KR SS: Complicated Love (Epilogue: page 87)

moon_cupcake thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#1
~~~Complicated Love~~~








Hello guys, I'm here with a new short story. This one is for my partner Aroma. I had to make it up to her due to some reason. Partner I hope you finally forgive me. Hope you guys like it. I don't know how this will me updated; maybe once in a week or something like that. Let's see about that later. Scroll down for the prologue.
Edited by moon_cupcake - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

520

Views

91.2k

Users

106

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

moon_cupcake thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
INDEX


Prologue: Scroll down

Chapter one: page 8

Chapter two: page 16

Chapter three: page 24

Chapter four: page 29

Chapter five: page 35

Chapter six: page 41

Chapter seven: page 48

Chapter eight: page 54

Chapter nine: page 60

Chapter ten: page 66

Chapter eleven: page 72

Chapter twelve: page 77

Chapter thirteen: page 82

Epilogue: page 87
Edited by moon_cupcake - 10 years ago
moon_cupcake thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Prologue:


"Miss. Ghai you have only two days left. And in these two days if you don't clear your loan then I'm sorry to say we will have to get you arrested."

"Arrested? But for what?"

"On the accuse of not paying back your loan amount and on top of that you tried to flee away."

"But sir, two days are not sufficient. Please extend the due date."

"Miss.Ghai we have already twice extended your due date and I'm sorry now no more. We are not asking you to pay the complete amount, just an installment. Either you pay the money or get behind the bars."

"At least listen to me.." Before she could continue they call got cut.

Exhaling a frustrated sigh, she pulled out a chair and got seated. Two minutes later another girl entering the dining room carrying two bowls in her hand. Passing one to Kriya, she sat opposite to Kriya.

"Who was it?" The other girl asked.

"Who else do you think?" She said giving the other girl an obvious look.

"Bank officers?"

"Yeah." The first one said releasing another sigh.

"Kriya I think you should take up Kabir Shekhawat's offer."

"Ananya, we have already talked about it. And you know my answer. It's a big fat 'no' dammit." Kriya replied.

"Kri but how are you going to arrange such a lump sum amount. Five lakhs isn't a small amount. And you need to pay at least one fourth of it as the installment which is nearly one lakh twenty five thousand. The bank officers have already sealed your house. You lost your job. What are you going to do then?"

"I don't know Anny. But one thing I'm sure about is that I will never agree for that offer."

"Kri, I love you and I can't afford to lose you. You are my only family after my mom died."

"I love you too Anny. But can we not talk about that offer any more, please?"

"Fine! You win."

"Thanks sissy. And what do you mean by I am your only family? I though Akshay was included in your family." Kriya teased her best friend.

"Shut up Kri." Ananya said slapping Kriya's arm playfully while blushing.

____________________________________________________________________

"Rey our ad got posted in today's newspaper." A lady informed Rey, who was sitting across the table working on his laptop.

"Yeah fine." He replied disinterested.

"Common Rey, here I am talking to you and you are so engrossed in your work that you can't even reply me properly. For God's sake it is eight in the morning. Nobody starts working so early." The girl shut his laptop down and turned his attention towards her.

"Heena, what is your problem?" Rey said in a frustrated tone.

"Rey I'm your wife and not some servant. What is wrong with you?"

"Heena nothing is wrong. Now give me back my laptop."

"No, you have been acting different lately. I want to know what's wrong?"

"My problem is that I don't want someone else to bear my baby. Moreover I'm not ready to have a child yet." He yelled.

"You are not ready yet? Are you kidding me? It's been seven years since we have got married and from the past five years I've been listening that you are not ready for a child. And you know I have some complications due to which I can't bear a child even though I can conceive." Heena yelled back.

"Yeah right. You are more concerned about yourself than your child."

"Even if I had no complications, we would still need to opt this because my dear husband doesn't likes getting intimate with his wife." She said fuming.

"You know what its useless talking to you. Now excuse me, I've got work to do." Saying this he left, leaving behind a fuming Heena.

____________________________________________________________________

"Anny where's today's newspaper?"

"It is on the table beside the couch in the living room."

"Okay."

As Kriya was reading the newspaper her eyes fell on a small advertisement in the corner of the fourth newspaper.

Wanted a surrogate.
For more details contact Mrs.Heena.
Ph:9812******

The advertisement read.



I know it's short. Like and review please.

Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
sumimita thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
res..

unres..


what was this mannu...omg..
rey married to someone else..😭

well seems like it is very interesting..👍🏼
pls update it soon
Edited by sumimita - 11 years ago
Mystic_Muse thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
res
________

unres

____________

omg! Rey is already married.

Surrogate mother, ah Kriya.

So the title is named as complicated love.

Ok. Lets see how they will fall for each other.

Waiting for the update.

Thanxs for PM.

Update soon.

____
With Love
Aishwarya
Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
FrozenTeardrops thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
This is amazing!
Please continue soon.
I just love the whole idea!
alex754 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Huh that was something verrry new
Loved it though
Great start
Very innovative concept
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Artistic_Stroke thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#8
amazing concept di
the title exactly suits the concept
looking frward to it
update soon
don girls thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Wow
Amazing update
Loved the first part
Can't wait for the part
Thanks for the PM
chand91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 4 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
vry innonetive idea
thora hatke hai
soo intrstng
thnks 4 pm
plz cnt soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

2 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

8 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

2 years ago

Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25 Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25

Hi guys, thanks for loving Dolent!! Here is my new story. As the title suggests this ff is about love and affection 💖 Soon I'll post the first...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".