Amour Immortel Swaron OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: fanista

really beautiful , you should have submitted it !

Thank you😃😃
I was going to submit it but a week before the submission date my laptop charger bailed on me and performed suicide and short circuited itself but thank you anyways😃😃

sorry for this late comment harshu---but i had gone home--and without my lappy.

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

sorry for this late comment harshu---but i had gone home--and without my lappy.

anyway---this was superbly written--but the end with vicky's comments jarred the note a bit---maybe u should have just ended with the lovers parting----and left the rest to the reader's imagination.

i love it---and its ur writing----just a reader's opinion who loves reading your pieces...and as ur dii.

btw---why didn't u submit? it would be real cool if u had won.

did you read my entry?

do tell me how it was i wanna know--really, although according to the votes i did "touch hearts" as the competition results said.

as a writer i value honest feedbacks dii and i am so glad u mentioned what u felt and i totally respect it although i do have a reason for that convo part i wanted writers to know how swayam is strong and so confident of his love and relationship with sharon and no matter if some people call him lunatic he wants all of them to know how imp his sharon is and he fights because when someone insults their meetings he feels as if they are insulting his or sharon's love strength and thats the onlx thing he can't bear... I hope i was able to make myself clear there.. Oh and as for ur entry i will read it and respond after exams pakka promise... Thank u for the honest review dii love you lots 🤗

Awww harshu it beautiful