pyaar means dosthi part5 upd on pg:10 (21-05)

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan
ok guys my exams are over I will update it today or tomorrow thank U for all

will be waiting

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raji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

sorry for being late dear updating now

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raji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Ashlok ff : Pyaar means dhosthi

part 5:

Shlok and aastha entered in to school.It was a huge building.It has very big ground where the childrens are playing whole heartedly.Shlok and aastha seems very exiting,their smile was a evidence of it.Their eyes roams all over the ground.
Niranjan ,shlok and aastha entered into office room they got their admission.Their smile has been vanished when they come to know aastha and shlok were enrolled in different classes.
Aasths could not control herself she want her shlok always with her.Aastha held niranjans hands and start pleading "Baba no ,I never goto another class,I want to be with shlok always".
Shlok : Ha, papa if aastha is not with me there i also don't want to go there.
Niranjan :shaanth ho ja hiye,meri Bache i would talk to head master to enroll U both in same class .
Niranjan went office room and discussed about this then came back to ashlok.
Niranjan : Aastha,shlok listen to me ur head master went to attend some meeting he will be return only in evening once he will back I will talk about this to him and I will make both of U will be in same class afterwards .
Shlok : No papa,please agar yahi Baath hein tho we will come tomorrow na
Aastha :Ha,baba chaliye we will come tomorrow.
Niranjan : Aastha and shlok this ur first day in school so U hav to attend ur class .Tum do no ko mujpe barosa hein na
Ashlok nodded their heads at same time
Niranjan : ok then goto urs class rooms ,U will be in same class from tomorrow yeh mera wadha hein.
Suddenly the school bell rangs ashlok look each other .
shlok took something from his packet and place his folded hand before her, when he open his hand it is a chocolate after sees this aastha smiled .
Shlok too smile and caresses her nose . Aastha held his hand and handed the chocolate which she bought for him.They chuckles at each other.
They went to their respected classes.
Shlok entered in to class and sit in to first bench .At first he was hesitate to speak others but soon he starts mingled with them .
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At other side aastha enter in too her class when she entered all the students were already seated only two places were remains one at first bench and other one is at last bench.
Aastha sits in first bench she is very nervous.she turns to look others who were besides her.There she saw two girls seated next to her. She just smile look at them.
First girl: he ladki yeh sonali ki place hein .utao yeha se
Second girl :hah wo athe hi hogi tum jake last bench mein betjao.
Aastha : I come first so I will sit here usse last bench mein jage betne keliye kaho
The two girls fummed in anger.sonali entered into the class found her which is already occupied by some one then went sit last bench.
Just then the teacher came in .All the students gets up and wishes her.Then she told to all that give their intro to each others.All the students were introduced themselves.
Only aasthas bench is left.The first girl went to the stage and starts introdues her .
Hai ,I am swathi Bafna.U can call me swathi.And she points the next girl who sit besides Aastha , she is Adhiti Bafna my twin sister.Then aditi came to the stage and said Hai, am Adhiti Bafne u all can call me Adhiti.
Now it is Aasth's turn she seems very nervous .Her lips starts trembling ha..h..hai friends.My name is Aastha kirloskar.u can call me Aastha.
swathi : Aur nahin tho isse "short hair" kehke bhi bhula sakthe hein.
All the students were starts laugh.Aastha eyes fills with tears she hardly control her tears.But her eyes seems like a fool with her tears,she returns to her place.
It is lunch hour.Swathi and Adhiti with their friends Adithya,and sonali comes near Aastha ."How dare U ,tum hamare saath betogi.u short hair,hah... We will give U 5min Teri saman utao aur chupchap yaha se nikal jaoo"warna...
Aatha : warna,what will U do hah..i will not go any where .This is my place samji tum...said while rubbed her nose.
Swathi :Tum nahi jaoogi ...heina right then we will make U leave this place.
Then adhiti just pull her ribbon which was tied on her one side hair.
Aastha :yeah U... Mein tumein nahi chodungi...
Aastha pushed aaditi and swathi they directedly landed on the floor.
Aastha saw shlok near her classroom door she went to see him.
He held her hands and lead towards the ground.They sat under a tree and starts have their lunch
Shlok : Tum kya soch rahi hoon...
Aastha :Shlok class pe two girls hein mujse har waqth panga leh rahe hein.oh log muje short hair kheke bulathe hein...
She said to him all the things which were happen still now from the morning.
Shlok : Aastha main hoon na ... .i will not let anything happen to U.pls eat na the lunch hour is going to end now.
After finishing their lunch they went to their classes.
