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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 12 B is very emotional
Taani fighting with her feelings Rey is so sad
On one hand she just want to love Him and on the next she can't forget that he is a monster
Aww Rey can't see Taani tears...
This is going to be interesting to see what Rey does next
I like that he didn't held Taani captive but instead take her home
Beautiful update
Edited by ...Natasha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hola TaaReyians :D

Dedicated to Vini Di :)


Chapter 12 C : Revelations

She was sitting there in balcony looking at stars.Physically she was siting there but her mind was wandering elsewhere.Past two days were moving in front of her eyes.The horrible days of her life.

When her BFF,her life,her soul sister disappeared she was going crazy thinking about the reasons behind her disappearance.She knew HE was behind this but she had no proof against him.It was then she realized how helpless she was.She couldn't do anything to save her soul sister.That moment of helplessness was the worst experience of her life,till now.

But when she was near to lose the last thread of sanity her friend appeared on their door.She was wrong back then,if helplessness was the worst experience then watching her friend crying like dead was even worst than the worse.

She couldn't help but curse that b*stard for making her friend like this,lifeless.

For next three house her friend didn't spoke a word.She was just lying on sofa keeping her head on her lap and weeping silently.

And she was helpless again.She just couldn't do anything to make her feel any better.

And when at last after crying for house she broke her silence it was a moment of dread for both her and Swayam.

Here they were going mad to Trap him but he knew everything.Their work,efforts,sacrifices nothing was paid off.It all went in vain.

And the worst was that that Taani had to face so much.

~

Swayam:"Coffee"

He extended a mug of coffee and Sharon took it without a word.He sat beside her on floor and started looking at sky too.

Sharon:"She believes her mother lives in one of those stars"

She said staring at sky.She didn't even blinked once and Swayam was confused whether she spoke for real or was he hallucinating.

Sharon:"I promised myself to be always to protect her at every step.And when she needed me the most I couldn't do anything for her"

She said as a tear escaped her eyes.She wiped it harshly.It was not her.She is not the one to cry over matters.She has always been the strong one.The protector of Taani.

Sharon:"I failed,Swayam.I failed as a friend"

She said as the dam of her tears broke.

Swayam embraced her in his arms and held her close to him.

Swayam:"Shhh...No,you didn't.You are there for her.You always have been.You are a champion,Sharon.You didn't failed"

He said patting her back and she broke down totally in his arms.Crying madly on her loss.

Swayam:"We'll find a way out.I am sure we will.We can't break down like this.She needs us.She needs you.More than anything else she needs you.You have to be strong for her.You have to."

He said wiping her tears.Cupping her face he looked into her eyes.She smiled a faint smile and nodded her head understanding him.

They both kept sitting there for the rest of the night.

~

Radhika entered inside his room in morning with coffee in her hand.She knocked twice but there was no answer from there.Opening the door she entered inside but the sight in front of her was not at all pleasing.

Her brother was sleeping there on bar stool resting his head on bar counter.A glass full of liquor in his hands.Probably he passed out drinking last night on the bar itself.

Keeping the coffee aside she made her way towards her brother and looked at his face.His face was pale and lifeless.She knew her brother very well.The work he is in and the kind of life he lives.He never allowed anyone to invade his private space but she was always successful to look through the facade.She knew how meaningless his life is.How he screams at nights with nightmares of his past.His bad past still haunts him day and nights but still he behaves like nothing affects him.

He never showed his vulnerable side to anyone.He was always the strong one.Nothing ever affected him so much.But now she could she the wall crumbling down.And there was some hope that a soft fragile heart still exists in his stone body.
But she was clueless that what made him this vulnerable.

Keeping her thoughts aside she combed her hands through his hair to soothe out his pain.

Feeling the movement he started gaining conscious.

~
He opened his eyes and looked around the surroundings.He was still sitting in balcony and Sharon was beside him.Her head resting on his shoulder.

Giving a look at watch he started waking her up.

It was past 12 in afternoon and Taani might be up by then.He shook Sharon and she got up.

Swayam:"Taani"

He said pointing towards Taani's room's door.
Sharon nodded and got up to have a look on her.

As Sharon made her way towards room Swayam too got up.He looked outside.It was raining badly.The sky was dark with clouds all around and there was not a single ray of light anywhere.

He made his way towards kitchen.

From the time Taani disappeared only last night he and Sharon slept.Not peacefully but at least they gave some relaxation to their bodies.Their minds were still muddled with confusion and fear.Fear of losing their precious friend and confusion about their path ahead.

It was no way they would allow Taani to continue what they started.But it was even more hard to take her away from that beast.

~
Sharon entered the room but it was empty.She checked inside wash but it was empty too.

The first came to her mind scared her the most.She rushed out to Swayam without taking a breath.

Sharon:"She is not in"

She said breathless. Swayam gave her a fearful look and then took out his phone to call Taani.

First no one answered but later after a lot of rings it was answered but a male voice came from the other end.

Swayam:"I'll kill you b*stard.Tell me where is she or else I won't spare you this time"

He said in one breath.Sharon was confused as well as scared with his outburst.The possibilities of Taani being with that monster was scaring her more n more.

