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amazingg story as always tannu 🤗
the concept story line everything was perfectly in sync
i dont understand how you come up wit new ways of
emotional confession all the tym
by now you hav to accept tis tat giving emotional confessions
tat too beautifully making it more magical n heart-touching
is ur forte becoz as a writer you write wat a character
deals wit giving a host of emotions in ur story
which definitely requires a lot of creativity frm ur end
anothr thing tat i noticed
in ur flawless writing is ur use of descriptive words
that evoke deeper feelings for the characters and their plights
making ur readers root for your characters
as they get through those obstacles.
coming to ur os
the way you projected sharon
n her feelings were beautifully penned
the short portions which you added
whr we see a struggling sharon
n how deeply she is affected by ruhi
becoz for the immense love n care
she has for swayam was vey well penned
the kr convo in bwetween was a bliss to read
anothr thing which was interesting to read was
swayam's side n his realisation regarding ruhi
n his love for sharon
i think the asthma attack was very intelligently used
which the script writers hav forgotten
these days
the swaron emotional breakdown n confession was
beautiful
all in all a very well formed pleasing read
do write more n if i dont get an update
in next few days f
you are so gonna be in trouble for tat 😉
Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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