .BarunSanaya.

You really write so well ya!! :)


You're super kind! I just realised I'd made so many typos

ThanksšŸ¤—
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Soon to be Ex-Lover Boys...🤣...that was Epic haha.


Nice Review dear thank u very much.



Nothing much happen today other than like always Suresh was everywhere even his friend had more screen/says than the leads
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is sooo goood :) yuh write very well and beautifullyy loved it :)
Mama will have to get a tattoo saying meri biwi chornišŸ˜† this line cracked me up LOL :D

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Originally posted by: .Angel

Soon to be Ex-Lover Boys...🤣...that was Epic haha.



Nice Review dear thank u very much.



Nothing much happen today other than like always Suresh was everywhere even his friend had more screen/says than the leads


ThanksšŸ˜†
I agree-we are one month into the serial and it's not well paced..I guess because all story lines are separate till now..Hopefully they become intertwined next week:)

Originally posted by: poiu123

Very nicely written šŸ‘

thank you😳
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Originally posted by: simran422

this is sooo goood :) yuh write very well and beautifullyy loved it :)

Mama will have to get a tattoo saying meri biwi chornišŸ˜† this line cracked me up LOL :D


Thanks so much! Those are very kind wordsšŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I thought Abhi did a good thing by not revealing his name. Had he revealed it, Pragya would have have been angry at him and not enjoyed hearing the voice of a "stranger". And I think Pragya never listened to Abhi's music. Agar phone par hi usko Abhi ki awaaz itni achchi lag rahi hain toh uske gaane sunti to... she would have gone crazy about him.
Now that Bulbul-Purab story is known to Pragya I think she will do everything to get them together including fighting against Abhi who is taking Purab away from Bulbul in a way. It all depends on what Purab really wants to do though.
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Originally posted by: tiaradeol

I thought Abhi did a good thing by not revealing his name. Had he revealed it, Pragya would have have been angry at him and not enjoyed hearing the voice of a "stranger". And I think Pragya never listened to Abhi's music. Agar phone par hi usko Abhi ki awaaz itni achchi lag rahi hain toh uske gaane sunti to... she would have gone crazy about him.

Now that Bulbul-Purab story is known to Pragya I think she will do everything to get them together including fighting against Abhi who is taking Purab away from Bulbul in a way. It all depends on what Purab really wants to do though.


Yeah! He was smart about it..He was like what if this fan gets all wildšŸ˜†The way he said stranger-I love all Ekta ke puraane heroes for their strong voices-Iqbal & Shabbir have the strongest dialogue delivery<3<3
I really hope the PH records a song for both of them..instead of using some movie song..and when they are in love, he can sing that too her😳
Exactly..She'll do anything to mend Bulbul's broken heart..and this will get her in direct conflict with Abhi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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how u ppl write such crispy great writings i always write garbage
Pls don't say ex-lovers i mean about RaBul, it's hurting..it is uncertain about dat, not confirmed

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