Rey:"What the hell you mean where is she? I left her at your place,didn't I?"

He said in his ice cold voice.But the fear was engulfing him also.He made his way towards his car to leave for her place.

Swayam:"Don't you dare play your games with me.Tell me where the hell is she?"

He said first time getting so much angry.

Rey:"If this is your some silly trick than beware.I won't spare you this time"

He warned and hung up the call.

As he reached down near his building the first thing he did was held on his men by collar.

Rey:"Where is she?"

He asked choking the man badly.

Man1:"Sir,She is inside.She didn't came out from building"

The man answered fearing his own life.He left the second guy and took the first one in his grip.

Rey:"You are here to keep an eye on her.And now she is not here"

He spoke in his dangerous tone.The man shook his head and tried to speak.

Man2:"Sir,She is inside.We didn't saw her going out.I swear we didn't even blinked once.She must be inside somewhere"

He said praying for his life.

Rey:"She better be inside or else I'll make you both beg for your death"

He said and left both of them there.Taking quick strides he went to her floor in front of her apartment.His men following him.Adi also reached there by then.

~

He was ringing the bell like maniac.After some bells someone opened the door from inside.

Sharon:"Where the hell were y..."

Sharon's words died in middle as she saw Rey and many other men in black standing there on her door.

Swayam was out to look for Taani and Sharon stayed at home to be on a safe part that if Taani came back so it was important for someone to attend her.

Sharon:"What are..."

She couldn't complete as Rey pushed her off door and walked past inside.

His men started looking around like maniacs.After five minutes of search they concluded that she was not inside apartment.

Rey:"Check the whole damn building.I want her here in an hour or your better start praying for your god damn lives"

He shouted in rage and his each and every man get started with work.

~

She was sitting there soaked in rain water.Knees folded and arms holding onto knees and eyes staring at sky.Even the rain was not hurting her eyes and she was trying to look up at sky.To spot her mother somewhere.To get at least one glimpse of her dead mother.Her sane part of mind was telling her go in her apartment coz it was impossible to spot stars in day.But the insane part was making her believe that she was near her mother as long as she is under the sky.

The events of past some days were making her mind go crazy.

She doesn't want to think about them but memories of those days are not leaving her.

The more she wants to forget that dreadful event the more it haunts her.She closed her eyes finally to block out all the memories of that day and fell unconscious.

~
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Hello again :)
I hope you liked the update.I know No TR here.But from next update there will be TR only.This part was needed to explain everyone's point of story.Rey and Taani's monologue will be up in next part.Their solo and duo scenes will be up from now on.

And as for Taani-She is weak now emotionally as well as physically because this whole happened with her suddenly.But soon she will become strong and will fight for right.

Yep,she is in love with Rey but neither would confess it so soon.The real story has started now.So,get ready for the real drama.

Hope you'll keep loving this story :D :*

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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh pakka trapped ka hi upsate tha na??
Well if yes yeh update relationships ko potray kar rha tha
Bro-sis (Radhika n Rey)
Friendship (Sharon n Taani)
Love ( SS)
Mother-daughter (Taani n her mom)
Rey ko plzz calm karo uski t usi building mein hai
Ptha chale t ko dudne ke liye building demolish karwa de
Waiting for tr scenes n momologues
Update soon n thnx for d scrap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Titli, Finally Updated 😃after ditching me two times
But must say ur update plus that u dedicated to me compensated it.
A bear hug 🤗 for that.

For update from where to start I really dont have words to begin👏👏👏👏👏👏
Mashalla what a description of emotion
The Sharon helplessness that she was not able to protector taani from all the misery she had gone through.
The feeling of guilt that she could be the protector she was claiming to be.
The way she cried in the arms of swayam was so touchy.
Atleast happy to see swayam as a back support for both the girls
Loved the way he control and support sharon 😊😊

Second was Radhika the sister, Her concern for rey
The way u describe that as a big sis she always use to read his face and can easily come to know about his Life.
Radhika had some hope for her bro.
All thanx to taani who had made him so vulnerable and made his Rock stone heart to bit a Soft one.

Rey is in deadly love wid taani. The way he reacted on taani missing was superb.
Swayam and Rey the complete angst convo was so coool😎
Just hope he finds taani before he kills someone for no reason as taani is in building

Taani inner fight at the end was amazingly shown. The way she connected herself near to her mother by sitting under the sky was just perfectly touching.
As per ur note in the end want to see taani stand against the devil rey. Their tashan and specially the love feeling which she will try to hide will be the best part to see...
Bold and Strong Taani Coming soon... Waitinggg

Loved ur update soo much
Waiting for full TR update
So better update soon

Love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
It ws jst awesome.luvd it.waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unress...
Heart warming update..
Tho i loved Sharon's concern for Taani..
Rey's over protective side scares me...
But where is Taani exactly ?
Update soon 😳
Edited by diyataarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It ws jst awesome.luvd it.waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
sharon's love n care fr taani ws so visible
it s a really awesome bond
then rey n his hurtful paststill haunting him
hope he finds taani soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg this is getting more interesting day by day
rey's dark past i really wanna know it
i loved d updt
n ya i m waiting for tr parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... Luvd it... :)

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