~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed' - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read the three updates they are amazing
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the chapter 3 was superb... this suspense and they are married...
means kriya and rey and sharon and swayan but are being possessive and try to
say it but all in vain becuase of their ego and again got angry but what this twist
that kriya and sharon are sisters and i think they had not reveal this yet...
interest... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supab kr engejed n swaron married love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just read all ur updates at one go...😊

Loved the twist in the tale...Reyam hate each other...something i couldn't imagine before reading this👏
Krisha trying to bring them together...even better😃

I loved the jealousy chapter...kitna ego yaar...won't react even when the other is badly heart...aisa kya hey jiska wajase Reyam itna gussa hai????must be something really big!!!!

Krisha sisters...SS married & KR committed yet don't know abt Krisha..interesting😲

I was actually shocked with the fact that they r married and engaged itself...uparse even swayam being Sharon's husband doesn't know abt krisha...how y? kriya didn't attend their marriage or wat?😲😲


I just get a feel that even reyam might be relatives...looking forward for ur next update...
want to know how reyam react😳
Edited by rajeshwaribr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4- Truth Reveals

The morning was as usual a daily routine for both sisters. Kriya didn't spoke with Sharon as she let Swayam to enter in the house which Kriya never wanted. Sharon tried a lot to speak with her, but she is a stubborn girl and will not easily get affect with Sharon's emotional blackmails. Though she loves Sharon a lot, but sometimes her stubbornness overcomes on her love for Sharon. She knows that Sharon and Swayam are meant to be together and due to the circumstances they are apart, but letting him inside their house was not at all needed. She had warned Sharon a many time but Sharon never obeys her. Of course they are twins but she wants Sharon not to get affected at all by Swayam's emotional words. Yes he is her bff and she can do anything for him, but she too loves Sharon a lot and Swayam is the cause of Sharon's condition. He made Sharon to abort her child who was in her fetus, only because of his so called reputation, if he wanted to maintain his reputation then why did he married Sharon and that too without taking his parents' permission, she very well know her bff who is never going to reveal this marriage in front of his parents and isn't it great that her lovely sis is a fool that she agree for the marriage, isn't Swayam a ba****, no she don't want to use this word but if the truth comes in front of the world then he will be called, but she is happy that her bff has share everything with her, even about his marriage with Sharon. She is really lucky to have a bff like Swayam, but she is also a sister and wants Sharon's happiness. And moreover her parents did a big mistake of giving permission to Swaron. If she wouldn't have come in time, them today might she would have lost Sharon forever, it may be fate that she reach in time. But Swayam is also right in his place as he thought that Sharon is using him only to impress Rey, and Reyam are the biggest enemy of each other. And the enmity started when they knew that they are step brothers. And if any how both will get to know about her and Sharon to be sister then may they hate them more and also she and Sharon might lose their bff and love.

"Kriya...ek baar mujhse baat to karle" Sharon's voice made her come out of her long thoughts and remembering the past, they are in the cab and heading to the college.

"Sharon...mujhe abhi koi baat nahi karni hai" she looked outside through the window. "bhaiya...yahan rok dijiye" she said to the driver, as from here both sis need to go to the college apart from each other.

"Kriya..." Sharon calls her and she looks back. Sharon gave a tight hug, their eyes became teary.

"Sharon...main tujhse bahut pyar karti hun...tu janti hai na" she said breaking the hug, and kissed Sharon's forehead, Sharon smiles and blinks.

"apna khayal rakhna" she said, getting down from the cab.

"tu bhi" Sharon said biding a good bye to her.

Sharon reached the college, and sees her gang discussing something seriously, and finds Rey sitting in a bench with a serious look in his face, what cause her gang so serious she wondered and headed to them.

"Guys...anything serious?"

They handed a paper to her, she sees it and gets shocks, it wasn't a paper instead a notice where the sizzlers wanted to have a faceoff challenge with them. All sits on their respective seats when the Sizzlers enter with a bang, and give a challenging look to the dazzlers.

Rey sees Kriya also wants them to do so. First he thought maybe she can stop this, but then he gets to know that she has decided the face off. Yes he know well that she wants to take her revenge on him because of yesterday conversation when he told her to stay away from Swayam, he cursed himself of doing so, she is Kriya and she never spares anyone who go against her bff, ofcourse who will know more than him about her. But his mind again says that Swayam even know her better than him. as a result Kriyam bonding is much better than Kriyaansh, well now who will make him understand that Kriyaansh is Kriyaansh and no one can take the place of Rey in Kriya's heart.

"nahi Swayam...hame ye karna hai" she said, looking to the dazzlers, she knows that he will glance her and she is going to avoid him.

"par Kriya...humne ye decide kiya tha ki...we will make decision together...not you alone can do this" Swayam annoyed said as she has made this face off and now is stubborn for the face off, though he don't want to hurt Sharon more but because of Kriya he will hurt her, which he don't want to do.

"Swayam...maine kehe diya na...aur ye mat bhulo team meri wajah se hai..." she didn't wanted to say but said it, which made Swayam quite, he hadn't expected Kriya to say something like this to him.

