MY SOLUTION FOR THE CURRENT MESS :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghav kidnaps kalpi and marries her ritualistic way (phere-mangalsutra,maag ..etc) a bit forcefully you can say(kalpi will protest but let us say raghav gets his way).. when the marriage is over damla and paaki and rest of the gang reaches there... and starts her bashan about how this is not a marraige ..
Raghav: mereliye yehi shaddi hai. Paaki ke saat jo kiya woh ek deal tha .. just like one of the may deals i do in business... and asks paaki.. Paaki kya meine tere saat phere liye the(she says no), kya maine tere gale mein mangalsutr daala tha(she says no ), maang bara tha (she says no) .. par yeh sab meine baapa ke saamne Kalpi ke saat dil se kiya hai.. mereliye agar koi meri pathni ho .. woh sirf or sirf kalpi hai.. aur koi nahi..

aur haan kamala maa.. mein kalpi ko le ja raha huon apne ghar... kapi is standing speechless.. and raghav takes her and goes home where gauri kalpi ka grihapravesh karwatha hai.. aur usse raghav ke kamare mein chod detha hai..

Kalpi is still not able to digest all that has happened... she is lost and then Raghav comes to their room.. and kalpi says what did you do raghav.. tume lagta hai ki aise zabrsdast mujse shaadi karkli tho mein tume apna pati maan lenge .. nahi...

Raghav calmly says.. muche paatha hai meine galthi ki hai par mein sirf tume chantha huon aur tumare bagair jee nahi sakta kalpi... aur jab thak tum muche maaf karke apna nahi banooge.. mein tume haat nahi laggonga.. ek hi kamare mein hum pati patni nahi sahi dost banke rehalenge ... aur jaldi hi mein sab kuch theek kaloonga(paaki matter)

Kapli nahi.. mein yeha se chali jaooongi..

Raghv gets tough and says.. aisa sochna bhi nahi...muche paatha hai tum meri sherni ho par main bhi kam nahi huon. jis din tum aisa karoge and mein chawl thod doona.. tum nahi rahi tho muchme kuch bhi achayi nahi bachegi.. agar tum aisa nahi chathe ho tho kahi nahi jaana..

saying this he takes a pillow and go to the couch and says good night kapli.. love you, tum mere saamne ho bass.. aaj mein chaiyan se soopaaooonga and lie down to sleep

Kalpi is thinking and thinking and in between.. she looks at raghav and he is sleeping peacefully.. though angry she can't take her eyes off him and her heart says... don't know why i still love you so much raghav !!! but will never show it... :)

The Story begins /... how is it guys

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Autumm thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superbb...aisa hotha to bohut khushi miltha..:😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 dear... cvs ki story se toh bahut achi...👍🏼😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent! Please sell this story to PD and her creatives so we get a good show!!! You did a much better job than CV. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it dear...a big hug for u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh man... u stole my plot to my other ff... awe
great minds thinks alike 😉
Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please make it an OS and continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_remix

Please make it an OS and continue...


in my plot, he is not married to pakhi, but will forcefully marry kalpi... have lots of chapters before i reach tht scene. its a love hate relationship between them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guys.. i just wrote what i keep hoping !!! Let me continue...
PART 2

Damla and Paaki in Kappor house ... paaki crying on damla's lap... bhoo hoo hoo.. kamla maa yeah kya ho gaya... ab muche raaghav kabhi nahi apnayega,,,
kamala asks .. ro maat paaki.. tu chod.. ab soja... aur tumne yeh baat pehale kyu nahi kahi ki tumare saat raaghva ka mandir mein shaadi nahi hua.. woh kamala ma.. jab court mein shaadi hogaya tab mein aur cguch nahi sochi !!! (typical of her)..

theek hai.. hum kaal sochenge kya kana hai.. ab tum soja

Next day morning.. kalpi is till asleep and raghav comes and keep looking at her lovely face and says "kalpi tum mereliye kya ho tum nahi jaanthi.. tum mere saat ho tho mein zinda huon.. baas tum mere saat ho.. isse zyada much aur kuch nahi chahiye... tum much apnane mein puri zindagi bhi liya tho bhi koi shikuwa nahi .. bas mere saame rahna.. i love you.. and good morning...

Kalpi's eyes are still closed ..and raghav goes to Washroom to freashen up.. Kalpi opens her eyes as soon as he goes (she has heard everything).. she feels panges in her heart...but says.. raghav mein jaantha huon par jab thak mein tume sahi rasste pe nahi laate aur paaki ki zindagi nahi sudharthi mein tumse door hi rahoonga.. mein bhi tume bohit chaata huon !!!

She gets up and sees raghav coming out of the bathroom after bath(he is shritless) and they look at each other and kalpi looks away (raghav has a small smile on his face seeing that). She just walks past him to the bathroom and rags just looks at her.

Raghav goes down to the hall and gauri is waiting for him on breakfast table.. Raghav is very happy and sits down with gouri.. gauri asks him where is kalpi . He says she is taking s bath.. she asks- tum khush ho na beta .. and raghv replies"bohot ma".. and she smiles..

Tab damla barges into the house and calls Kalpi... kalpi comes down the stairs in a new saree (has taken bath)... and kamal tells her -"tu chal mere saat... yeh tumara ghar nahi hai.. paaki ka hai.. tum abhi isi waqt mere saat chal.. kalpi looks at raghav.. raghav gives a stern look and shakes his head in a no .. kalpi remembers what raghav told about chawl if she leaves and tells kamala .. nnahi aai.. mein nahi aa sakthi...

Kamala: surprised .. kyu nahi ... kya tum maine diya hua sara sanskar bhool gayi.. kisi aur ki pati ke rahogi tum...

Kalpi: closes her eyes and says... ab woh mere bhi pati hai.. bappa ke saamne woh mera maag bara hai.. mein nahi aa sakthi..

Kamala: aaj se mereliye tum mar chuki ho.. mera sirf ek hi beti hai paaki and she storms out..

Kalpi lets out a cry when she goes and gauri comes and hold her shoulder.. roo maat kalpi.. shayd tum muchse bhi gussa ho par bohot kuch baate hai jo tum ab nahi jaanthi.. aur tum jo bhi mere baare mein soche .. mereliye tum bohot khass ho.. meri bahu se bhi jaayda tum meri beti ho...

Kalpi just looks at her - and touches her feet.. she blesses her and says ab aake nashta karo..

she silently comes and have her breakfast with Raghav and gauri..

TO BE CONTINUED ..HOPE YOU FOLKS LIKE IT
Edited by ANewFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue plz its awesome 😊

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