~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed' - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
this is freaking awsome...

omg just loved it..

pls update it soon..

u have shown everything...sharey and kriyam's friendship..
krisha's bonding...loving it..

the thing which is very much new to me is reyam's dushmani..and i m loving it too..


with lots of love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
amazing update...lovd it...
KriYaansh n SwaRon love each other but cant xpress it...
do write soon...
Edited by reyaditi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awsom updt
dear loved it
all r playing jealousy 2
aiting fr nxt
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
This chappy is filled with JEALOUSY! 😆
Rey was extremely jealous when he saw KriYam enter the canteen hand in hand! 😉
So he banged on the table! Itna pyaar karta hai toh accept kyun nai karta!!!
And seeing him like this Kria was worried to the core! 😉
I loved ShaRey's bond..they define true friendship! 😛
and since krisha are in different dance groups they can even not console each other at some situations!
The precap seems interesting...continue soon and PM me...
The update was short though...but hoping to get a longer one next time!😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing One !!
Loved It ❤️

Jealousy Jealousy takes place everywhere. 😛

Both of them are jealous but are not ready to confess.

So Stubborn.

One ques,Doesn't ReYam Know that KriSha Are Sisters?

Update Soon.
Edited by Cookielicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Mujhe KiYam aur ShaRey ki jo bondng hai na woh mast lagta hai..

such caring..
they all care for each other soo much..
kriya cares for the team..
krisha cares for ReYam..
rey cares for kriya..
sharon cares for kriya..
and everuone there..
nd the best part is tht everyone undrstngs and values ths caring..
Amazng update aishu..
continue soon...
wl be waitng eagrly..
nd ya Do PM me.. 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Chapter 3- Sacch

College schedule that day was so hectic for all of them; their practice goes well, still the jealousy around them, making him burn in anger, whenever he see Kriyam together, he know they are bff but still the insecurity inside him was killing, and the possessive for her is increasing more and more day by day. His possessiveness for her grew more whenever any guy of the college appreciate her, he thinks only he has the right to appreciate her, touch her and love her. But he can't talk with her in the college, because of only his so called ego.

She always tries to break his ego, but it goes all in vain, she knowingly talks with other guy wanting him to react but no, he never do it, and she is also not a girl to loose, she do it more and more and thus it result him to anger. She can see it but felt that all her work going in vain as he is not showing his reaction at all. Thus, she too didn't care about him now, as it will be useless for her, she knows it will be so tough for her, but she has to do it.

He is walking in anger in the corridor when she bumps to him without noticing him to be coming, she is about to slip but he never let her fall, and so he catch her holding her waist in his left hand, she has hold his collar tightly in her fist, closing her eyes. Slowly she opens her eyes and can find his eyes burning with anger having red color. She can't meet his gaze, so she lowers her lashes, he made her stand straight. She knew the anger behind but she wanted it to be, so she didn't ask him anything.

While they were in holding position, Sharon and Swayam came from opposite side, Swayam stand behind kriya and Sharon behind Rey.

"Kriya" swayam spoke.

She sees him and immediately came out of Rey's hold and stand beside him. Rey too looks at him and look away and find Sharon standing near him, she gave him a look of what happened, for which he nodded in nothing. Reyam look at each other glaring and then Kriyam and Sharey goes in opposite direction crossing each other, Rey sees her in his corner of his eyes and Kriya made her not to look at him at all. Swayam sees Sharon but she didn't look him, Swayam keep his arm around Kriya's shoulder and Kriya smiles looking at him, this didn't get unnoticed by Rey and he fumes in anger more.

After college Kriya goes and stand at the road side to take a cab. 2 or 3 cabs deny her to take. A gut wearing a helmet came in a bike and stand before her, she knew who it is. But she didn't want to take the lift, he is continuously moving his accelerator, she gets it better to take the lift, she sits and he drove very fast, she didn't say anything indeed she hold his shoulder tightly, closing her eyes in order to stop herself from falling.

