SwaRon OS: If I knew.. - Page 4

Another amazing Os by u on current track... 😃

Beautifully penned down...

Emotions perfectly defined...

Asthama part was nicely portrayed...I hate dt Ruhi...

Love KR part also...der concern for swaron was nicely penned down...

And ending was simply perfect...

Just loved d Os...

Keep writing more on current track...

That was amazing :)

Hey Tanvish di
I m reading ur work after so long
Actually had my exams
So sorry for the late reply
The was asusual awesome
I love ur work I always mention the fact
Ki can relate to ur work
Kriya rey work was gr8
Sharon aasthma attack at the ryt tym
Opened swayam's eyes
I really want one aasthma attack that to in front of
Swayam so that the lover boy in him wakes up
In all gud work
Nancy

Beautifully written thankx 4 d PM

excellent!!! .. it was swaronish ..actually saare hi hte hai!!!bt yes i loved it plzzz write more on current track .i wld love to read it..

Amazing job dear,Seriously amazingly done from begining to end..Though i couldnt able to follow D3 from past some ages So obviously didnt know what exactly going on show,But after read i felt such gud read,The concept was trully beautifull and way to too sweet..As vaishu is such a sweetipie..It was like pure romantic having such gud spices to make attention between the peoples who really adore swaron..I dont know much about ruhi's character but i literally felt she is villian here..ANyways i like ur way to show such caring and intense side of sharon rai prakash,I just loved her intenisty..In between mid of that,I like thats picture where u shown some gud heights of friendship and trust..Kriyam was gud catalyst here..And last,loved the confession,Happy realization from swayam's side..Finally MU got ended and confession took place only to make their love more strong..So honestly it was such a sweet write up..I just loved it and infact i also like ur all works..Though i couldnt able to reply u back on ur all all possible works due to my inactiveness,But whenever i get time,i surly come here and do my feedback..SO all i can say just keep writing..ohk

And yeah Thanx for PM


Prateek

super cool os yar.. finally swaron are back together.. happy happy... thanks 4 d pm..

such a beautiful os!!

Nice os.
Beautifully written. Luvd it alot.
Gud job.