||TR OS: Rockstar and his Pankhaas||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola TaaReyians :D

Sowwie for writing this stupid OS.I just wanted to write something and then this idea came into my mind.plz bear with me this time.
This OS is for Vini di,Buggie di and Ridzy.Thanks for being with me always.Love you guys :*





||Rockstar and his Pankhaas||



Taani was standing there outside the Disc with her friends.Her one late-lateef friend was again late like always.

Vini:"I'll kill that girl.She always ruins our mood and plans"

Vini cried as they all waiting for her from past 20 minutes but her-highness was not at all ready to show up anywhere.
Vini was looking beautiful dressed in a beautiful navy blue dress with golden pumps and golden studs in her ears.

Ridzy:"Let's leave her outside.Then she'll learn to come on time"

Ridzy said angrily.It was not in her hands.She was always the non-patient one.Dressed in a beautiful black skirt-top and brown jacket she was catching eyes of many pass-by'rs.

Then a girl a came running holding her sandals in her hands.She was dressed in a faded yellow colored frock.

Taani:"Ravee,you are late again"

She said as Ravee came there trying to catch her breadth.

Ravee:"You won't believe what I saw today"

She created suspense dramatically.And then when everyone raised their eyebrows to question she screamed loudly.

Ravee:" Rockstar.I saw him entering in Disc.He even smiled at me.Eeessshhh I'm totally dead today.I can't believe the Reyaansh Singhania passed me smile"

She completed keeping a hand on her heart and falling on Taani.

Taani:"What?What is he doing here?"

She screamed as Ravee completed.

Buggie:"Oh Taani tu to rehne hi de.We all know you are allergic to The Rockstar.But plz don't ruin our chance."

She said smacking Taani's shoulder and pushing her aside.

Vini:"Yes.Today,No one can stop us from meeting Our Rockstar"

She said with a dreamy look on her face.And imagining herself dancing with rockstar.

Ridzy:"And if anyone tried to stop us then I'll break his teeth"

~
Security Guy:"Mam you can't go inside"

Security guy stopped the five girls who were screaming to enter inside the disc.

Ravee:"You were planning something na.Now go and break his teeth"

Ravee whispered in Ridzy's ears irritating her more.

Buggie:"Sir,please its very important for us to meet Rockstar"

She said giving them puppy looks.

SG:Mam all passes are already sold.You can't enter inside here.Rockstar is performing here today"

He explained patiently the stubborn girls.

But then Rockstar's one of the bodyguard came from inside and whispered something in SG's ear.

SG:"Sorry Mam.You can enter inside"

He apologized for the inconvenience and then gave them way to enter.

They all entered inside with big smile plastered on their faces except Taani.There was a irritating look on her face.

Ravee:"Dekha,first rockstar passed me smile and now he is allowing us inside just because of me.He is tho totally smitten by my beauty"

She said proudly entering inside.Everyone rolled their eyes on her comment.But Taani was fuming on her comment.

Vini:"Ravee,Rockstar is not blind to be smitten by you.Apni building ka guard bhi tujhe ghaas nahi daalta.So,just forget about Rockstar"

Vini said teasing Ravee.Ravee pouted cutely in fake anger.

Buggie:"Awww.Don't tease my Nonu.One day she'll surely get her Prince charming"

She said side hugging Ravee.

Ravee:"Aur nahi tho kya.That old guard is good for nothing.Here ki parakh jauhri ko hi hoti h.My Rockstar knows how beautiful I am"

She replied in a dreamy look.Everyone continued their arguments till they reached near dance floor where Rockstar was standing with a guitar.

Vini:"He is so hawwwttt"

She said fanning her face with one hand.

Buggie:"He looks so Sexy with Guitar"

She said in her dreamy state.

Ridzy:"I will tho even die for him.And when he gets shirtless.OMG,I am in love finally"

She said all ready to eat him alive if get any chance.

Ravee:"You tho fall in love every week.But I am truly,wholly,definately in love with him"

Then there was a pin drop silence as he started playing his guitar.

Everybody...
This is my story
This is what I feel everyday.. So lonely!

He said in his manly husky voice.And every girl present there ooh-ahh'ed.

In my city, I am alone
Main hi na janoon
Ke main hoon kaun
I love you lady, please be mine
Jo haan tu kar de
Then I'll be fine

He started singing and everyone again got silent.He sang beautifully in his mind-blowing voice.The way he patted his feet while singing,shrugged his shoulders,raised his eyebrows on each and every gesture girls hooted and very totally mad by his small gestures and his voice.

