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Posted: 11 years ago
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Have a Wonderful birthday dear 😊 .ur story is awesome. May god give some sadbudhi to CVS so they can continue the story of Ema like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART -3
After breakfast, gauri asks kalpi to get the tiffin for Raghav and kalpi will got to kitchen and gets it to Raghav.. she does not look at his face.. he has a sad smile on his face but he happily takethe tiffin and says thanks kalpi.. and goes to office.

Kalpi is about to go to her room, when gauri tells her.. kaal tume tumari pehali rasoi ka rasm poori karni hai.. chintu ko motichoor ka laddu bohot pasand hai... wohi.. before gauri completes.. kapi accidently says muche patha hai.. though she regrets saying it alound gauri laughs and says.. muche patha hai tum mere bete ko muche bhi behatar jaanthe ho.. aab jaake rest karo..

Kalpi goes to her room and is thinking ."what can i do? Deva muche kuch sooj nahi raha hai,, mein kya karu..yeah poora jammela(sorry i don't know another hindi word :(). main kaise theek karu.. muche raasta dekhaoo"... She thinks of something and goes to gauri's room.

She knocks the door and asks "tai kya main andhar aa sakthi hoon"... Gauri turns towards her and says kalpi tume ijaazat mangne ki koi zarroorat nahi hai... aur mein tumari tai nahi .. ab mein tumari maa huon.. aur muche maa hi bulaana. bolo kya hua..

Kalpi asks her - yeah sab kuch kya ho raha hai.. Raghav muche pehle mandap mein much chod ke paaki se shaadi ki abhi zabrdasthi muchse shaadi ki hai... aisa kyu ho raha hai.. ,yeah revenge jisme sab ke sab dukhi hai,, muche kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai.. Maa aap bolo..

Gauri: Kalpi waqt aane par mein tume sab samjadoongi.. par ab tume patha chalna chaiye ki kappors mere pati ko kaise maara tha.. raghav tume kuch tho bataya hoga par tum muchse suno.. "she replas(old seens shown in fb).. how ruthlessly sahil kills ragahv's dad".. Kalpi dang rah jaathi hai.. gauri says... kalpi mein chaahkar bhi unloogonko maaf nahi kar paa rahi huom kyunki woh log meri aankhon ke saamehi mere pathi ko mara tha... tears falling from her eyes..

Kalpi: maa, aap mat royiye...rest kiji.. ap so mein aur pareshaan nahi dekh sakthi.. She makes her lie down and goes back to her room..

In Raghav's office

Raghav is looking at his tiffin box and is smiling .. then ramu kaka comes and says sahab yeh paaki memsaab ne bheja hai.. aapkeli (another tiffin box").. Rgahv's face hardens and he tells ramu kaka.. aap woh baahar ke koi bikhari ko deke aao. .. abhi hi.. ramu kaka is stunned but he says... ji saab and goes out on the road... paaki is at the gate and she sees Ramu kaka giving the food she send to a beggar.. she crys and goes from there...

Kappor house..

She comes home . Kamala is there ... she crys on her lap says .. raghav gave the food she sent to beggars...Kamala says ro maat beta and hugs her..

Its evening in Singhania mansion...

Raghav is back and he goes to his room and does not find kalpi there.. he is bit worried and he rushes down finally to find her in kitchen standing next to gauri... and he feels so happy to see the two women he loves the most standing next to each other.. he says mom,kalpi , i am back.. will frshen and come.. am very hungry

Gauri- theek hai beta.. jaldi aajaoo.. aaj mein sabji.. kalpi is instructions ke muthabik ki hai.. kal Rasoi ki rsam ki baad.. kalpi hi sabkuch sambalegi... haina beta (she asks kalpi) and she says nothing and silence is taken as a "yes"

Everyone is having dinner and Paaki calls raghav on his cell and he cuts the phone without receiving...Raghav and kalpi is in bedroom . He asks Kalpi.. tum theek ho na.. and kalpi saysmein theek ho sakthi hai kya... Raghav muche sach sach bathaoo tum mere tere aur paaki ke zindai ke saath yeh kaisa maazak kar rahai hai.. aaj aai ne muche bataya kaise kappor ne aapki baba ko mara.. mein tumara gussa samj sakthi huon par tum paaki se shaadi karna.. yah much samj nahi aathi..

Raghav gives her a defeated look and says Kalpi muche vishwas karo.. kuch aur din keliye.. ek cheez hai jo main ab tume nahi batta sakthi kyunki maa ne mucse kasam li hai.. par meri maaki aur bappa ki kasam.. tumare allawa meri zindagi mein aur ek laadki is janam mein kya saat janam thak nahi hogi..

After saying this.. he picks up the pillow and goes and lie on the couch.. Kalpi is totally confused.. Raghav again says.. goodnight kalp.. as always love you.. and closes his eyes..

Kalpi also goes and lie down on bed and is looking at raghav.. and thinks.. kuch tho baat hai jo mein jaanthi.. pata lagana hoga... Ab vittal baba, dada aur aai kya kar rahi hogi...woh log shayad much taad bhi nahi kar raha hoga... itna gussa jo huon muchse... maaf karna baba.. mere paas aur koi raasta nahi hai... slowly she drifts off to sleep..

TO BE CONTINUED .. HOPE YOU LIKE IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked it. continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello newfan can i knw ur name can i give u dis 🤗 n dis 👏 n dis 👍🏼 n dis ❤️ n dis ⭐️ n dis 😳 n dis 😃 coz sweetheart u deserve dis al plzzz join creative coz actually cvs r pathetic 😡
Well done yaar story ise kehte hai everythin perfect revenge ka revenge n luv ka luv n also rags didnt have chose 1 coz he chose both at d same time n no character assasination al perfect 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
hey its awesome.. i so hope the same happens in d serial as well

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