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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary



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Hey Guys !! I just want to thank each n every person who read my ss. Bcoz of u all only I was able to write so many chapters I mean I never thought that I'll able to write more thank 3 chapter.But ur love comments n appreciation has made this ss wat it is now so thak u so much for ur love support n time.

I know u all want update for chapter 10 soon n even I promised to give it to Sunday. But now I don't think I will be able to update it before 2 june I know u all will kill me after knowing this. M really sorry for this bt I cnt help it as my 12 board results is going to be anounced by this or next week so m really very scared n tensed n not able to thike anything n after that I hv my AIIMS entrence test on 1june so hv to prepare for that to. Besides all this 10 chapter is the turning point of my story as it have many twist , n hv some really imp plot so it will take time. I hope u'll understand. M really very very sorry specially jaskaran karu. Thank u

i completely understand dea...evn am hell scared for my 12th boards result.. ... HOPE YOU COME OUT WITH FLYING COLURS...BEST OF LUCK PAL!!!!😳😳
Edited by J2lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: J2lover

<font size="3">i completely understand dea...evn am hell scared for my 12th boards result.. ...HOPE YOU COME OUT WITH FLYING COLURS...BEST OF LUCK PAL!!!!😳😳</font>



All the best to u too dost
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

<font color="#006600" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hey sorry for late comment!!! What an update... Amazing... What a big secret... Poor Jalal... I am feeling so
sad for him... His bro mirza committed suicide what a big twist... No wonder he
misunderstood Jodha... Sounds like Jodha is adopted child... I am little confused
here... Why Mr. Rathi said... Last Nishani...
Another confusion... Why he said you look
more beautiful than your mother... does Mr. Rathi knows Jodha's real parents... Why she wants to work in caf... so seems like
she is adopted and does not want to be depended on them ... Mr. & Mrs. Ahuja
had another daughter whose name start with J... and She might died due to cancer
or something or committed suicide... and he is misunderstanding her with some
some one else... I love entire chapter... My
heart cried for Jalal's pain... Now I have no problem with him for his harsh
betrayal... this MU does justify... but poor fellow so much in love with Jo... he is
so lost and confuse... Jodha is thinking
what is going on with his brother...seems like she doesn't know anything about
him... Amazing chapter... Mind Blowing... 👏👏👏</font>




Sorry for late reply😆...thak u so much di for ur comments ...u hv always encoureged me to write more...thank u for being here ...thank u for inspiring me...thank u aprisiating me...just thank u for everything...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

Awee.. study hard.. and trust me u ll gt good results for ua boards.. 😊

exams n studies are more important.. update can wait.. 😳
good luck! we will wait.. !!!! 🤗



Thank u so much for understanding
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gauriS

dont worry dear can understand the exam pressure. all d best😊

n we ll be waiting😃



Thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know i told u guys that i'll update after 2 june bt here i m. n this update is fo u jaskaran kaur n sorry i didnt update it on tym hope u'll forgive me this time...



<font size="3">chapter 10</font>

st xaviers collage

abdul as walking in the corridor of collage like woundedtiger. he still cant believe that jalal ws the person who did all this with her .that his own best frnd could do such a thing with a girl like jodha. the best frnd in him was not ready to believe it bt the lover in him just wanted to keep punching jalal for hurting his jodha to such n edxtend.

after a long sleepless night he decided to tlk to jalal first before doing anything else. that the reason he is here today to talk n to get some answers from his best frnd. and as salima's information jalal is in attrium.so he straight away went toward it .as the arium came into view his speed incrteased to lightning.

he rushed towards the atrrium when a familiar sound made him stop at the gate itself. he peeked inside to see wat going on . n all he was jodha his jodha she was wearing a white short skirt with a royal blue blouse .. n after seeing her he could not take his eyes off her as she was looking hot.

he was lost in admirring jodha that he forgot that he was angry. her one glimpse can do such a magic on her. bt then a voice broke his trance. he followed the sound of the voice which took him to jalal.the anger which had melted away a few sec ago again came back.

he thought of going inside n ask all the ques he wanted then n there bt on second thought he didnt go inside instead he ust stood near the door from where no one can see her.