He stop the bike in front of a restaurant, she shocked at first and sees him, he sees her telling her to get sown, without a question she agree and stand, he park his bike and open the helmet. And then keeping the key of his bike in his pocket, he hold her waist, at which she again got a big shock, and he headed with her to the restaurant, entering inside she finds no one, except one rounded table and two chairs kept in the middle of the restaurant, she gave a sigh and looks at him un believing that he is not going to change, she curse her life to be like this and smiled at herself that she felt in love with a egoist man who can never get out of his insecurity.

He made her sit in the chair, she is agreeing as she knows her one negativity action will led to his anger double, but she want this in her inner heart, she wants him to spend some time with her, but she never thought it to be always alone, yes people used to spend their date alone but she is a girl who didn't want it, she want to spend time with him in front of everyone, in front of all people surrounded to them, in this big world, but he never does it.

He called the waiter and order, he is just looking at her, who is trying to avoid him, and it's making him angrier. He is with her to spend some time but she is continuously avoiding his gaze, she is just sitting without uttering a word, where as she is his baatcutter, who used to cut his words in the middle. But today, she is lost somewhere. Perhaps he knows it but he doesn't want to accept it, his ego always overtakes his inner voice.

The order has come and he had also told the waiter to go, anything be needed, he will call them.

"Kriya" he spoke but she didn't react. "kriya" she looks him and then looks away. It's enough for him to react.

"Kriya...tumhari problem kya hai?" he said almost squeezing her hand in which she has got cut few hours ago.

He had almost forgot about it, that she had get cut in her hand, she has control her pain, biting her lip, she made her strong not to escape a tear, let him do what he want. Sometime he gets so angry that he dint notice her feelings, which hurt her more.

He felt something and again like always he misunderstands it.

"oh...maine haath pakda to taklif ho rahi hai...aur Swayam ke saath jab jaa rahi thi tab to bahut khushi ho rahi thi".

She didn't react to it, it's now his habit of blaming her always, he used to spend time with her alone, only and only for his so called reputation. But she never complaint about it, as she knows why this all going on and she didn't want her fianc to get anger because of her, she know he loves her so he burns in jealousy, and she only knows how to cool his mood. She gets up from her chair, goes to him and sit on his lap, forwarding her face to him, she put a soft kiss on his lip and pull back, but he wants her, he wants her to be touch by only him, he get flashes of Swayam touching her and he pulled her more closer to him and kissed her beyond limit, indeed, she too know he needed it, she too respond back, their kiss became passionate, she is making design on his back, whereas he is squeezing her waist and giving her, harsh kiss, she moans in pain which makes him more crazy and he wants more from her. At last due to lack of oxygen, they pulled back. And that's what she sees him smiling and she confirmed herself telling that he is cool now.

She goes and sit in her chair and serve the food, signaling him to eat, but he shows his wounded hand, she gets that he want her to feed him and she does, but in her left hand, he give a weird expression, then remembers about her wound and felt guilty of giving her pain in the same hand.

"kriya" he speaks in a low voice, she looks up. He takes her right hand, caresses it slowly and kissed. She gave a smile to him, he smiled back.

"bahut dard ho raha hai?" he asked lovingly in concern.

"ab nahi ho raha" she said blushing.

He knows what she means, he smiled at her. Though he is so possessive for her, but he knows she loves him a lot, but this enmity of him and Swayam making them to stay away and he didn't want to disclose her as his fianc as it will be more trouble for her only, so he used to spend time with her alone only, he know she must be feeling upset because of it, but he has no option with him, he need to hide their relationship, if not then, she may face trouble.

"Kriya...tum Swayam se thoda dur raho"

This made her shock again, how he could even think of that, Swayam is her bff, he was always there for her.

"Rey...ye tum...k-kya..."

