QH OS: Home Sweet Home

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am not mad... I am stating this because, after reading this you people will definitely think I am mad... This OS is consequence of my stupidity and craziness...
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Khan Villa is built with bricks of love and plastered with happiness... Every corner is decorated by Dilshad taking out her own time... It has memories of family, giggles of children, and foot-prints of time spent together... Smiles on lips are clicked by walls, Resounding laughs, Fights, Patch-ups and Tears...

Khan Villa is hard-work of Asad Ahmed Khan... Khan Villa is gift to his Ammi and Tamatar... Asad met his love, Zoya... He fought with her, cried with her, Became Bond with her and loved her... These memories made house to home... There un-breakable relations made it Sweet Home...

They love their house and House love them back... After unfortunate happenings Dilshad sold their Love Home to her brother... Dilshad has no choice; She left home with tears after her son, daughter-in-law and daughter's death... House cried back... They wanted to stop those unfortunate happenings, but they couldn't... Walls cried and furniture moaned...

Dilshad was back to Khan Villa with Asad and Zoya's daughter Sanam and Najma's daughter Haya... Munisa, her brother's daughter is living there... She unwantedly invited them and let them stay... Dilshad was filled beyond happiness and with brimming tears...

Khan Villa is happier than them... Furniture started jumping, curtains flowed, AC released fresh breeze and lamps light more bright... Taps flowed water of happiness, bowls and plates danced; Spoons and glasses made music and Cooker whistled ... Walls laughed in happiness... They were happy getting back there lovely owners... They became angry seeing Munisa's behavior towards them... Khan Villa decided to kick Munisa out of house...

Furniture, curtains, Lamps, AC, Taps, Bowls, Plates, Spoons, Cooker, walls conspired against Munisa...

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Munisa was bounced down her bed... She jerked out her sleep not understanding what happened... She sat back on bed but fell down as if some-one pushed her...

"Yeh kya ho raha hai...??" She rubbed her back...

Jug was empty so she walked to kitchen to get some water... She tried switching on lights, they flickered... They didn't get on... She slowly walked into kitchen... She tried to open fridge door, but it didn't get open... She walked to dining table, water was full in jug but when she thought of drinking it became empty...

"Yaha ho kya raha hai...??? Bhoot wooth toh nahi hai..." Munisa started shivering with fear...

Her throat became dry... She has no other choice, so she walked to tap for drinking water... She opened tap but there is no flow of water... She bent her head and placed under tap to see... There was sudden flow of water... She is drenched... She stood in shock... She opened tap but there is no flow of water... She rolled her eyes as she felt creepy... She walked to living room but fell down hitting something...

Furniture started moving... Water started flowing out of taps... Glasses, Bowls, Spoon and plates started making Sound... Lights flickered... Window doors beating them...

"Get Out of this house..." They screamed... It was scary... Door got opened itself giving her way to go out... They continued to scream until she ran out... They clapped succeeding machine...

Next day morning, when Sanam, Dilshad and Haya got up house was empty and calm... They found note in the living room...

Mein aapke ghar aapko chod kar jaa rahi hoon... Mere bartav ke liye maaf kar dijiye...

Munisa

Khan Villa had a silent party retaining there lovely owners...

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Heaven:

"Jitna hum apne ghar ko pyaar karte hai, woh bhi humse utna hi pyaar karta hai..." Zoya said, placing her head on Asad shoulders...

"Abb waha sabb kush rahenge..." Asad said holding her hand...

They were happy looking down from heaven...

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Thanks for reading... Please do like and comment...

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P.s: Sorry for this Bakwass...!!! Mann mein jo aaya, likh diya... Hope you don't mind... If you mind, then here is Babji Ka tullu...😆

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago

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KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resu
unreshwa

wow
its one of the funniest n yes maddest thing i read
it made me remember beauty n the beast!
though it was nt a bit same bt the furniture talking n all made me remember it
it was indeed cute u knw!
even i hate that lady, the munisa
kesi shakle bana rahi thi
i was actually laughing n doing awwie!
the way the furniture haunted her
so cute
very good kv i liked it
it was so cute
lovely os
oww i loved the last talking at heaven one'
it was super cute ff
at the part wen munisa leaves i remembered bhootnaths scene in the song banku bhaiya
well it was super adorable
loved it
no no babaji ka thulu bt tali!
amazing
cute one
splenedid
loved it alot didu!
amazing
awesome
plz do write more

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
oh yesh yesh me first!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
such a crazy os
bt i liked it
thanks for this os
Alone111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Neek rest avsaram ra
Exams inka vunnaya
Jpsa kavali
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...
That was a very pyaari story

Well Issi baat pe ek shehr ars hai

Munisa ko dilshad, sanam aur haya pasand nahi thi and she wanted to throw them out of the house
Munisa ko dilshad, sanam aur baya pasand nahi thi and she wanted to throw them out of the house
Aakhir mein kya hua munisa ran away cause she to scared like a small darpok mouse

Shukriya shukriya ( vaise shut hi bakwaas tha I know )
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a craziest story...
But I love it...
It was really nice...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Aww...

That was a very pyaari story

Well Issi baat pe ek shehr ars hai

Munisa ko dilshad, sanam aur haya pasand nahi thi and she wanted to throw them out of the house
Munisa ko dilshad, sanam aur baya pasand nahi thi and she wanted to throw them out of the house
Aakhir mein kya hua munisa ran away cause she to scared like a small darpok mouse

Shukriya shukriya ( vaise shut hi bakwaas tha I know )



That was so good...
Just like Zoya's shayari...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Neek rest avsaram ra
Exams inka vunnaya
Jpsa kavali



Exams unnai...
JPSA will be soon given..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhi1206

resu
unreshwa

wow
its one of the funniest n yes maddest thing i read
it made me remember beauty n the beast!
though it was nt a bit same bt the furniture talking n all made me remember it
it was indeed cute u knw!
even i hate that lady, the munisa
kesi shakle bana rahi thi
i was actually laughing n doing awwie!
the way the furniture haunted her
so cute
very good kv i liked it
it was so cute
lovely os
oww i loved the last talking at heaven one'
it was super cute ff
at the part wen munisa leaves i remembered bhootnaths scene in the song banku bhaiya
well it was super adorable
loved it
no no babaji ka thulu bt tali!
amazing
cute one
splenedid
loved it alot didu!
amazing
awesome
plz do write more


i really had no idea about these many similarities...

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