pyaar means dosthi part5 upd on pg:10 (21-05)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai friends this is my first story i dont konow how was it .i make it because my dear buddy meerb.Because of her and roshini i start to write this .pls dears if i make any mistakes just inform me .Any comments it may be like or dis like just post it i want to know how is it
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Niranjan and avthood left from that place talkig with each other their wifes are selecting jewels.It is niranjan & anjalis 2nd anniversary so they are here to select the jewellery for tonights party.anjali holding 8month baby boy sholk in her lap .kalindhi is holding 3 months baby cutipie aastha in her lap .Anjali and kalindi is so much involved in their chatting and selection mean while the 8 months baby sholk raised his hands and make patterns on air towards cutipie aastha she starts giggles .Then he slowly raised his hand and held her soft hands in to his then both were start to communicate with their own language.
When the mummys finished their selection they getup from their place but our baby asolks bond is unbreakable they still holding their hands.
After seeing this niranjan points out it and said to avthood that "hey avthood watch it how our babies holding their hands ,abi se hi dosthi nibana sathe Hein " .
Avtood also watch this and proudly said " q nahi hum dono ki dosthi kitni saal ka Hein 10 saal ki dosthi Hein hamara. Tho hein obivious hein hamari bache bhi hamari thara dosti nibana chathe hein".after this every smiles and accept it.
When anjali try to loosend their grip they hold more tighter.so they give up .niranjan is drives the car avthood besides him.while anjali and kalindhi on backseat but their little buddy still holding each other .when kalindi try breaks it aastha pouts then she watch sholk was begin to cry .They don't know wat to do so they give up and reach niranjans home place our sleeping beauties on same carts .They even don't know breaking their bonds was not so easy.because it has no limits its for eternity
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...it was so cute yaar...baby ashlok ...awesome concept please contine soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

awww...it was so cute yaar...baby ashlok ...awesome concept please contine soon dear

meerab U like it .i don't know how was it I post it only because of u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww this is really nice thanks for posting it baby Ashlok are so cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeah i totally loved ur concept ...yeh baby ashlok na super cute hai dear
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great start plz continoue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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they are so sweey little shlok and astha please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cho chweet!!! 😳
Continue soon dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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roshini u changed ur name hah
Edited by asholksfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asholksfan

u changed ur name hah

i just add a word😊 in my name

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