"Fine...aaj bol hi diya tune Kriya..." he is hurt that her bff says those words but does he know that she did it for him.

"han to kya galat kaha...waise bhi ye meri team hai...aur tu sirf mera assistant samjha...to main jo kahungi tu wahi karega" she ordered him and it's now came to his self respect, he couldn't control more and thus raise his hand to slap her.

He was stopped by a soft hand, he looks and find Sharon.

"Bas bahut ho gaya...ab aur nahi" Sharon said, jerking his hand. She goes to Kriya who in scared has closed his eyes. How can she see Kriya being beaten by him, so she decided to help Kriya.

Kriya looks and is shocked, as now lots of question will arise in many of the eyes, most importantly in Reyam's eyes and yes it was true, they frowns about what made Sharon react for Kriya. Kriya jerks Sharon's hand in order to make everyone sigh, but Sharon is Sharon right and she is now not going to tolerate these divide policy with her sister, so she has also made her mind not to listen Kriya at all. she holds Kriya's shoulder and take her out of the class, all followed them, Kriya knew now that her sis is not going to listen anything now, both sits in a cab and headed to their home, both team with Reyam followed them, and then Swayam noticed they are heading towards Sharon's house. He wonders why Sharon is taking Kriya to her house.

Both reach at their home, and Sharon was about to close the door, when she finds both the team standing in front. All were having a confuse look, she gave a sigh and then allows them to came inside. And then they find Kriya sitting in the couch, she didn't notice any one of them.

"shar...ham sabk kya jawab denge?...tune dekha na sab kaise dekh rahe the hame?" she unknown of the presence of her friends split out.

"Kri...chup"

"kya chup han... agar sabko pata lag jata ke hum behen hain to pata hai na kya ho jata"

Oh oh, what she did. Now Sharon looks at all, whose face were shocked, and more of Reyam's. They had not thought that a day will come like this when a second shock will be revealed to them. it was beyond their imagination, and now what ringing in their mind is if Krisha are sisters then why they supported them, without giving any hint to anyone of being sisters.

"kriya...kya ye sach hai?" swayam asked, that's she looks him in shock. She didn't want this and now she herself told this, her gaze turns to Rey, who was looking at her in disbelief.

"erm...Swayam...wo-baat-ye-hai-ke-ke...main-main aur Shar-Sharon..." she almost stammer while saying. She has now feared of the big trouble coming in their life, especially in her and Rey's life.

"Kriya...main batati hun... han... hum dono twins' hain."

"That means tumne dhoka diya?" Rey said, looking at Sharon.

"dhoka nahi tha bas sach chupaya tha" Kriya speaks.

"Whoa kya explanation hai...hai na?" Swayam said in disgusting.

She knew this would come a day, but today and so soon not has she expected it. And then she heard Rey scolding Sharon, and Swayam is scolding her. In case of bff it was fact as after knowing the truth they would be thinking that she and Sharon have used them and must be sharing the secrets with each other and the secret would being disclose to them, and Krisha also did mistakes sometime telling the secrets to Reyam, and whenever they asked Krisha they used to tell that they have some detective who collect information for them. but in case of Krisha they were trying not to make the opposite team win, so their love could be happy. But today the truth reveals created more problems in their lives. The continuous scolding and abused words for them made her intolerable.

"Stop it... bahut ho gaya...ab aur nahi... Swayam aaj se balki abhi se main tumhari team chod rahi hun"

"Rey ho sake to...mujhe maaf kar dena...main aur tumhare raaste mein kabhi nahi aaungi"

Both sisters left their house, leaving Reyam and the team, Reyam looked each other and then left the place followed by them.

Now Kriya thought her bff didn't support her, but at least her love can support her, at least he will understand why did she hide the truth to her, at least he will forgive her, but she also knows about him, he is not a person to forgive easily, now she has lost her bff and if she will lost her love too then she couldn't take it, she loved him a lot and never want him to leave her, never ever. As the truth of Krisha being sister has come out and a big truth which relates these four with each other has made it more problems to cause and she know Rey will never forgive her.

Precap: kya Rey karega Kriya ko maaf

Ok, so this much for today, more truth is to reveal, so wait for the next update. Give likes and reviews. Thanks a lot to summita and Monika for completing the demand.

With love

Aish.

18/5/14

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
AWSUM update..finally d truth is out..i wanna see ki ab kya hoga..update soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
wow!!!! amazing story yar..
really loved the concept as reyam as enemy as its sooo different...
keep it up..
loved all the part..
now let see how rey vil react towards kriya..
update sooon..
nd thanxxx for d pm..😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update..😊

Reyam step bros..had kind of expected that..

Krisha truth is finally out...bff left will their love stand by..

But really loved it that Sharon stood up for her sis...but shocking was Swayam's anger...really he can slap Krya...no our Kriyam can't fight😭

Badly wanna see Rey's reaction...

moreover wat more truth is to be revealed???

Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Amazing chapter
loved all the tiffs
looking forward to the new chapter.
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohno truth is revealed
Waiting to see whats gonna happen in kriyaansh's life
Thanks for pm
Awesome update
Loved it

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