Aastha is seated at first bench intensely. swathi and Adhiti were fumming seeing her next to them.
The teacher entered in to class room and the two periods really went well.
The school bell rangs every student came running .When aastha try to come out from her class swathi,adhiti block her way.They are with their friends .
Aadhiti : Hume push kiya na yello...
she push aastha she hit the corner of the bench.And swathi with her friends pull aasthas ribbon roughly and starts shout ...short hair ...short hair.
Aastha starts crying badly she came running towards the exiting door.
When she saw shlok there she hugged him and start crying .After seeing aasthas condition he became mad.
Shlok : Aastha kya hua y are U crying tell me na yaar.
Aastha : while sobbing shlok wo swathi and adhiti ...aastha told everything to him shlok became very angry .He literally dragged her towards class room .
But they are already left from there
Shlok : Dehko aastha,I will not let them spare.Tum ro math.Kal hum ek ki class mein rahenge na hum un logo ko dekh lenge.
Aastha : sachi shlok
Shlok : Ha meri ma pls ro math
Then niranjan,anjali and avdooth ,kalindi all reach the school for pick up shlok and aastha.
They reach their home Aastha hugs kalindi tightly and starts crying and told every thing to her. mom mein uss class pe nahin jaoongi .I dont want to go there.
Kalinthi : Nahin aastha ,kal sab kuch teek ho jayaga .shlok bi Teri hoga hein na tho kya Baath hein.Tum bus aaram se so jaoo kal sab kuch teek ho jaiga
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Next day morning At school...
All the procedures went well.Finally shlok and aastha is in same class room.
(Aastha points out swathi and aadhiti to shlok)
Aastha : They are there...shlok
Seeing them shlok smirks..and drag aastha towards them.
Shlok :Aastha say sorry to them
Aastha : shlok what R U saying ? While sobbing...
Shlok : Aastha just say sorry...
Aastha bides sorry to them then she withdraw her hand from shloks hold then sit next to swathi and aadhiti.
Shlok : Aastha chalo.. . we will sit in last bench...
Aastha could not belive her eyes..she definitely not expect this that to from shlok...
She went to last bench and sits their
Shlok to went there and sat opposite to aastha on boys row.
Shlok only stares aastha but she is angry on shlok so she refused to turn his side.
In lunch hour...
They didnot even spoke a word
Shlok watch adhiti and swathi gang left from class room then he rushed to aastha.
He had a fevicol bottle in his hand his chest his heaving for breath.He held aasthas hand and drag her to some where .But she regret to move.
shlok forced her .she struggling in his grip.
They reach were swathi and her gang having their lunch.Aastha looks him confusingly
He slowly went to their place and took a brush from his packet and slowy held sawthi and adithi's braid with out their knowledge and applied that gum with the help of brush .
But they were unaware of it shlok smiles mischiefly to aastha and fix their braid together then went near to aastha .Then shlok and aastha hide behind the tree.
Swathi and adhiti had their lunch while chatting with others finally they finished thier lunch.
They get up from their place and about move they feel some one is pulling their braid .They have a sevear pain on their head.They struggling to move on seeing their condition every person in the ground cracked up.
They felt really very insult.Then shlok came towards them with aastha.
Shlok : Can we help U ...
Swathi &Adhiti :Please kuch karo please.
If U want to free from this then maffi maango aastha se ...he said in frim tone.
Swathi &Adhiti : sorry aastha...
Shlok took a scissors from his packet and handed its to aastha to cut their hairs.
Shlok : Aastha cut their hair..with the mischievous glind.
Then aastha cut their hairs by the scissors
Swathi and Adhiti ran from there.
Aastha while hugging shlok "thank U... thank U ...thank U ...shlok"
Then she kiss his cheeks then they hold their hands and move towards the main gate .

Precap :

Sports day celebration , swathi & Adhiti's revenge plan

Guys please command I want to know what was U thinging about it ur words means a lot to me .criticism also welcome plzzz...comment guys😊😉

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Optimist_d

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

me firsttt!!!!!!🥳

such a cute update it is!!😳

they called astha short hair, so shlok made astha cut their hair.. lol. after all, he is shlok agnihotri.

waiting for sports day celebrations..

Edited by pranud - 11 years ago

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seeheeryou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Awesome.. Loved this naughty little ashlok! Waiting for further updates..
Thanks for the pm

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mawraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Waiting for sports day
Lovely update ❤️

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raji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pranud
me firsttt!!!!!!🥳
such a cute update it is!!😳
they called astha short hair, so shlok made astha cut their hair.. lol. after all, he is shlok agnihotri.
waiting for sports day celebrations..

I glad U like it 😆