In my city (city)
I am alone (alone)
Main hi na jaanun (jaanun)
Ke main hoon kaun (kaun)

He gave his guitar to someone who was playing music instrument behind and then started dancing.
He forwarded his hand in front of Vini and pulled her on stage to dance.She was all ready to faint in his arms due to shock but then controlled herself.He twisted and turned her for some seconds and then took Buggie's hand and danced with her for some seconds.They both were on cloud nine when they got down from floor.
Ravee and ridzy were pouting angrily when Rockstar didn't pulled them for dance but they were happy for their friends.

I love you lady (lady)
Please be mine (mine)
Jo haan tu kar de (kar de)
Then I'll be fine (fine...)

They both were still sulking on the fact that he didn't danced with them ut then he came and bent on his knees in front of them.He pulled them both together for dance and then twisted them gracefully with both his hands.

Din ho chaahe raat ho
Rahe yeh bas aashiqui ka maara
Hai apna dil to awara

He jumped from floor in between the girls in front of Taani.She made a face when he said 'hai apna dil to awara' keeping a hand on his heart and then flying it towards all the girls.

Baaton baaton mein woh kya baat ho gayi
Ajnabi si khalbali saath ho gayi
Dil ki jeet par meri maat ho gayi, maat ho gayi
Lab khule nahi magar aankhon se yeh kar gaya ishaara
Hai apna dil to aawara

He started going away from there and he followed her singing behind.She was passing aside from some couch when he jumped around from it and came in front of her.She lost her balance but he held her waist and pulled her.They both looked in each others eyes.
But she then pushed him aside and went away.He blushed and ruffled his hair <hai apna dil to awara> with one hand.

Din ho chaahe raat ho
Rahe yeh bas aashiqui ka maara
Hai apna dil to awaara

She turned around to look at him but he winked at her and then again started dancing with her friends and other girls.

~Music~

She was sitting there on bar sipping her drink when he went there with other girls.


Mausam aaj toh bada beqarar hai

He pulled Vini and turned her once and then let go of her.

Aise mein mujhe tera intezar hai

Then did the same move with Buggie right in front of Taani's eyes.

Kar le ishqbaziyan din hi chaar hai
Then did a dip with Ravee and Taani fumed.

Din hi chaar hai

Then pulled Ridzy and twisted her with his finger.

Khoya khoya rehta hai
Teri hi beqaraari mein bichara
Hai apna dil to awara



Taani started going away from there but then he pulled her and held her waist tightly.She tried to wriggle out from his grip but he kept holding her tightly.

Din ho chaahe raat ho
Rahe yeh bas aashiqui ka maara
Hai apna dil toh aawara

He twisted her on his hand and then dipped her down.

Hai apna dil to awaara

Bending down he placed a peck near her lips and then pulling her up left her hand and went away from there.

~

Ridzy:"He kissed you<sob> Hum sab marr gaye the kya? <sob> You are not even his fan<sob> Why did he kissed you"

Ridzy was crying dramatically sitting near car.

Ravee:"<sob> He passed me smile but kissed you<sob> Dhokhbaaz<sob> I hate him<sob> I hate you Taani<sob>"

Ravee and ridzy were crying sitting in parking lot and Vini,buggie and Taani were trying to control them.

Vini:"Its okay Ravee.Its his choice whom he wanted to kiss.But why Taani? Mujhe bhi to kiss kar sakta tha."

She said in a hurtful look.Buggie slapped her forhead.

Buggie:"Tum sabka kuch nahi ho sakta.Nonu,Riddhi c'mon get up.We are getting late now"

~

She opened her apartment door with key and entered inside.Keeping her clutch on side table she move forward to switch on the lights.

But as she was about to switch on the lights someone held her waist from behind.She was about to scream but a hand covered her mouth.

Rey:"Its me"

He said and when he knew she won't scream he pulled off his hand.

Taani:"What the hell are you doing here?"

She pushed him away from her.

Rey:"I am in my girlfriend's apartment to love her ofcorce Or do you want full discription that what I've planned to do with you"

He said smirking and pulled her from her waist.Her heaving chest touched his toned one.

Taani:"And what about your 'Awaara dil'? You tho go and flirt with all girls.Why are you here with me.Go and flirt with my BFF's"

She said pushing him away and pouting.He bit his lip and then pulled her again.