"kriya main nahi chahti ki tumhari aur uski najdik..." Cut by her.

"Bas Rey... bahut ho gaya...main tabse apko saant karne ki koshis mein hun aur aap..."

She gets up and left the place storming, he again beat his hand on the table.

Sharon is waiting for Kriya in house, so they can take their snacks. At one side she is angry on Swayam and other side her sis has not yet reached home. The bell rang; she gets up from couch and goes to open the door.

"pata hai main kitni deir se intezaar kar rahi thi" she said while opening and got shock.

"kiska intezaar kar rahi thi?" he asked in confusion.

"ki-kisi-kisika...bhi-na-nahi..." she said stammering at the sudden arrival of Swayam.

He enters inside, and sits in the couch relaxing him, she looks at him in anger, he sees her and smiles, and in return he gets a glare. She is standing keeping her hand on her hip, he looks at her and gulps, he was about to speak when she burst out. He couldn't stop her so, pulled her in a kiss, she didn't react to it, but response later, after sometime they pulled back, he made her sit beside him in the couch and stroke her hair, he has no option left, he know how she reacts in silly things, and this was a big matter, they are both married but still living like unknowns, he remembers today also when he told her they should live apart from each other, so that no one can harm her, he didn't like Rey to be around her but can't say anything, he can't say that only he has rights on her.

"kyun aye ho tum?...jante ho yahan sab kaisi kaisibateein karte hain?"

"Janta hun Sharon...par meri bhi to majburi..."

She looked him, and gets up from the couch

"apni galti ko majburi ka naam mat do Swayam"

"Par...Sharon...meri...ko-koi galati..."

He didn't complete his sentence and storm out of the house, driving his car, and she like a statue stands, crossing her hand on her chest. She didn't wanted to say it, but she is frustrated of these all, and she is out of control now a day, she never wants to hurt him, but her slip of tongue is a bad habit for her.

He knows she didn't said it intentionally but she is too right, how much she missed him, only she knows it, even he didn't knows how much she miss. He too misses her a lot, but she is angry on him, only because of his one mistake. That mistake made their life to face these.

Kriya returns and find Sharon sitting in the couch pouting, she smiled and gets that must be she fought with Swayam. She goes and sit near her and tap her shoulder, Sharon looks at her.

"aaj kya hua?" Kriya asked.

"wo yahan aya tha?"

"Kya?" kriya stands in shock. "tu janti hai na..."

"haan Kriya janti hun par mein..."

"agli baar tu darwaza nahi kholegi...agar unhe jara sib hi bhanak lag gayi ke hum dono behen hain to janti hain na kya hoga?"

"hmm...janti hun...aisa dobara nahi hoga."

Both of them sit for a while and then taking their dinner they went to sleep. They don't want to disclose their respective partners and bff about their relation to be sis; else it may create a lot of problems in their life, especially in KRIYAANSH life.

Precap: kya hoga jab Reyam ko pata chalega Krisha ke bare mein.

This much for today. Hope all of you like it, and thanks to everyone, sorry kisiko individual reply nahi de paa rahi hun. Thanks a lot once again. Give reviews for the above update. Cookie hope you got your answer. sorry for typos. i want my next update to be in page 11.

Thank you.😊

With love

Aish

21/4/14

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Aishu teri story roz interesting turn le rhi hai jo mujhe bht pasnd aa raha hai..

so much of twists and turns my God!
tu na brilliant hai..
na baapre..rey ka gussa..kitna gussa krta hai bechari kriya ke upar..
sudhar ja rey..i lovd tht ReYam glaring..
And the Passionate kisss... aishu..marne ka plan hai kya hum e... 😳😳
awesome update re.. 👏👏
Continue soon..
nd PM me.. 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
amazinggg updateee👏
both KR and SS parts wer niceee😳
and precap s interestingg😊
continue soonish⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written..i luvd possessive rey..luvd each n every part of dupdate..too gud..update soon

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