jo n ja conversation


jalal" wat were u thinking when u were geting dressed today"
jodha " (confused) excuse me"
jalal " do u even hv any idea hw all those guys were staring at u ... bloody pigs."
jodha looked at her skirt n yes he was right it was showing her legs more then it needed.
she looks back at jalal n ask why do u care how they were looking at me??? dont u hate me"
jalal didnt see that coming this ques hers caught him off guarded. bt jalal again came back to his self n anserd her " first of all i dont care about u n secondly i do hate u bcoz i cant forget what u did with my brother"
nw jodh had, had enough "konsa bhai?? yeh kon hai jise liye tum mujhe hate karte ho????? mujhe to to0h uska naam bhi nhi pata ?? " jodha said all this almost screeaming.
jalal " mirza...mirza naam tha uska kuch yaad aya J ahuja" he said these all looking staright into her eyes as he wanted to see her expression of getting caught bt it never came instead all he can shee in thoe doe shaped innocent bt deep eyes was confusion n ques.
jodha " mirza???? i dont know any person with this name" jalal looked at her some more time n then started laughing
jalal "mein bhi kisse puch raha hun tumhe kaise yaad hoga...tum jaisi ladkiyo ke naam nhi balki unke saath spend ki hui raatein..." he was not able to complete his sentence when felt a tight slap of his left cheek. looked back at jodha

jo " how dare u ...u think m a...sob... u know wat jalal when u left me with a bleeding heart at that time too i never regreated falling in love with u bt today i curse that dayv i first met u n..."" n with that jo leftv from there.
as soon as jo left from there jalal realise wat he just said ...he coulde not believe that he said those things about yhis jodha...he stood there for some more time then made his way out from attrium


abdul pov

i hided myself behind the gate as jalal made his way out till now i was angry on jalal for doing suh a thing to jodha ... i hated him for faking his love for her n then breaking her bt now when i saw jalal standing there i can say with 100% garantee that he is madly in love with hern even she loves him too.

he didnt know whether to cry or laugh at his fate, the girl he loved so much much in love wid loves none other then hisown bff...about why jalal is blaming jodha for mirzas death???? does he think that she is the girl whom mirza loved???bt why would he think that???? n jodha n never do such a thing with anyone i'll hv to find out the truth that too very soon. afterall mere dost ke pyaar ka sawal hai.
end of pov

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one week later


one week passed n the saminar was a huge success. between this whole week many7 things happened like jalala tried to say sorry to jo for wat he said in the attrrium bt didnt let him...forget about tlking she dont even look at him. it seems like for her jalal dont even exist which was making jalal reatless with each passing sec.

bt now after a week he decided that he will not let her ignore him so with the hjelp of moti n salima he fooled jodha to agree to come at the old building of collage.

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old building of collage

abdul was siting there with some file in his hand. when surya came n asked him the reason why he called him.
abdul " i want u to put these files in jalals bag without letting him or anyone see u..k?"
surya" aye aye caption... bt iss file men hai kya ??"
abdul "jodha ki sachai"
surya "matlab??"
abdul "matlab yeh ki.." n then abdul told him what he read in jo's diary, what he saw n observed at attrium n how he decided to find the truth n reunite joja again. he also told him how he went to shimla from where jodha came to find the truth where he found out that she is not mr sameer ahujas daughter bt of his eeelder brother n howe after the death of jo's parent in a car accident 2 yrs ago when she come to delhi mr ahuja adoptedv her.

abdul " thats the reason she lives with them bt dont knopw thios mu started b/w them bt after seeing these proves jalal will get the clear picture. n everything will get back to normal with them sooner or later" with that he took his bag n was about to go when suryas ques made him stop
surya " n wat about u bhai"
abdul " wat about me ???"
surya "common bhai u know it ki agar meine yeh proves jalal; ko de diye toh jodha kabhi tumhe nhi mlegi."
abdul "surya woh kabhi meri thi hii nhi...woh jiski hai usiko meineee use de raha hun ..."
saying tjhis abdul left from there..

surya "bhai aap itne mahan ho sakte ho ki aapna pyaar kurban kar do par meine aisa kabhi nhio hone dunga...kyuki mujhe pata hai ki aap jodha se kitna pyaar karte hoo... aur rhi baat inn proves ki to mein kabhi bhi yeh proves jalal tak nhi pauchedunga with that he throw that papers out n goes from there.


old building of collage ground floor

jalal was waiting there for jodha to come when some papers fall from above n fall at hiws foot he bents down n pick it up

hit like n do comment...forgive me for any mistakes

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Edited by oshinchaudhary - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Now, Jalal will come to know about Jodha's innocence.
Feeling bad for both of them.
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a fantabulous chapter👏
amazing👏
why did you end the chapter here??😭
eager to read more 😃
plzz give us an update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444

<font size="3">it was a fantabulous chapter👏</font>

<font size="3">amazing👏</font>
<font size="3">why didyou endthe chapter here??😭</font>
<font size="3">eager to read more😃</font>
<font size="3">plzz give us an update soon😃</font>



Thank u...I ended chapter here for suspens u see😆 ...will update on 2 june
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary



Thank u...I ended chapter here for suspens u see😆 ...will update on 2 june



suspense 😭
u like watching us in such a condition right?😭😆
next update on 2 june 😲😭

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