Rey:"Sowwie Baby.They are my hone wali aadhi ghar wali's.Itna to hak banta hai na"

He said giving her puppy looks.

Taani:"I hate you"

She said taking his lips in a kiss.

Rey:"But I love you"

He said and then again slammed his lips on hers.

~

Taani




Vini di



Buggie di



Ridzy



Ravee(me)





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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳 muhaah!!!!!! nonu awesome os , u kno ;!!!! I was also in it lov u 4 this awesomely written surprise , I can't even tell u hw happy I m as nobody written something 4 me , n the dress u gav me is nice pr kya hai na ki usme fit hone ke liya I hav to lose , little , u kno na m big food lover , n yes u made rockstar dance wth me ohhh!!!! Thanku Thanku! !!! n yes m like that ,,,,, ki slammed my palm on my forehead n say to my frnds ki tum logo ka kych nahi ho sakta , love u nonu 4 this awesome gift ,,, vaise nonu kya mila u r looking sooo, happy wanna kno , tell me fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I LOVE U SOOO MUCH TITLI.
I never thought that this awesome would be my surprise. I just cant express my feeling. I m sooo happy.
I just Loved it so so so much.It was sweet and funny ad loving but still Its beyond words.
Thx u so much sweetheart

I loved the outfits i made a mental note that in my shopping i will definitely buy something like u selected for me. I think i will not look that bad in that 😉
I literally had goosebumps when i read rey pulled me to that dance floor. I was blushing all thx to u.
I loved the bonding between us. I was having fun the way i was teasing u.
I loved dialogue were i said society ka watchmen bhi tuje gaas nqhi dalta. Seriously that showed how bonded we r. I can tease u any way u will not it on heart its all fun.
Buggie was the bit mature one i think. Ritizy and u were the crazy one. All the character were lovely.

The after effect of kiss to taani on us was superb. I liked my words after that mujhe bhi toh kar sakta tha.
Had hai yaar acha moka haath se chala gaya. Chill we will get our PC soon.

And the end was superb rey in taani apt. They were bf-gf and we the bff were not even aware of it. How rude...
At least i m happy like rey said saali adhi gharwali hoti hai 😆 😆 😉

Once again thx u.
Love ya
Vini di
Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ravzy baby u know wht I luv it its my 1st ever os with taarey n u hav not left any single chance
To show tht I am besharam dabang drama queen n yeah I am like tht but atleast infornt of rockstar
You shld hav shown me some wht good but I luv ohkk yeah I don't like to wait n n yes I luv to teach u
By leaning u alone outside 😛 but thn u com finally 😲 rockstar smile at u 😡 cheating hai yaar
I hate tht n uff just imagine rey shirtless haaye 😳 main mar Gaye but tune nahi diya rey ko shirtless
😔 vry bad chalo finally we are inside disco I luv my dress but I would be happy in more small dress like
Small skirt n crop top n jacket just imagine btw I luv tht attention tht I was getting from ppl outside disco
😳 after all I luv it 😊 haaye rockstar singing dancing n haaye rockstar dance with me 😳 I just luv tht
Thn he went near taani n tht kiss I am happy but atleast I shld hav got one tight hug 😭 katti Katti n u r awsm amazing taarey are couple haaye I must say jiju mast hot sexy handsome cool hai look like I am going to hav fun with jiju but taarey kiss was not so gud 😡 bad at tht but happy n I was laughing reading it u hav show me as mast diff I like it luv u baby world tight kisses muahaa Hughes \^_^/ to u n plzz keep giving me surprise like only n make sure nxt time I wear something really small plzz n do read more os like this on me plzzz thanks for PM n os u r best u make my day aaj tho main mast khush hu dancing with rockstar haaye (in dreamland) luv u baby muahaa Hughes god bless u always 😳
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os...
starting se then ending lovelt described ..love it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow :)
Awesome :)
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Rocking :)
Mind blowing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsm os
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it gal 👏
Ravee late uff
She saw rockstar
The song sequence 👏
TaaRey are in a relationship 😲
The kiss ☺️
Lovely dresses 👍🏼
Loved it dear 😳
Great job 👏
Keep writing and stay blessed 😳
Much love: Ale ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsme update.. All the gals lattu on rey bt nt taani.. Rey kissed taani sabke samne.. Nd luved tr aparment scene.. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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os tho wonderful he...
starring tho my buddies along with taarey!!
cool dresses!
fab work 👏

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